ABHIMAAN YAA SWABHIMAAN?? EPILOGUE Pg. 96****08/11/18 - Page 12

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Fabulous update. Dadima is not well and she is not having medicine until Maan is not brought back to KM. Rishabh is forced to allow Maan back to home. Maan decided to stay at outhouse. Meera came to India and Gayatri is very happy.
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Thanks for pm. Nice update. Dadi solved one issue but alot is remained to settle down. Waiting for next.
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CHAPTER 5



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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TWO DAYS LATER

MONDAY, 07:00 a.m.
Rishabh had just finished his workout and Garima was busy in kitchen. Rishabh decided to pay his mother a visit as Maan was in the outhouse getting ready for the day. On reaching Savitri Devi's room he found her sitting and having her tea and reading newspaper.



"Pranam Maa!" Rishabh said touching Savitri Devi's feet.

"Jeete raho beta! Garima kahaan hai?" (Where is Garima?)

"Kitchen mein hogi." (Must be kitchen.)

"Vicky aur Annie?"

"Woh toh abhi tak so rahe honge. Maa abb aapki tabiyat kaisi hai?" (They must be still sleeping. How are you feeling today?)

"Theek hai. Hum soch rahe hain ki Vicky ki shaadi karaa dein. Kayade se toh pehle Maan ki, phir Annie aur phir Vicky ki shaadi honi chajiye. Magar Maan abhi iss haalat mein nahi ki unki shaadi ki jaaye." (Better. I'm thinking of getting Vicky married. According to Hindu customs, Maan should get married first, then Annie and then Vicky. But in present circumstances, I don't think Maan is in a condition to be married.)

"Maa maine ek ladki Vicky ke liye pasand ki hai." (Maa, I've selected a girl for Vicky.)

"Kaun hai woh?" (Who have you selected?)

"Uska naam Meera hai aur woh Industrialist Ram Kapoor ki beti hai jo US mein rehte hain. Meera abhi Senior Architect ki job par Charles and Smith Construction mein kaam kar rahi hai." (Her name is Meera she is Industrialist Ram Kapoor's daughter. Mr. Kapoor is based in US. Meera is currently working as Senior Architect in Charles and Smith Construction in US.)

"Vicky se Meera ko milaya?" (Has Vicky met Meera?)

"Haan dono mile the aur milte hi lad bhi liye." (Yes both have met. Both had their first fight as soon as they met!) Rishabh said with a smirk.

"Lade??"(Fight??) Garima questioned who had come with Rishabh's lime juice.

"Haan jaise tum aur mai shaadi se pehle ladte the." (Yes, like we both use to fight before our marriage!) Rishabh said making Garima blush.

"Magar agar ek dusare se ladte hain, toh pyaar kaise hoga?" (But if they fight with one another, then how will they fall in love?) Savitri Devi was confused with next generations theory.

"Dadimaa, hum ladte aur gussa bhi ussi se hote hain, jisse hum apna samjhate hain." (Dadimaa, we fight and get angry with only that person whom we are close to!!) Maan said from the doorway who had entered Savitri Devi's room just behind his mother.



Rishabh stiffened hearing Maan's voice but agreed, "Maan sahi keh raha hai Maa. Accha abb mai chalta hoon. Mujhe Office ke liye tyaar hona hai." (Maan is right Maa! Now I shall leave as I have to get ready for the office.)

KHURANA MANSION's DINING TABLE, 8:00 a.m.
The Khurana family was having breakfast when Chandu came running, "Sahab do ladkiyaan Badi Malkin se milne aayee be." (Sir, two girls have come to meet Senior Ma'am.)

"Kaun hain woh?" (Who are they?)

"Humka nahi maloom sahab. Yeh kagaz ka tukda di be." (I don't know. They gave this chit of paper.)

"Kagaz ka tukda nahi usse "business card" kehte hain." (Its not called chit of paper, but its called a "business card".) Annie said giggling

Meanwhile Rishabh looked at the card and said, "Jaao, jaao unhein jaldi se andar bhejo." (Go quickly and send them in.) Looking at Savitri Devi, Rishabh said, "Maa, lagta hai..." (Maa, I think...)

