Once Again[AU]~A ShraMan FF(PART 10_PG 24)15.02.17

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello everyone!!!!!I am back...and that too real SOON..😆

So as per the requests of some lovelies...M back with a FF..
.Khush ho gaye na...Very good..

So basically characters are the same but their past is different...Ramnath and Nirmala are on good terms and sumo has a complete family..Except her dad...
So here goes a prologue...Enjoy...😊

ONCE AGAIN


PROLOGUE:-

"Please Shravan...mai saach mei tumse bohot pyaar karti hu...pyaar na sahi toh kam se kam dost to reh sakte ho na tum.."

"Jaan gaya hu mai saab kuch...maine tumhe aacha dost maana tha..aur tumne..usse se baat kar kar bohot badi galti ke..."

"Shravan maine jaanbuch kar kuch bhi nahi kiya...woh .."

"kuch nahi sunna mujhe...aaj ke baad mujhe aapna chehra mat dikhana..."

"Shravan...shravan please ruko...shravan..."

So how was it????

I need a sincere feedback ha...warna I won't continue... Hope u'll like it..😊

Love,

ANU

P.S:- Constructive criticism is most welcome

P.P.S:-Tomatoes and chappals are also welcome...par dheere se...As u'll are vakif..Mai bohot nazuk hu..😳.

P.P.P.S:- please suggest a new title if possible.

INDEX

PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART 5

PART 6

PART 7



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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Roothe Yaar Nu Manale..!
Interesting...! nice start...!
Sumo ne kari kissey baat , ,jo Shravan hua itna naraaz!!!😲
Would love to read more...!😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
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The prologue and the title are so tempting to read more!!!so please continue!!! Waiting for your next update soon!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Heyyyu you are back🤗 i am sooo happy and wait was that? ...shravan sumo se naraz h?. ..but meujhe tujhpe pura bharosa h...u'll make everything good...and title to chapter -1 k bad h suggest kar paungi...abhi zyada kuch samajh nhi aya...but update soon like...real soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hawwwh...u didn't Pm me...😔...katti
ab dear say unres karoon gi 🥱

Res
*****
Unres
Cudnt resist for so long...

Woah thts intruging...Shravan hoa Suman say behad naraz..par kyun..?? Thts captivating..ab kya gul khilaya hai madam nay... 😆
chati chati update karo..taka raaz ka pitara khulay 😆
wil wait..n pkz nxt time do pm me.

Love ya..🤗
Sunain
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Hi Anu,

Looks very interesting. Go ahead update the first part soon.

Lubna.

<font color="#000099">Hello everyone!!!!!I am back...and that too real SOON..😆</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#0099FF">So as per the requests of some lovelies...M back with a FF..
.Khush ho gaye na...Very good..
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">So basically characters are the same but their past is different...Ramnath and Nirmala are on good terms and sumo has a complete family..Except her dad...
So here goes a prologue...Enjoy...😊
</font>

<p align="center"><font color="#FF0000">ONCE AGAIN</font></p>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#3300CC">PROLOGUE:-</font>


"<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">Please Shravan...mai saach mei tumse bohot pyaar karti
hu...pyaar na sahi toh kam se kam dost to reh sakte ho na tum.."
</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">
</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">"Jaan gaya hu mai saab kuch...maine tumhe aacha dost maana
tha..aur tumne..usse se baat kar kar bohot badi galti ke..."
</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">
</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">"Shravan maine jaanbuch kar kuch bhi nahi kiya...woh .."</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">
</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">"kuch nahi sunna mujhe...aaj ke baad mujhe aapna chehra mat
dikhana..."
</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">
</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">"Shravan...shravan please ruko...shravan..."</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF"><font color="#0000FF">So how was it????
</font>
</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF"><font color="#0000FF">I need a sincere feedback ha...warna I won't continue... Hope u'll like it..😊</font></font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF"><font color="#990066">Love,</font></font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF"><font color="#990066">ANU</font></font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">P.S:- Constructive criticism is most welcome</font></font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">P.P.S:-Tomatoes and chappals are also welcome...par dheere se...As u'll are vakif..Mai bohot nazuk hu..😳</font></font>.

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900FF">P.P.P.S:- please suggest a new title if possible.</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" color="#9900FF">
</font>




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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome prologue
cannot wait
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Prologue seems interesting. Please continue. Waiting for Chap 1👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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prologue is pretty interesting😊. update soon. and i think the title is quite good.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
Interesting start...yay...loved the character sketch and the new changes...what made shravan angry...😲 it may not be nirmala here. ...then?!!! So waiting to know further. Please continue soon

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