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Reminder: Its a Hindu background story but cab't change the names of some main characters due to Mods issues.


Part 1

London 2011

A family of a middle-aged couple and their 3 grown up children were having breakfast. They were Farooquis who owned a chain of hotels. Anwar and Zeenat were the couple while their children were Zoya, Imraan and Humeira. They were North Indian from Uttar Pradesh who shifted to Mumbai after their marriage. They moved to London when Zoya was 11, Imraan was 9 and Humeira was 8. After 10 years, they decided to move back to their own country and old house. Since the family lived in Mumbai for several years they could speak Marathi too along with Hindi, English and their native language Bhojpuri.

"We have our flight tomorrow night," said Anwar.

"Dad, why should we go to India?" asked Zoya.

"Because we already decided to return someday. Don't worry, it will be Mumbai not any small town or village so your lifestyle will hardly change," replied Anwar.

"Fine," said Zoya.

"There you girls can wear short clothes most of the months of the year as it will not be so cold throughout the year but for only 2-3 months," joked Imraan.

"Looks like you are excited out of us 3 siblings to go to India," said Humeira.

"Not much but I don't think Mumbai will be bad," said Imraan.

"Lets see," said Zoya.

"My paternal cousin Razzak, his wife Gazzala and their children Ajay(alternative name of Azhar to suit a Hindu character) and Tanushree(Tanveer's alternate name) are also returning to Mumbai but they will be different flight," said Zeenat.

"Thank God otherwise we had to tolerate them in flight also when already we have to tolerate them in Mumbai also," said Humeira sighing in relief.

"Don't pay attention to them," said Anwar.

"Sure," said Humeira.

The children as well as their parents did not liked them but had to tolerate them in functions and parties. Ajay joined the family business 2 years ago while Tanushree passed BA this year. Ajay was 2 years older to Tanushree, who is of the same age as Zoya. Zoya and Tanushree studied in the same class in school but mot in the same college as Zoya opted for Commerce while Tanushree opted for Arts. Since Ajay too did commerce, Zoya opted for another college as she did not wanted to be in the same college as Ajay who would be in his final year when she would join the college. Unlike Zoya, Ajay did not done MBA but joined business after graduation. Ajay got married a month ago in an arranged marriage to one of their father's friends daughter Aseema(alternative name of Aseema) who is also Tanushree's best friend from college. Aseema is a homemaker.

After breakfast, the Farooqui siblings wore their coats to protect from cold and went on a long drive in Zoya's car with each sibling taking turns to drive.

"We have only a week for fun. After that, you both will join graduation college and I will join MBA college," said Zoya who was driving the car.

"We know but till then we can enjoy na," said Humeira.

"Hope we get some nice friends in Mumbai," said Imraan.

2 days later

Mumbai 2011

Another family of a middle-aged couple and their 3 grown up children were relaxing in the garden of their house after breakfast. They were Khans who too like Farooquis owned a chain of hotels. The family consisted of Rashid and Dilshad Ahmed Khan with their children Asad, Najma and Ayaan. They were North Indian from Uttar Pradesh who shifted to Mumbai after their marriage. They earlier lived in another house before shifting to this house just 2 months ago. As they live in Mumbai they could speak Marathi too along with Hindi, English and their native language Bhojpuri. They saw a car parked on the driveway of the neighbouring house. A family came out who were none other than Farooquis. Zoya and Humeira were dressed in top with torn jeans while Imraan was dressed in casual vest and shorts. Dilshad and Rashid knew about them due to some business deals with them but they never saw their children. But Khan siblings did not knew them at all.

"Mom, who are they?" asked Najma.

"They are our new neighbours. They are Farooqui family of Farooqui Group Of Hotels from London who settled in India," replied Dilshad.

"Interesting," said Asad, "May be we can become friends."

"We are invited for a house warming party at their house," said Rashid.

"They invited us some time ago through phone call," said Dilshad.

"That's so great," said Ayaan.