Just then they saw two girls following Chandu. One was dressed in crisp cotton saree carrying something with her and another in trendy salwaar kurta. On their coming nearer there were immediate reactions, "GEET!"





"GEET DIDI!" Annie said and at once hugged the girl in saree crying, "Didi aap kahaan chali gayeen theen mujhe chod kar?" (Didi where were you? Why did you leave me and go?)



Gayatri tried calming hysterical Annie by rubbing her back, "Shaant ho jaao Gudiya! Hummei lagta hai ki aapko kuch galatfahami hui hai. Humara naam GAYATRI SINGH RANAWAT hai. Geet humari mauseri behan theen jo abb iss duniya mein nahi hain." (Calm down Gudiya! I think you have misunderstood. I'm GAYATRI SINGH RANAWAT. Geet was my cousin but she is no more!)

"Nahi! Aap hi meri Geet Didi hain, woh hi akeli iss duniya mein mujhe "Gudiya" bulati hain!" (No you are my Geet Didi. She is one and the only person in this wide world who called me "Gudiya".)



"Nahi aapka bhram hai. Hum toh Gayatri hain." (I think you are imagining things. I'm Gayatri.)

"Aap...jhoot bol...rahi hain, aap hi...hain meri...Geet didi hain!" (You...are...lying..you...are...my
...Geet Didi.) Annie said crying hysterically.



Finally Garima cajolingly removed Annie from Gayatri's embrace. Maan first time saw how close Annie was to Geet.

After Annie left, Gayatri went in front of Savitri Devi and said, "Dadiji, yeh B**** Mandir kaa prasad hai. Aapki sehat abb jald se jald theek ho jaayegi." (Dadiji we have got some prasad for you from B**** Mandir. It'll help you get better soon!) Gayatri gave Savitri Devi prasad and touched her feet, then Meera touched her feet.

Rishabh introduced Meera first,"Yeh hai Meera Kapoor, Industrialist Ram Kapoor ki beti. Yeh US mein rehti hain. Aur yeh hai Gayatri Singh Ranawat jo Ranawat Industries ki MD aur acting CEO hain." (This is Meera Kapoor, Industrialist Ram Kapoor's daughter. They live in US. This is Gayatri Singh Ranawat who is MD of Ranawat Industries. She is also acting CEO of Ranawat Industries.)

"Aao beta humare saath nashta karo!" (Come have breakfast with us my dear!) Savitri Devi invited.

"Hummei kshama kijiye! Humara aaj upvaas hai!" (I apologise but I'm fasting today!)

"Kiss tyohaar ke kaaran?" (What festival is it today?)

"Tyohaar nahi magar aaj somvaar hai toh mai apni nritya ke liye, natraj ki aradhana karti hoon. Haan magar Meera didi kar sakteen hain kyunki woh mere saath mandir bhooke peith aayeen theen." (No festival but I keep fast every Monday for Lord Natraj as he is Lord of dance and I worship him. But yes Meera Didi can have as she came to temple with me empty stomach.) Meera glared at Gayatri but she ignored her glare.

"Beta, kya aap hummein, humare kamre tak chod sakteen hain?" (My dear, can you please drop me till my room?)

"Maa mai..." (Maa, I...)

"Nahin Rishabh, mai Gayatri se kuch akele mein baat karna chahti hoon." (No Rishabh! I want to talk to Gayatri in privacy.) Savitri Devi whispered.
Rishabh nodded understandingly. Rishabh, Maan, Vicky and Meera sat for breakfast. Savitri Devi and Annie's breakfast was sent in their respective rooms.

Once in Savitri Devi's room, Gayatri helped Savitri Devi on the sofa. Just then the breakfast arrived and Gayatri started serving. When Gayatri was serving the breakfast and she bent foward the string of black beads was dislodged and started dangling. Seeing which Savitri Devi immediately exclaimed," Gayatri beta, aap ki shaadi ho chuki hai? (Gayatri you are married?)

