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AASUS

@AASUS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Fatima me ishhh here 🤗
ur a cutie and worked so hard as well as sharing fans' work on a busy day. Appreciate all your effort. ⭐️❤️😎

The story is so beautifully written. Wow loads of kids and so it's my kinda story.
Very polished writing - obviously a very good writer you're with superb imagination.
I am happy to see the family in back ground scene of Meher and Preet.
Beautiful character description. But I'm wondering did Meher here what Preet said at the end - the title of the story? Not sure or may be it was for readers to know what was in Preet's mind. Either way interesting title.

Glad you participated in Meher Preet anniversary celebration and helping Fatima with your creation.⭐️

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tanuharshiti

@tanuharshiti

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

awosome story wow 👏 👏

loved it

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Nataliaaaa

@Nataliaaaa

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AASUS
Fatima me ishhh here 🤗
ur a cutie and worked so hard as well as sharing fans' work on a busy day. Appreciate all your effort. ⭐️❤️😎

The story is so beautifully written. Wow loads of kids and so it's my kinda story.
Very polished writing - obviously a very good writer you're with superb imagination.
I am happy to see the family in back ground scene of Meher and Preet.
Beautiful character description. But I'm wondering did Meher here what Preet said at the end - the title of the story? Not sure or may be it was for readers to know what was in Preet's mind. Either way interesting title.

Glad you participated in Meher Preet anniversary celebration and helping Fatima with your creation.⭐️

Thnx for appreciating. Well yes meher did hear that but she was too tired to respond and they both agreed 😉 and preet realized that its hard to manage a cricket tram 😈