priveer TS: the wedding that shocked O family(completed on page 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey great start come up soon, can I get a guilty Shivaay for what he did with Ani?, Its Priveer just abit!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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im so happy u all like it n thinks its very gud. so u all r saying to continue so i'll b continuing it soon 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was too good!! starbright, you need to write more!! Continue this!!!
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Please finish it off..it was a gr8 start
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hey guys. somany of u told me to continue so yeah, im posting the 2nd part.hope u like it..!
PRIVEER TS: WEDDING THAT SHOCKED OBEROI FAMILY (SHOT 2)

Everyone ran towards shivaay. Anika runs to room to take medicines which she gave while they were at the jungle. Anika comes back and gives it to shivaay.shivaay takes it. Shivaay takes it. Dadi says "anika outhar, billu ko kamre mein le jaa. Use aaram ki zaroorat hai."

They both goes.

Omkara comes towards angrily and says "mujhe pata hai kit um ne hi kuch kiya hoga. Meri behen aisa kuch kar hi nahi sakthi.wo bahoth hi innocent hai. Tumhne uski faaydha udaaya hai iss ghar ki dhamaad ban ne ke liye"

Rudra agrees with om and says "om teek keh rahi hai, meri chotti behen aisa kuch kar hi nahi sakti. Who apni parivaar ki khilaaf kabhi nahi jaati.

Ranveer says "ab aap kuch bhi kahe, yeh mera biwi hai. Aur uss sach ko koi nahi badal sakta". Priyanka cries hearing this. Omkara shouts "ACP..."

Rudra holds omkara. Ranveer says meine toh isse bas isliye uaha laya tha taaki hum bata sake ki hum connection bana liya hai. Ab mein isse yaha se le jaa raha hoon."

Ranveer drags priyanka with him from there.

At shivaay's room, shivaay is sitting on bed and anika is sitting beside him

Shivaay says "mujhe priyanka se milna hai!". Anika stops him and says "nahi-nahi. Aap yaha aaram kijiye. Abhi bahar jaana teek nahi hai". Shivaay insists "mujhe use baat karna hai matlab karna hai".

Anika makes him understand saying "baat samajhne ki koshish kijiye shivaay! Agar aap abh baahar jayenge toh aapke tabiyadh aur bhigad sakti hai. Hum who ACP ke ghar jaayenge aur priyanka ko zaroor wapas le aayenge".

Shivaay have tears in her eyes and says "tumhe pata hai, anika? Priyanka bachpan se hi zyada baat nahi karti. Apni dil ki baat kisi se zyada share nahi karti. Aur aaj usne aisa kiya. Par mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise yeh shaadi uski iccha ke khilaaf hua hai. Uss ki chehra dekha tumhne? Aisa lag raha jaise usse force kiya hai". Anika agrees with him "haan shivaay, mujhe bhi aisa laga".

Shivaay says "mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaisa meine tumhari saath jo kiya na, who meri behen ke saath bhi ho raha hai. Karma ke bare mein suna tho tha, par abh meri saath bhi who ho raha hai!". He feels guilty.

Anika says "aap hamesha aisa negative kyun sochte ho? Meine kaha na ki hum priyanka ko le aayenge!

At hall, everyone was is sitting on couch.

Tej says "agar yeh baat bahar aagaya toh humaara business me loss hoga". Jhanvi shouts at him "
tumhe abhi bhi business ki padi hai? Humara beti ki zindagi waha..."

She couldn't complete her words. Her voice trembled because of sadness. For the first she regretted wasting her time in drinking and not focusing on her kids' life.

Dadi asks them to stop and says "galti humaari hai. Humne uski mann ki baat jaan ne ki koshsish nahi ki. Ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya. Ab uss ladke ko humaari dhamaad bana na hi padega".

At night in ranveer's house. priyanka is in a room. It very dark. The only light in there is the moonlight. The door is locked from outside. She is sitting in the opposite corner. Tears are rolling down her eyes. She stands up slowly wiping her tears. She walks in to the window. A cool breeze enters into the room. She felt calm by the touch of the breeze. She thinks about everything that happened in oberoi mansion. She is still worried about her shivaay bhaiyya. She felt much anger at whatever ranveer did to her. But she was totally helpless. Her anger came out in the form of tears.

Ranveer is outside his house drinking a coffee to make his tiredness away. He sees the bright, shining moon in the sky. He recalls his first meeting with priyanka and how he trapped her and forced her to marriage. He says to himself "ab shuru hoga priyanka ki zindagi ki sabse mushkil waqt jo kabhi nahi khata hogi". His eyes reflected the revenge he wanted to take. He thinks he succeeded but he have unknowingly waked up the sleeping lioness inside priyanka..

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thnk u...thts it. do tell me how it is..😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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haeh!!! only ittu sa!!!
it was excellent..
i want to see how priyanka deals with it and shows her badass side to Ranveer...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome part...waiting fr next update...pls continue soon...
Edited by arohiarsh16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Starbright 😃!
Just loved the second part. I loved the wedding night part at Ranveer's house. and at the end where u mentioned that he doesnot know what's really he has done instead of what he was thinking to do was awesome. Thanks for the second part dear. If possible then try to continue 😉.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woah! What a follow up! Why did you stop though? We need to know what ACP will do now...

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