"SHAADI! Nahi toh aap kyun poonch rahi hain?" (MARRIED?? No why are you asking?) Savitri Devi indicated towards Gayatri black string of beads.



"OH YEH? Yeh to Maa aur Pitaji ne hummein buri nazar se bacchane ke liye pehnaya thaa." (Oh these? This my mother and father tied around my neck so no one casts an evil eye on me.)
Although Savitri Devi was not convinced with Gayatri's answer but she let it pass fot time being. Savitri Devi and Gayatri were talking and didn't realise how an hour had passed till Meera came and said, "Dadiji, maaf kijiyegaa magar abb hummein chalna chahiye." (Dadiji, sorry to intrude but we have to leave now.) Seeing Meera, Gayatri also realised how late it is and got up from the sofa. She touched Savitri Devi's feet and she blessed Gayatri. Meera also followed Gayatri and Savitri Devi blessed them "Jug, jug jeeyo beta! Aaj se aap dono bhi hummei "Dadimaa" bulaiye Maan, Vicky aur Annie ki tehara." (Blessings! You both also please address me as "Dadimaa" just like Maan, Vicky and Annie do!)

Seeing Rishabh and Garima there Gayatri touched their feet as well as asked, "Auntyji Ankita abb kaisi hai?" (Aunty, how is Ankita?)

"Theek hai beta. Abhi soo rahi hai." (Better. She is sleeping just now.)

"I'm sorry that because of me she became unwell."

"Nahi beta ismei tumhari galati nahi hai. Annie Geet ko bahut pyaar karti thee. Woh Geet ko apna role model samjhati thee iss liye Geet ki mauth ki news sehan nahi kar paayi." (No my dear its not your fault. Annies loves Geet a lot. She use to consider Geet her role model. Hence, she could not bear the news of Geet's death.)

Seeing Maan and Vicky, Gayatri wished, "Have a nice day gentlemen!" Gayatri walked ahead followed by Meera.

Soon Rishabh and Vicky left for office. Maan went to the study in KM to finish his office work. Garima sat in Savitri Devi's room with her breakfast tray. Once Savitri Devi was sure that Maan is busy she broached the topic.
"Garima, tumhei Gayatri aur Meera kaisi lageen?" (Garima, how did you like Gayatri and Meera?)

"Bahut acchi. Magar Meera kuch zyaada modern nahi hai?" (Very nice. But don't you think Meera is too modern?)

"Haan hai, tabhi woh Vicky he liye ek dam sahi hai. Woh Vicky ko kaabu mei rakhegi." (Yes she is. Thats why she will be able to handle Vicky.)

"Inki bhi yehi iccha hai ki Vicky aur Meera ki shaadi karaa di jaaye!" (Even Rishabh also is saying the same thing.)

"Bahut jald Meera ke maa-baap bharath aane waale hain, tab hum unse Meera kaa haath maange gaye." (Very soon Meera's parents will arrive in India, than at once we will ask for Meera's hand for Vicky.)

"Dadimaa, Meera ke Mom aur Dad Friday ko aa rahe hain." (Dadimaa, Meera's parents are arriving on Friday to India.) Maan answered.


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CHAPTER 6



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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NEXT DAY, 6:30 a.m.
Rishabh before going for his daily workout decided to have heart to heart talk with his mother in privacy. Savitri Devi had just finished her pooja when Rishabh walked in and close on his heels was Garima.





Once Savitri Devi, Rishabh and Garima were seated with their respective teacups, Rishabh spoke in a grim voice, "Maa, aap Maan ko itna sab ho jaane ke baad kaise maaf kar sakteen hain?" (Maa, how can you forget everything Maan has done and accept him whole heartedly.)

"Rishabh, humne aap se pehle bhi kahaa thaa aur abb phir kehte hain, "Sirf jail jaana hi sazaa nahi hoti hai!" Agar hum bhi Maan ko aapki tehara apni zindagi se nikaal dete toh to woh khudkhushi kar lete." (Rishabh, I had told you earlier also and will repeat myself again, "Going to prison is not the only form of punishment!" If I would have disowned Maan like you he would have committed suicide.)

