Once Again[AU]~A ShraMan FF(PART 10_PG 24)15.02.17 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Unres
Just when I thought you would be all mad at me you did the opposite and dedicated this wonderful chappy to me
Coming to the chapter the flashbacks were giving the story some clarity nahin to I don't seem to have a liking for this shravan ka past, he was soo kaan ka kacha
But looking forward to read how this one goes ahead.

Love
Tere liye arpi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
cute update anu :)
sumo ki sumoness 👏

kya batana chaahti thi wo Shravan ko?

Pushkie is here... Shraman ki gaadi ko pushkie ke dhakka start ki jaroorat padti hi hai 😉

Urvashi fir a gayi 😡 swabhaav achcha hai my foot!! neverrr
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Urvashi you better not ! The flashbacks reminded me of the show :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
SHONAAA!!!🤗
Wht an update😃
Mindblowing⭐️
Ohh it was full of entertainment...jst loved it❤️
The picnic plan was apt choice madr me nostalgic...Epi 49
Shravan ki Shaadi????😲...u knw wht whn i read tht part a loud HAAIN escaped my mouth n my broz were staring at me n i returned thm an apologetic smile woh bhi twice...second time on the mentiom of Urvashi😛
Aa hi gae kabab mein hadi😡...magar i knw Sumo knws very wel how to hataofiy such useless bones😆😛😳
The flashie🥺
I hope he mends his mistake na na Sin soon!
Ohh Sumo ki nautanki wala part...😆...Hillarious one😉...bechara larka😆...I wud say in tht case tht woman turned bachari😆
Anu kahan say lati hai ya sab dhamaal...jahan say bhi ho...kamaal kar dalti ho😉
Pushkie ki entry..mtlb agay entertainment hi entertainment hai boss😆😳
Cant waiy yat...m hel excited to knw how Suman wil talk to him n how she'll react on his mairrage issue...n mein bulkul hairan nhi hoi knwing Shravan also loves hr😉😃
Love yaa Shona...my jaan🤗



Take Care!
Jellybean❤️

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
brilliant update
too good
loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Hey Anu,
Full on exciting update. Sumo back with all Sumoness. So glad they are spending time together. She is giving him a chance Once Again, really hope his Mom doesn't mess it up, though she likes Suman but Shravan should let her know before the party. Hoping for some good ShraMan scenes. 😉 The scene where Sumo fights for Shravan was really cute, as in the show choti Sumo did that, but it was nice to read Sumo fighting for Shravan while he was watching. Great going my friend. 👏

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Interesting update!!!!
What will happen next?
Waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
awesome..
beautifully written,...
eagerly waiting for next part...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
Awww beautiful cute as always dear...


Love,
Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello people...Remember this story?? Hope u do...
M really very sorry for updating this late par aab se I dont even know will I ever update bcoz I have my exams in 3 weeks and then 12th start hone vaali..🤢.So hell bent in doing studies and my present state is studying for tomorrow's chemistry test and also completing maths and Bio journal...🤢🤢
Par as update is ur right here it goes...😃
Hope y'all enjoy it...😊


ONCE AGAIN

part 7



Upstairs in the room

"Bahiya??"

"Kya hua Pushkar??"

"Aap sumo ko pasand karte ho na??"

"Ha...Kyu??"

"Toh aap usko batate kyu nahi??"

"Tu pagal hai kya Pushkar...Woh pehle mujhse pyaar karti thi...who bhi bachpan mey..aab nahi karti..."

"Par aap ek baar puch ke toh dekho na...shayad aapki kismet aachi ho..."

"Nahi Pushkar...Maine ek nahi |do baar usko dukhaya hai...aabhi tak toh usne muyjhe maaf bhi nahi kiya..."

"Kyu phek rahe ho bhai...aabhi toh who aapse thik se baat...-"

"Nahi Pushkar...pichle 3 dino mey pehle baar usne mujhse aaj thik se baat ki hai..."

"Toh aab aap kya karoge...pata hai mumma aur badi maa par aapke shaadi ka bhoot sawar hai..."

"Janta hu mai...maine kitne baar samjahya hai par who log maante he nahi..."

"Bhai aapko jald he kuch karna padega...varna badi ma aapka rishta kahi aur karve degi aur aapko sumo ko bhulna..."

"Chup kar Chote..."

"Mai tohmazak kar raha tha bhai...par ye sach bhi ho sakta hai...aap jaldi se sumo se maafi le lo...kahi lene ke dene na pad jaye..."

"Hmmm...tu thik keh raha hai...kuch karna padega...Chal aab so ja...Good noght"

"Good night bhai"

**

Morning

Shravan wakes up early...makes coffee and sits in the living area...

"Kal Sumo se baat nahi ho paayi...aaj kardu kya??Hmm..aaj bol he deta hu thik se sorry...fhir koi jhanjat he nahi rahega..."