In the evening, Khans came to Farooquis party. Farooquis daughters Zoya and Humeira were dressed in short designer dresses. Najma too was dressed in a short designer dress. Razzak and Gazalla came with their Ajay and Tanushree. Tanushree was talking with her best friend cum sister-in-law Aseema and maternal cousin Nisha(Nisha Nagpal) who was of Humeira's age. Unlike Farooqui girls and Najma, they wore traditional salwar kameezes. Zoya and Humeira shared annoyed looks on seeing them. They did not liked them because they were always compared with them by their extended relatives and some family friends who thought they are better than them just because they are traditional unlike them who are modern. They went to a corner table in annoyance and started drinking. Khans entered the party. Rashid and Dilshad started talking with Anwar and Zeenat. Khan siblings saw Farooqui siblings drinking at a corner table away from most of the guests including their family and relatives. They went near them.

"Its your family party but you guys are here away from everyone," said Ayaan.

"We don't want to join others and get bored with the praises of our cousin and her friend for being so much sanskaari and how we should learn from them. So we siblings came here to be away from them," said Zoya rolling her eyes.

"Oh we understand," said Asad.

"Can we join you guys for drinks?" asked Najma.

"Sure," replied Humeira.

"We did not even introduced ourselves," said Imraan.

"We saw you guys in the morning and our parents told us about you are Farooqui family but we don't know your names. We live in the neighbouring house of your house. Our parents know your parents," said Asad.

"Oh, our parents told that us about some Khans from Khan Group Of Hotels as our neighbours. Are you from that family only?" asked Humeira.

"Yes, we are from that family," replied Ayaan.

"I am Zoya, she is my sister Humeira and brother Imraan. I am eldest sibling while Humeira is the youngest sibling among us," said Zoya.

"I am Asad. I am also an eldest sibling like you. She is my sister Najma and brothe Ayaan. Ayaan is the youngest sibling of us," said Asad.

"I think we can become friends," said Imraan.

"Yes, we can. Lets talk more while we have our drinks," said Najma.

They shook their hands with each other. Just then, Tanushree, Nisha and Aseema came to them. Farooqui siblings got annoyed on seeing them.

"Everyone is calling for three of you so please come soon. You 3 should not drink. Good people don't drink," said Tanushree looking at Farooqui siblings.

"Who are these people?" asked Nisha.

"They are our neighbours," replied Zoya.

"Its not good for us girls to have drinks with boys," said Aseema.

"If you girls came here to lecture us on sanskaars then please go," said Humeira.

"Don't spoil our already spoilt moods," said Zoya.

"But others are asking for you to come," said Tanushree.

"I don't think we are needed when you girls will only be praised like always while we will be given lectures on how we are so bad and all," said Zoya.

"You girls go and impress others with your goodness and sanskaar and lets us enjoy ourselves. Don't come here again to disturb us," said Imraan.

"But you have to come there," said Nisha.

"Please leave from here," said Humeira getting annoyed.

Tanushree, Nisha and Aseema left from there.

"Looks like you 3 will need more drinks to calm down," said Asad jokingly.

"Oh please, we are not drunkards," said Zoya rolling her eyes.

"I was just joking," said Asad.

"I see," said Zoya.

"These girls think that they are better than us just because they dress up in salwar kameezes and don't go out for partying," said Humeira.

"Because of these girls, people have wrong impressions of us as we are not like them and how we should dress like them," said Zoya.

"Well, don't spoil your moods. Lets know more about each other," said Ayaan.

"Zoya di will soon do MBA while me and Imraan bhaiya will join college in 1st and 2nd year respectively," said Humeira.

"I will also do MBA while Najma and Ayaan will be in 1st and 2nd year of college respectively," said Asad.

"I have taken admission in Imperial Institute Of Management," said Zoya.

"I will go to the same college," said Asad.

"Great, we may be in the same class," said Zoya.

"Which college you guys are going?" asked Najma.

"We are yet to take admission," replied Humeira.

"Ohh," said Najma.

"Lets stop drinking now otherwise we will get drunk," said Imraan.

"Right," said Ayaan.

Just then, their respective parents who were talking with each other and Tanushree and Aseema's parents signalled them to come to them.