"KYA??" (WHAT??) Garima screamed.

"Haan humne unhein dekha thaa jab woh uss din farmhouse aaye the. Maan ko Geet ki mauth ke baare mein tabhi pata chala thaa. Maan ne kaha thaa "Dadimaa, koi bhi doctor mujhe mere gunaah se mukht nahi kar sakta. Sirf mauth hi kar sakti hai." Hum yeh nahi keh rahe hain ki aap Maan ko maaf kar dijiye aur sazaa matt dijiye magar agar hum unhein zindagi ki majhdhaar mein akela chodh denge toh woh mauth kaa sahara bhi le sakte hain." (Yes, I had seen Maan that day at farmhouse when for first time he came to know about Geet's demise. Maan told me " Dadimaa no doctor can give me respite from guilt for the sin I have committed. Only death can give me relief!" I'm not asking you to forgive him or support his crime, but I'm only asking you all not to boycott him otherwise there could be a high probability of his wanting to embrace death.)

"Mujhe nahi maloom thaa ki humara beta itna kamzoor hai!" (I never knew that my son is so weak!) Rishabh said sarcastically.



"Maan pichle chhe saal se apne gunahon ki daldal ke beech ander hi ander ghul raha hai. Hummein toh uske gunah ke baare mein sirf teen dil pehle patta chala hai aur hummein kitni gilaani ho rahi hai. Maan paschytaap karna bhi chahe toh kar nahi sakta, kyunki uske aur samaaj ke hisaab se Geet abhi jeevit nahi hai." (Maan for past six years is suffering from his guilt. He feels as if his guilt is like a quicksand pulling him deeper & deeper into its deep core giving no path of escape! We all only know about his crime for three days and how guilty we are feeling? Even if Maan wants to repent for his sins, he can't as Geet is not alive according to him and society.)

"Kya aapko lagta hai ki Geet jeevit hai, Maa?" (Do you feel Geet is alive, Maa?) Garima asked.

"Hum poore vishwaas se toh nahi keh sakte magar hummein Gayatri se milkar aur baat karke umeed jaagi hai ki shyaad "Gayatri hi Geet hai!" Khair woh toh hum patta lagaa hi lenge jab hum Ram aur Priya Kapoor se milenge. Garima aur Rishabh abhi aap dono Ram aur Priya Kapoor se Vicky aur Meera ki shaadi ki baat karne kaa sochiye, agar aap dono ko yeh rishta sahi lagta hai toh!!" (I'm not 100% sure, but after meeting and talking to Gayatri, I have strong feeling that "Gayatri is Geet!" Anyway that we will find out after meeting Ram and Priya Kapoor. Garima and Rishabh now you both try to meet Ram and Priya Kapoor so that you can talk about Vicky and Meera's wedding, if you both are happy with this alliance!)



Then Savitri Devi, Rishabh and Garima started talking on other business topics like running and management of Khurana Foundation (KF) and Khurana Institute of Learning (KIL) etc.

An hour later Maan entered smartly dressed in casuals.



Seeing Maan, Rishabh got up and said formally, "Maan mere khayal se kal se tumhein Khurana Constructions wapis aana chahiye kyunki mujhe tumse Ranawats ke project ke baare mein baat karni hai. Accha mai abb chalta hoon office mein bahut kaam hai." (Maan, I feel you should resume office soon. I have to discuss Ranawat's project with you. Now I shall leave to get ready for work.)



Garima came and caressed Maan's face affectionately and followed Rishabh in a hurry. Savitri Devi spoke to Maan and she answered Maan's queries regarding her health. Then both grandmother and grandson left for breakfast. After breakfast Rishabh and Vicky left for office and Garima left to see Annie. Maan was about to leave for study when Savitri Devi said, "Maan aap humare saath chaliye hummein aap se kuch baat karni hai." (Maan come with me, I want to talk to you.)