He gets up and goes to her room...

He pushes a door a little and gets in to find a empty room...

He is about to call Sumo when he sees his portrait there..half completed...

He stands in front of it ...admiring the half completed creation of his love...

He sees his pictures in a box nearby...

He takes out of one of the neatly framed ones and starts admiring it...

"Sumo bhi na...puri pagal hai..." he blushes at his own and giggles...

While Shravan is busy admiring sumo's belongings Sumo comes out of the bathroom in a pink bathrobe

Sumo is stunned to see Shravan there

"Shravan??" No response

"SHRAVAN??"

This time Shravan saw her and his eyes couldn't get her off...Even if she was wearing a simple modest bath robe she looked so beautiful...fresh as a pink tulip...

"SHRAVAN????"

"Oh...Sorry...mai woh...mai...woh mai.."

"Kya bakri ke tarah mai mai kar rahe ho..."

"Woh mai bas uhi yaha se ja raha tha toh socha Good morning keh du...Good Morning Sumo..."

"Ha Good Morning...tum itne jaldi jag gaye...abhi toh sirf 7 baje hai..."

"Ha...aadat hai jaldi uthne ke...Vaise tum ye complete kab karne vaali ho??"Shravan pinted at the incomplete portrait.."

"Pata nahi kab complete hoga...aabhi thoda karungi..."

"Toh tum paint karte waqt mai yaha baitha toh chalege...vaise bhi who picture mey mere he hai na...aur photo mey details bhi nahi dikhenga...toh issiliye mai..yaha..."

"Thik hai.."

Shravan was happy...he setteled down on the chair...

"Oyy...bhi kaha bauth gaye...niklo bahar..."

"Kya??Kyun??"

"Mujhe change karna hai.."

"Oh...I am so sorry...tum bula lena baad mey..."He ran out of the room..

"Pagal..."Sumo giggled and closed the door...

After about half an hour the door opened...Shravan was sitting on the sofa outside immersed in the phone...

"Shravan.."

"Hmm..." He said without looking out of the phone..

"Aa jao..."

"Hmm.."

Shravan settled on the chair there...

Sumo started the painting..

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"Shravan Thik se pose do...upar mat dekho..." Sumo snapped him and he went back in position...

"Shravan thik se baitho"

"Shravan thoda smile karo.."

"Itna smile kyu kar rahe ho...jara proportion mey karo na..."

"Who blazer thik karo..."

"Baal dekho...ye lo mirror ...jaldi se thik karo..."

"Aargh..SHRAVAN...kitni baar kahu ke mujhe mat dekho..."

From the past 3 hours Sumo was instructing Shravan how to sit how to have expressions and most importantly NOT TO LOOK AT HER..!!!

After 3 hours of working she was able to complete only his hair and his ear...

"Bas aab Shravan...aab baad mey...tumse thik se baitha bhi nahi jaa raha..."

"Sorry ..."

"Who sab chodo aur ye dekho..."

She ran towards her cupboard and took out a frame...

"Kaisa hai ye??"

It was a beautiful painting of Ramnath and Nirmala along with Shravan..

"Wow...this is so beautiful...Kab banaya ye tumne??"

"Hmm..Pichle mahine banaya tha..."

"Ye bohot sundar hai ...mai abhi maa ko bulata hu..."

"Aare pagal ho gaye ho kya...aagar unko dikhana hota toh directly unhe he jaake dikhati na...tumko dikha ne ke kya jarrorat thi??Mai ye unko unki wedding anniversary par gift dena chahti hu.."

"Oh...Sorry...vaise aachi idea hai..."

"Who toh hai..."

"Sumo mai tumse kuch kehna chahta tha..."

"Bolo na..."

"I am sorry..."

"Kyu??"

"Jo bhi pehle hua uske liye...maine kuch bhi jaan buch kar nahi kiya tha Sumo...Tum toh jaanti ho mera dimag kitna kharab hai...mai bina kuch sunne tumpe baras jaata hu...Please mujhe maaf kardo Sumo...Aage se aisa kabhi nahi hoga...meri vajah se tumhe kabhi koi dukh nahi hoga..."

"Saach??"

"Muuch.."

"Thik hai..."

"Toh kiya na mujhe maaf??"

"Haa..."

"Saachi??"

"Aare ha..."

"Thank you so much Sumo..."

Excitingly he ran to hug her and then stopped...Sumo sensed is awkardness and hugged him...Shravan smiled contently and hugged her back...

Hope y'all liked it but I think this one was total off one😭..

Do let me know from your comments and please hit the like button if its worth...

Sorry for the length...reason is justified up there...

Sorry for the typos as no proof read

Love,

ANU

P.S_ As always

P.P.S_As always😃


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