A little joke for you guys

Boys hate girls because

We always look for flaws

Why aren't I pretty?

Are other girls more witty?

What is so wrong with me?

Stop staring at Marie!

We tend to be aggressive

When it comes to our man,

Don't you dare look at him

Or Ill bite you Joanne!

Boys hate girls because

We always look for flaws.

Am I like extremely ugly?

Do you think I am smugly?

Am I completely conceded?

Don't answer that,

Your comments are unneeded!

We tend to always complain

But our words go in vain

Someday someone might hear, us!

Someday we will stop the fuss!

Boy, that will be the day,

But for now all we could do is pray!

I have a little joke peom I made up. Not much and I posted it on another forums--Sher O shayri but it didnt work out too well. I dont think anyone liked it.

I was seeing whether you guys would like it. PLEASE LEAVE views..... please!!!

Thanks

awsome!..
really describes the relation between the 2 in an enjoyable way 😃

hey not bad......dat was really nice...n sp. since u made it urself....which in itself is a big thing...

good one btw.... 😆 😆 😆

do keep sharing more... 😆

I was more surprised when I read that you had written it yourself....that was awesome.... 😊

good work! that was very nice. Thanks for sharing! I would love to read some more poems by you!