"Lets go," said Humeira.

Khan and Farooqui siblings came to them. Razzak and Gazalla were praising about Tanushree to Rashid and Dilshad. Aseema and Nisha's mother Haseena and father Mubarak were also praising their daughter Nisha to Rashid and Dilshad.

"She is our sweet daughter Tanushree. We call her Tanu. She has done BA. We are looking for a suitable boy for her marriage. She cooks very well. She can cook a lots of dishes. She always respects her elders," said Gazzala with a smile.

"She can also sing very well. She is very shy," said Razzak with a smile.

"She is our sweet daughter Nisha. She will soon join college to do her BA. She loves cooking. She respects her elders. After graduation, we are planning to look for a suitable boy for her," said Haseena with a smile.

"She never goes to discos and pubs like girls of today," said Mubarak with a smile

Farooqui siblings had enough of hearing them singing their daughter's praises which were annoying them a lot especially the last sentence of Mubarak.

"Hello Mr and Mrs Khan," said Zoya smiling at elder Khans cutting their praises, "Mom and dad talked to us about you. So happy to meet you."

Razzak, Gazalla, Haseena and Mubarak were disappointed with her interference.

"We are also happy to meet you," said Dilshad smiling back.

"Lets both of us families introduce to each other," said Humeira with a smile purposely excluding Ajay, Tanushree and their parents and also Aseema, Nisha and their parents by mentioning only two families.

"Yes, lets introduce ourselves," said Najma helping her.

Khan and Farooqui siblings introduced each other to the elders while other two excluded families felt left out. They went from to their relatives.

"Glad that these irritating people went from here," whispered Zoya.

"Yaa true," whispered her mother Zeenat.

"Its nice to know about you people," said Zeenat with a smile.

"Same here," said Dilshad with a smile.

"Mom, dad, I and Zoya will be in the same college," said Asad.

"That's really nice," said Rashid.

"Najma and Ayaan are going to KC college," said Dilshad.

"I think we should also take admission in that college," said Humeira.

"Yes, you are right," said Imraan.

They both did not wanted to go to the same college as Nisha but if Najma and Ayaan would have decided to go that college then may be they would have tolerated them but now they have a chance to not go to her college.

"Cool, we will be in the same college," said Najma with a smile.

Both the families talked till it was time for the feast. During the feast too, both the families sat with each other and talked at the same table. As they all talked, Asad looked at Zoya who was talking and laughing with others. A smile came on his lips. He did not know why he was getting attracted to her that also within an hour of their meeting. He stopped smiling before anyone could see him smiling.

After the party, everyone left for their homes. Asad was resting on his bed. He was thinking about Zoya in the party and started smiling.

He stopped smiling and asked himself, "Why I am thinking so much about her?"

Scene shifts to Farooquis house. The siblings were complaining about Tanushree and Nisha's families to their parents who were getting amused.

"They were such an attention seeker," said Zoya.

"I am sure they had eyes on both of their sons," said Imraan.

"Why you both are getting amused?" asked Humeira.

"Because of your complaining," replied Zeenat.

"First you both called them to the party and then they started their indirect talks of putting me and Humeira down by praising their respective daughters," said Zoya.

"We too don't like them but we have to invite them as they are our relatives otherwise people will think that we are mean to them," said Anwar.

"Tomorrow, Razzak and Gazzala are keeping a house warming party as they too returned to their old house," said Zeenat waiting for her children's reaction.

"We know and we already said that we are not coming," said Imraan.

"We can't stand them," said Zoya.

"We don't want to get bored there.

"Your reactions were expected," said Zeenat wid a laugh.

"We both have to go there but you three can stay home," said Anwar.

The children nodded their heads.

Next morning, Asad went to the college to know about his class and other information. While he was walking towards the notice, there was a girl reading the notice. He came closer to the board and just then the girl turned around who was none other than Zoya. They were surprised to see each other.

"Hi," greeted Asad with a smile.

"Hi," greeted Zoya back with a smile.

Asad read the board. They came to know that they will be in the same class.

