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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you for all your support, I'm really grateful😃😃😃

Note - This SS is not a regular happy story , so please keep that in mind reading this, it is a revenge story admixed with dark fiction. It will have certain themes which will not be liked by most of you and its absolutely fine, because as a reader I totally understand. Secondly, I would like to say this separation is not forever but this he turning point of the story so I had to elaborate it to make everyone understand why and what these characters in the future will do.

Phew now the most common question everyone asked in their comments... Are Maan and Yash twins here...NO they are not. People have 7 lookalikes around the world, so he is based on that theory. That is why if you re read the character sketch I have mentioned their ages Maan 24 years old while Yash is 20 the same age as Geet in this fic.

Second question that you all asked was is Alisha is his real sister, NO she is not , she is his step sister, whom he considers as family but for her hes just another object, that is what made him leave his own house.

These updates are painful I can understand but it is what is going to make this tale complete, please bear with these, Maaneet part will be there soon.






Part 8



Perfect Strangers



Yash took her to a nearby clinic his friend Irina owned, she looked at him inquisitively knowing he has never been with any girls so who is this girl. Yash took her out to the other room and told her about the incidents and also asked her to keep Geet's matter confidential as he thought his sister's story of people after her wanting to molest her to be true. Irina nodded at her friend's request and decided to ask few questions to Geet. She understood what has happened to her but still decided to run some tests on her, the results of which would take a week. Yash took Geet back to his house, "Would you like to have anything". She again looked up her hazy memories not helping anywhere, Why is he so unfamiliarly familiar, but he is helping me, may be he knows me...no, those eyes...Ahh..what is happening to me'. She held her head with both hands feeling excruciating pain. "Hey you okay, please don't strain yourself",Yash asked concerned.



I'm not yours, and you're not mine
But we can sit and pass the time
No fighting wars, no ringing chimes
We're just feeling fine



His care and concern for her was giving her mind and heart wrong signals and she decided to watch this person, who resembles so much the person in her dreams, "I'm fine". "Okay, so what would you like to have, Aloo Parathas will that be fine for you", Yash asked.She heard that somewhere but...again nothing. "I..I can help", She said nervously. "Its okay, you can rest", He said patting her head. He bought her diner and she took it hesitatingly. Yash wanted to know her, so he decided to initiate a conversation, but then for some reason stopped as he was reminded of Irina's words as to not ask her too much which can make her situation worse.










"What should I do, if I tell about her to anyone then she might be in trouble, what if Di was right that some people are after her", He thought. He looked up to find her looking at him like she was thinking of something. "Ah, was the food okay, for you sorry if you did not like my cooking", He said. "No, thank you it was delicious", Geet smiled genuinely amused at his confused expressions. "Geet, right, ...so do you need anything else, please don't be hesi...", before he could complete she said, "No I'm really fine thank you for your concern. You don't have a family here", She asked looking around. "No, I live alone", Yash answered. "...Are you ..uncomfortable ...if you want, I can arrange to let you live with my friend", He spoke suddenly making her laugh. "No , its fine, thank you for your concern", She smiled.



This is where we're supposed to be
Sitting by a broken tree
No tragedy, no poetry
Just staring at the sky








Maan could not find out the location of Geet and it killed him every minute . Why can't I be happy for once , just when I found light , it has been taken away from me , he thought dejected. Gaurav witnessed his restlessness and concluded he did love his sister . He got a call from Rohan and they found out Alisha's whereabouts . Gaurav went to Maan to give him the news . "They have found Alisha , but...",He informed. "But what ...",Maan asked. "She was unconscious and after they got her admitted she says she don't recall anything ", Gaurav told. "What the hell , that lady is lying through her teeth , I know she is I'm gonna get it out of her in my own way ", he was enraged .









