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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

She is special u see. All this is for her only. So took some time

Tu na best hai!
😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: orion23

Tu na best hai!
😃

That I m 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Unresed on Pg 1 😛
@Zo that gif is so cute ❤️❤️
Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
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Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unres

Resh meri jaan 🤗
Late ane ke liye sowieee

Arey tujhe sab maaf 😳 Waise v late hone k liye mera naaraz hona bnta v nhi🤣
Arey ! Humare abhimanyu ne akhir baat maan hi li humari 😆
Zo and mai dhanya hue 😆
Hona v chahiye. Kya chakraviu racha tum logo ne 😆
Now the poem ...
Thank God ! Sirf hands chahiye type karne ko , cause zubaan toh, kabhi Zo kabhi Tu le lete ..
You literally made me speechless !!!

Bahot bahot bahot ...N mast likha tune !!!!!

Jaan lele tu toh. I love u 🤗
I really felt bad for sumo ...jo rarely hota 😆

Soch mera kya haal hua hai. I had to feel bad for her

From the response you're getting I hope you know you're awesome 😎..So never ever stop writing .
Main TRY krungi 🤣 Mera try toh pta hai teko😆🥱
And did I tell you how much I love you?



I love u more 🤗
Abhi aur likhegi na ?
Ek ka toh promise kr chuki😆

Poem ke intezar me ,



Tumhara @mehboob

Aww!!! This is so cute
Aapki @Afsana 😳
PS.-Zo Banner Ek number !!
Hain na!

@bold. Pri I love u 🤗
Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Resh? 😲 No pm?
Kya likhti hai yaar! You are an amazing poet girl!! ! 👏 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: --Elara--

Resh? 😲 No pm?
Kya likhti hai yaar! You are an amazing poet girl!! ! 👏 👏

Ji main hi hoon. Kisi ko pm nhi kia. Mere dimaag mein aaya nhi k pm v kr na hai. Also all are busy. Aur Itna khaas v nhi tha.
Anyways thanks for the appreciation 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Perpetuity


Ji main hi hoon. Kisi ko pm nhi kia. Mere dimaag mein aaya nhi k pm v kr na hai. Also all are busy. Aur Itna khaas v nhi tha.
Anyways thanks for the appreciation😊


Arey tujhe dekh ke shocked nahi hui main. Ye dekh ke shocked thi ki tune poem likha aur bataya bhi nahi. 😛
And its really very good! Short but crisp and strikes a chord somewhere. 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Awww so beautiful dear...so love it!



Love,
Spandana

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