Maan nodded and followed Savitri Devi. Once grandmother and grandson duo reached the study and were seated Savitri Devi asked, "Maan hum aapki zubaan mein jaana chahte hain ki Geet apko kaisi lagteen theen?" (Maan I want to know in your words what was your first impression regards Geet?)

"Mai samjha nahi Dadimaa, aap kya janna naa chahti hain?" (In what way Dadimaa?)

"Maan hum yeh jaana naa chahte hain ki aapko Geet mein kya pasand thaa?" (Maan I want to know what did you like about Geet?)

"Dadimaa, mujhe Geet ki saadagiaur uska bholapan pasand thaa. Woh humesha aise kapade pehanti thee jismei tann ki numaish naa ho jaise traditional salwaar kurte aur churidaar kurte. Geet kabhi bhi jeans, trousers, skirts, spaghetti strap dresses, minis, shorts waghera nahi pehnati thee. Makeup mein sirf apni khubsoorat aankhon mein kaajal lagati thee. Aur haan ek baar usne garara bhi pehna thaa." (Dadimaa, I loved Geet's simplicity and innocence. She always wore clothes covering her body i.e. traditional salwaar kurtas, churidaar kurtas. She never wore trousers, skirts, spaghetti strap dresses, minis, shorts etc. for makeup she only outlined her beautiful eyes with kohl pencil. And once she also wore garara.)

"Garara" kya hota hai?" (What is "Garara"?)

"Dadimaa, yeh ek bahut graceful dress hoti hai jisse Mughalon ne ijaad kiya thaa. Aur Nawabon ki begumein isse pehnati theen." (Dadimaa, its an extremely graceful dress which Mughals invented. It was dress worn by begums (Queens) of the Nawabs.)



"Tumhe yeh sab kaise maloom?" (How do you know all this?)

"Geet ne battaiya thaa." (Geet explained.)

"Toh uske pehnaave par tumhare college mein toh uska bahut mazak udhata hoga?" (Geet must be made fun off by her collegemates due to her dressing up!)

"Sirf akele pehnaave par hi nahi, uske baalon par aur uske chasme par bhi?" (Not only on her attire but on her hairstyle and her spectacles.)

"Baalon par aur chasme par matlab?" (What do you mean her hairstyle and her spectacles?)

"Geet ek akeli ladki thee jo apne lambe baalon ko ek moti choti mein baandhe rakhti thee. Mai aapko uski tasveer dekhata hoon." (Geet was the only girl on the campus who would keep her hair tied in a thick braid. Wait I'll show you her photograph.) Maan took out his wallet and showed Geet's photograph in which she was looking nerdy & lacking fashion sense but at the same time looking simple and innocent as well !



Maan also showed Savitri Devi their one and only wedding photograph.



But Savitri Devi's mature eyes could see Geet's beauty and high class behind the disguise of specs, braided hair and simple cotton salwaar kurta which Maan and other collegemates could not. Savitri Devi always felt that Geet belongs to a rich and affluent family maybe Royalty when she had noticed one kangan which Geet always wore in her left hand.



"Aur tumne aisi seedhi-saadhi ladki ke saath itna ghinona kaam kiya? Uska poore samaaj aur poore college mein mazak banna diya. Hummei Maan aap par shram aati hai!" (And you did such a disgusting act with such a simple and innocent girl! You made her a laughing stock in front of whole college and society! Maan, I'm ashamed of you!) Savitri Devi said looking at the photographs.

"Dadimaa mai pichle chhe (6) saal se naa toh Geet se; naa Vicky aur Annie se aur sabse zyaada khud se nazarein nahi mila sak raha hoon!!" Maan said in a depressed tone with his eyes closed reflecting on his crime. (Dadimaa, since past 6 years, I'm unable to face Geet, Vicky, Annie and most importantly myself for this disgusting crime of mine.)



Before Maan could again go into depression, Savitri Devi changed the topic, "Geet ne garara kab pehna thaa?" (When did Geet wear Garara?)