"No nice that we will be in the same class," said Zoya happily.
"Yes," said Asad happily.

"I am coming in India after 10 years so I don't know about the college as I took admission via online. I am seeing the college for the first time," said Zoya.

"Let me show you around the college," said Asad.

"Sure," said Zoya.

Asad and Zoya were walking and talking with each other as he was showing the college. They both were liking each others' company.

"Tonight, my parents are going for Ajay and Tanushree's house for house warming party. I and my siblings are not going there," said Zoya.

"We too are invited but me and my siblings will also not go," said Asad.

"Well, then six of us will watch a movie together," said Zoya.

"Your place or my place?" asked Asad.

"Your place as we did not saw your house while yesterday after the party we showed you and your family our house," replied Zoya.

"My place then," said Asad.

"Yes," said Zoya.

At night, when both Farooqui and Khan elders went to the party the siblings went to Khan's house. First Khan siblings show Farooqui siblings the house before they sat for movie in the hall with coke and popcorns.

"Which movie to watch?" asked Ayaan.

"I think we should watch Tanu Weds Manu," replied Imraan.

"Fine," said Asad.

Najma put the DVD in the DVD player before turning on the movie. She came to others to watch the movie. Everyone was sitting in the sequence of Ayaan-Najma-Asad-Zoya-Imraan-Humeira so Asad and Zoya were sitting next to each other.

"We watched this movie earlier and loved it," said Zoya.

"We too," said Ayaan.

"Since there are not much better Bollywood movies nowadays so I suggested for this," said Imraan.

"Oh," said Asad.

"Did you guys made any friends in the college?" asked Najma.

"Yes, we made 3 friends- Sid I mean Siddharth, Roshni and Veer(Ankit Raj who played Amaad in the show)," replied Zoya with a smile.

"Awesome," said Nama with a smile.

"Sid and Roshni are dating from 3 years that is from 10th grade," said Asad.

"Wow," said Ayaan.

"I and Imraan will go to college tomorrow for admission," said Humeira.

"We will come with you to give you company," said Ayaan.

"Great," said Imraan.

As they watched the movie, Asad smiled as he glanced at Zoya who was eating popcorns. He looked back to the front as Zoya turned a bit.

"Few more days are left for our college, Zoya," said Asad,

"Yes Asad," Zoya, "Its not even a week of me coming to India that I have to go to college. I wish there was more time for the college to start."

"I know but nothing can be done about this," said Asad.

"If there was more time then there would be more days for me to explore Mumbai after 10 years but once college starts we won't get much time to enjoy," said Zoya.

"True," said Asad.

After they finished watching the movie, they talked with each other and played video games. After that, they had food for dinner which was kept in the fridge.

"Since our parents knew about you guys coming, they told the cook to make dinner for you all also," said Najma.

"So sweet of them," said Humeira.

After finishing their dinner, they all talked with each other for an hour till their respective parents came back from the party. Then, Farooqui siblings left for their home after exchanging goodbyes with the Khan siblings.

Precap: #Asad and Zoya becoming a couple after 2 months of starting their college.
#Asad and Zoya gets married after 3 years of dating and one year after completing their MBA and joining their family business.


A/N: It's a fast paced story which is a 10 part SS😊.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update.
So Farooqi's are back to India.
Neighbours of Khan.
Whole update was nice.
Looks like I am seriously going to hate Asad.
I read prologue today only.
What the hell did he did to Zoya.
Waiting for the story to unfold.
Thanks for the PM.
Update soon.
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awesome update loved it thank you for pm update soon
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nice update
So many things happened in first update only but all nice
Asad n zoya friendship bond n rest of them also r becoming good friends
Waiting for nect update now

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Interesting Start
Enjoyed Reading It

Continue Soon
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Great start
Loved it
Thanks for pm 😊
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nice n update soon n tnxxx fr pm
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nice one dr...thnks fr the pm too
precap seems more interestng...update soon !!
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Amazing start
both families hate tanu's and aseema's family so much
Eventful update
Asad and zoya will be couple soon
Wandering about asad's later behaviour
Very excited to read more
Update soon

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