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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

this was so good! loved it!

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Aradh_27
@Nimmi My brain is functioning so slowly right now, thanks to all the cramming, so I'm just hoping I'm able to type a coherent reply.
Off the top of my head- KNR doesn't catch hold of Ragini in time and the bullet does hit Tejaswini. After narrowly escaping her death, Suraj decides to take her advice and move away to Dubai. A year later, he gets a message from Chakor inviting him to her wedding.

And

Tejaswini divorced KNR years ago and left the village with their son and on a mad impulse, demanded the last person she enslaved-Chakor.

wow.. both plot lines sounds awesome.
already got rough idea as to how to proceed with the first one.
let's see how it goes.

have to daudaoo more dimaag ke ghode for the second part.

cramming eh?
all the very best aradhana.
best wishes.
good luck.. go slay girl..

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sukiya123
This is great ... this is what we should be hearing in reel life when they look into each other's eyes for a minute...

this was wonderful keep writing

thank you so much sukiya.😳.
ahh they way they look into each other's eyes.

thanks again.
love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: geetkumar
I knew it!! I so knew it that he was dreaming. Suraj Babu's dimaag is like a tubelight. Der se jaltaa hai. I absolutely loved it. You planning on writing another novel like 'Angel"? REALLY??!!! By the way I ate ,drank, slept "Angel". I was kind of obsessed with it.
And as per your demand of Love, Girl, I am sending you loads of it.❤️
Geet

geet..
🤗🤗🤗

you are a sweetheart.
yes.. our suraj babu could be diabolical when it comes to tedha thinking but a true blue tubelight when it comes to such mushy thoughts.

aww thank you so much for loving Angel so much.
means a lot. truly touched.

well i lived Angel to the highest possible level of obsession. hence kind of apprehensive walking that way again. besides other stuff.
my old muse.

so sticking to short stories for my new muse for now.

biggest hugs for your love geet... wind beneath my wings.
thank you SO so much.
love you bas.❤️