"Saat saal pehle ki baat hai, Geet ki raging ke baad maine Geet ko bahut doondha magar woh mujhe nahi mili. Tabhi Eid-ul-Fitr (Source: Google) ka tyohar aaya. Humare college mein ek English ke Professor the, Professor Ahmad Ansari. Professor Ansari har Eid-ul-Fitr ko kuch khaas students ko apne ghar bulate the aur wahaan unhein Mrs. Ansari ke haath ka banna khaana aur sewaiyaan khilaate the. Uss saal unke bete Anwar ne ek game organise kiya. Jab hum sab students paunche toh ek darwaaze se ladke ghusse aur ek darwaaze se burque mein dhakki ladkiyaan." (Seven years back after the ragging incident, I searched and searched for Geet but could not find her. Just then festival of Eid-ul-Fitr came. Our English teacher, Professor Ahmad Ansari use to call some of his students to his home to celebrate Eid-ul-Fitr with him and have food and sewaiyaan (Vermicilli pudding) made by Mrs. Ansari. That year his son, Anwar had organised a game. When we all student's reached Professor Ahmad Ansari's home, there was one entrance for burqua clad girls and one for boys!) Maan stopped to have a drink of water and then continued, "Jab sab students aagaye toh humne dekha ki sab ladkiyaan kaale burque mein hain. Game yeh thaa ki har ladki ek nazam yaa ghazal pesh karegi aur usko sunkar jo bhi ladka emotionally move hota hai woh uss burquewaali ladki ke saamne khada ho jaaye. Uske baad ladka ek nazam yaa ghazal pesh karega aur agar woh ladki uski nazam yaa ghazal sunkar emotionally move ho jaayegi woh apne chehre se burqua hata degi. Agar ladki burqua nahi hatta ti toh dono ladka aur ladki game se bahaar. Magar har ladki ke saamne kewal ek ladka hi khadaa ho sakta hai. Ladkiyaan ek line mein khadhi theen aur ladke ek mein. Game shuru hua, ladkiyon ne gaana shuru kiya. Kuch ladkiyon ko ghazal yaa nazam ke shabd hi nahi maloom the aur kuch bahut besuri theen. Acchanak ek bahut meethi aur surili awaaz ne ek nazam padhi, "Nagama aur sher ki saugaat..."


"Maine bahut chaha ki apne aap ko rokoon magar rok hi nahi payaa aur mai ek dam uss burquewaali ke saamne khada ho gaya aur pir maine gayaa, "Mere mehboob tujhe meri mohabat..."


aur mera gaana khatam hone se pehle hi uss mohtarma ne apna hijaab ulat diya..." (When all students were present, we saw girls walking in a line wearing a burqua. Game was this that each girl had to recite a poem from urdu poetry and the boy who felt most connected with it would come and stand in front of the girl wearing buqua who was reciting. After that the boy would recite a poem from urdu poetry. If the girl felt connected with the poetry she had to lift her burqua. If she doesn't lift her burqua both boy and girl are out of the game. The rule was that only one boy could stand in front of one girl. Girls were standing in one line and boys in one. Soon the game started and girls started reciting. Some girls did not know the lyrics and some were singing off key. Just then a sweet and melodious voice sang,"Nagama aur sher ki saugaat..." despite of my brain stopping me from going, my heart just followed the voice and I stood in front of the girl with black burqua and started singing, "Mere mehboob tujhe meri mohabat..." but before I could finish the song, the young lady uncovered her face...)



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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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wow double update
meera aur Vicky Ki marriage Ki baat horahi hai
dadimaa ko lag raha hai gaytri he geet hai
I hope aisa he ho
waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Daadima feels that Gaytri is Geet as Daadima has always felt in the past that Geet is very graceful and maybe has royal blood she had also a very expensive bangle that she always wore
Daadima wants to know from Maan want he liked about Geet and its evident that he loved her yet he himself failed to realized it
Daadima also tells his parents not to boycott Maan

waiting eagerly for next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice updates
Dadi think Gytari is Geet
Geeet come in KM
Maan is till in his guilt
Rista for vicky & meera
Thanks for PM
Update soon

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