Gaurav stopped him , "Wait Maan don't be foolish , we have to keep you away from her or she won't tell us where Geet is "."But ...", Maan tried again but Gaurav interrupted him,"No buts let us handle this ." Though Maan did not like it but he can not take risks with Geet's safety. Alisha had very minutely injected herself with the drug she injected Geet with, so she was lying like Maan said and hadn't really forgotten her memories and that is how the Police found her, where she wanted them to.



Unknown to everything Geet was under the care of Yash, its been a week now and Geet was still hazy with her memories but somehow she trusted this man who was helpful to her .It was another of Geet's visits to the doctor , "We have got the results ", Irina informed Yash . "What is it anything specific ", he asked . "She was drugged and that is the reason of her hazy memory ", She said shocking him. "Anything which can be done to cure her ,"he asked worried for her . "No and don't even try to do that forcefully, the drug she has been injected with isn't an ordinary one, it will cause her being unstable, like switching between pleasant and painful ones, she can even turn violent during that stage", She warned. "Then what should be done, I feel bad for her", He said ."For a person whom you just met , you seem to worried for her , do you love her ", Dr Irina asked amused.




I could wait a thousand hours
Stay the same in sun and showers
Pick apart a hundred flowers
Just to be quiet
Tell me when you feel ready
I'm the one, there's not too many
Hold my hand to keep me steady
Just to be quiet with you
With you







"Even if I do , there is no point , she don't have any memories". Geet was at the door listening to the last part of the conversation hearing his confession only. She was now sure he is the person she saw in her hazy dreams. Unknown that what a terrible mistake she made in her judgment. The doctor left and she came in . She hugged him , he was shocked by her hug but did not hug her back . "I am sorry , I should have known you loved me , I never realized how much I have hurt you ", was all she said . Yash not knowing anything thought she reciprocated his feelings and he hugged her back, not knowing that this act of his will change his fate forever .



Geet was drawn to him for the kindness and care he showered to her for the past week and did not know it wasn't the same man whom she saw in her hazy memories and her misjudgment will cost them a huge price. Yash was really happy thinking his feelings are answered and not for once thinking that she was misinterpreting him for some one else- her husband. Since she did not have any marriage symbols so this thought never crossed his mind. They began their life afresh from that day moment onwards and were drawn to each other in a web of illusion. Yash took her out to his favorite place in his sports car, it was a drive near the outskirts of the city. It was a beautiful sight with the blue sky and thousands of stars brilliantly shining in the night sky, Geet was really in awe of such a beautiful place.



I like it here beside you dear
You're even more than you appear
And in the clouds my head is clear
Every time you say hello






So here's my heart, and here's my mouth
And I can't help if things come out
'Cause there are words I want to shout
But maybe I'll stay low





They enjoyed their star gazing adventure with a little diner they bought. Geet had now learned to cook thanks to him teaching her. "Did you like it here", He asked. "Yes, thank you, for showing me this beautiful view", She smiled resting her head on his shoulder. "I love coming here , after my parents' death I feel connected here, looking at these stars , I feel I can talk to my parents more closely", He told her.











She smiled and looked ahead, with him telling her more about himself. She got to know his father has a huge business in Austria. He will be officially taking it over in about 2 years from now according to his father's will, his father's friend is looking after it as his sister was for some reason never allowed to take it over. His parents died 7 years back and since the last three years he has been living here. As for her she did not remember anything, she was confused about her life.



I could wait a thousand hours
Stay the same in sun and showers
Pick apart a hundred flowers
Just to be quiet
Tell me when you feel ready
I'm the one, there's not too many
Hold my hand to keep me steady
Just to be quiet with you ...( Lyrics from the song 'Quiet' by Lights)



The once perfect strangers were now lovers and they celebrated their new found love by taking steps to knowing another. They grew closer in many aspects. Geet did not had the slightest idea that what a blunder she was doing, that her love for this person was a false perception of her mixed feelings or was it...This care and everything was new to her and him. She did not knew this new future will mess her past life. For him, it was the first time he had liked a girl so much and thinking himself to be lucky as his feelings were answered , not once did the young man thought what a huge price he would have to pay for his beautiful mistake.





