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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heya folks! U all doing fine? Ok so I have written a poem because I lost a bet to Zoyi. It's from Sumo's pov. It's about the time she had to choose Aditya over Shravan and how even Aditya tore her apart. How she felt after that. Enough said. The beauty of a poem lies in the fact that each person can interpret it differently. So rest is yours to say. Hope you guys will like it

Zoyi and Pri my darling shakunis, I dedicate this to u guys coz u literally tricked me into writing this. But I love u guys 🤗

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Banner Credit: Zoyi 😳



Enveloped in darkness she stayed too long,
Tears were her companion all along.

Her soul was squeezed to death,
A high price for trusting she lent.

Her laughter that once echoed from her heart,
Are now mere sounds of a doll distraught.

The colours that once made her smile,
Reminds her now of the painful aisle.

Darkness she didn't choose in vain,
It was a way to reduce the pain.

A way she was forced to choose,
Her existence in the world bemused.


So that's it. Would love to know how did u find it 😳
Do let me know.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kya Likhte ho aap!
Whoa!
As if it wasn't shocking enough that you posted a poem, you put me into emotional coma...
What a piece buddy 👏
Kya papad belne pade to get you to loose this bet 😆
Prii mission accomplished 😎
But mehnat wasool!

This is just the best!
Simple yet deep,
Short yet poignant.

Resh I never want you to stop writing ever again!
Bets or no bets, you write just like you are, beautiful!
Please don't keep us away from such brilliant pieces!



I love you ya!
😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res
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Unres

Resh meri jaan 🤗
Late ane ke liye sowieee
Arey ! Humare abhimanyu ne akhir baat maan hi li humari 😆
Zo and mai dhanya hue 😆
Now the poem ...
Thank God ! Sirf hands chahiye type karne ko , cause zubaan toh, kabhi Zo kabhi Tu le lete ..
You literally made me speechless !!!

Bahot bahot bahot ...N mast likha tune !!!!!
I really felt bad for sumo ...jo rarely hota 😆

From the response you're getting I hope you know you're awesome 😎..So never ever stop writing .
And did I tell you how much I love you?



Abhi aur likhegi na ?

Poem ke intezar me ,



Tumhara @mehboob

PS.-Zo Banner Ek number !!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow..!👏
I wish they keep tricking you more often..!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Wow..!👏

I wish they keep tricking you more often..!😉

Thanks dear 😊
And no they can't trick me again 😛
Once bitten, twice shy.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Thanks dear 😊

And no they can't trick me again 😛
Once bitten, twice shy.

Well..!!😳 You never know! !😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Well..!!😳 You never know! !😆

LOL! This time I do know 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its so beautiful Di...!!!
Short and sweet and poured with emotions...!!!
Plz do write often...!!!
Loved it...❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh My.
I loved it.

so beautifully penned ❤️

Please keep losing bets to Resh & Zoya.😆

The results are awesome when you lose. And i would love to see you getting tricked again and again. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks swtie 😳

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