So here is the next update, please do give your honest reviews and do tell what you like and what you did not.😃😃😃



I know there was less Maan in this update but he will be there from the next



Precap- Maan finds Geet in Paris but...😈





Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
first of all me first... yippie..

OK now coming to the update.. as I said before this story has hooked me since start.. And this update had really gave me goosebumps even though I know that there is lots more to come in future but do don't worry I am already prepared for it..

I really feel bad for both Geet and Yash as unknowingly both of theirs lives are going to be messed up.. I don't blame Geet or Yash for all this as it's the game played by destiny in which both of them are pawns.. And I dont blame you also dear as I know that sometimes being a writer we need to think out of our boundaries.. Yes as a Maaneet fan I too can't see Geet or Maan with anyone else but at the same time I know that it's needed for the story so I am mentally prepared for it..

I had this feeling of a very big storm coming in the lives of Maaneet and Yash due to this misunderstanding which is going to destroy all their lives.. it really gave me goosebumps just by thinking if it..

really feel bad for Maan as he had already suffered a lot and I guess he is going to suffer even more in the future.. but most importantly I feel bad for Geet who is so innocent..

I really can't wait to see how the lives of these three will unfold further.. Continue soon..

P.S. Sorry no color coding as I am from mobile. ;)

P.S.S Don't get disheartened if you get any negative comments or people pestering you to bring Maaneet together.. you write what you had planned to write and remember your ardent readers like me are always with you... take care... luv you
Edited by aakritisri1111 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
geet is still under the effect of the drug.. yash took her to the dr who was his freind and there he knew that Geet was drugged
geet in her hazy memories is relating him to Maan as everything is same between hte two other than the eyes
yash was in confusion if he shouls ell others about her or not but he did not as he remembered that alisha told him that some people were behind her
On the other side Maan was so disturbed and helpless as he was not getting any clue about geet
maan could sense that alisha was behnd it but gaurav stopped him as they had to trace geet thru alisha
geet was still under the effect of the drug and she was getting affected by yash's care as she could faintly remeber that he was the man of her dreams
on their second visit to dr he was asked by dr if he was in love with geet and he said if he did it was useless as she did not have her memories..but Get heard him saying that and she thought that he loved her and she reciprocated his feelings

Yash was happy to see her reacting like this and he shared his life with her..
and now i m scared for maan.. will he eb able to reach her?
what he will do when he comes to know about Yash.. Will geet be able to get her memories back?
update soon khuashboo 😃



Edited by Rashmi... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
so geet is happy and safe with yash yash is a kid hearted and simple guy ..geet is not able to memorize anythnig ..maaa is restless .waiting to know what will happen when maan fiind out about yash
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update yash took geet to clinic his friend owned who by asking geet abt her came to know what must have happened to her yash was taking care of geet she like his care but she was confused as she used see jhis eyes in her dreams not knowing it was maan here maan was going insane alisha played her cards well gautrav wanted maan to be careful as alisha was the only link to find geet here yaash unknowingly confessed he loves geetr who felt bad for he is nioce man yash thought geet fell for him too nott knowing geet was jsut thankful to him yash eachday was coming close to geet and even closer for a heartbreak
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice pt
geet memories not letting hr judge between yash and maan they become lover precap maan findout about geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
geet has lost her memories
yash care n concern n his love
her dreams of maan
she accepted yash
both spent time with each other
but it will cost both high
she is married
n thinks yash as maan
poor girl
will be broken when she face the truth
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update
yash and geet r noe lovers
geet is thinking he is the same man in her mermory
maan is very worried for geet
what will happen when he came know abou yash and geet relation
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg...felt real bad fro maan but for yash too...in all this geet is in a mess too...what has that alisha done to all of them...she has messed all of them including her brother...what kind of person is she...a true monster...

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