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part-114
In bhalla's mansion:
'maa please how much time the ladies in this house will take to get ready,we are not guests to go at time we should be there before the function starts
for godsake it is my wife's godhbari' raman shouted standing infront of his mother who is taking whole life to get ready with her DIL's
'please jiju we will take time to get ready you go and join the men,we will be coming out after getting ready' said mihika while sarika supported mihika
what sisters you are ?you both should be in appa's home helping them in preparations but you escaped the work there and busy here in putting the makeup
mihika:ho ho jiju there are many people to manage the function and preparations,my parents,sarika's parents,appa,amma,vandhu akka,bala jiju,raghu uncle,shanthi aunty especially humare bhai karthik aur uski madath karne keliye rinki
aap bahuth sweet hu kithna pareshan hu,lekin sabkuch teek hojayengi,aap yehi rahkar humko lecture sunayi tho aapko ishu akka ko meet karne me late hojayega
raman:thumse baath karna hi bekar,jaldhi ready hojavo,miney ms.victoria ko dekhna padega voh ready huva ya nahi
sarika who didn't got raman's words questioned raman 'jiju queen victoria koun hi hamara ghar mey'
raman:hi naa mera daadi,voh solah saal ladki jaise thayar horahi hu subah sey,bagawan mujje kithna pareshan kar rahi hu yeh ghar ke log
seeing raman left their room cursing himself ladies giggled at his impatience
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raman walked angrily into daadi's room to see her busy with her makeup 'daadi you are doing make up in such a way that today is your marriage,for godsake why you people are playing with me,please daadi get ready fast,i should had listened to ishitha she asked me to stay back till godhbari function but i refused stating that daadi might feel hurt that iam giving more importance to wife and in-laws
now you are giving me gift for being pyaari potha by making my wife angry on me on her baby shower'
daadi:smiles seeing raman's tension,not to worry him more she speaks out 'ithna gussa aapni daadi par,yeh tho bilkul acha nahi hi'
raman:tho kya karu mi aapke liye ithna kuch kar rahi hu aur aap mujje sabke saath milkar thang kar rahi hu
daadi:accha raman aab koyi games nahi hi,hum nikalthi hu,mi bulathi hu thumhari maa ko voh ek minute mey bahar gadi mey baitjaayengi
raman:ha mujje patha hi maa tho sirf aapse daarthi hu,he smiles along with daadi
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in the car:
raman on call with bala:'bala everything is fine right?all arrangements are done right?is ishitha fine she is not lifting my calls and you people are not at all supporting me in talking with her
bala:raman this is 15th time you are calling me,if you call and disturb me like this how can i check whether every arrangements are done or not,aur rahi baath ishitha keliye hi tho voh bahuth gusse mey thi voh humara baath bhi nahi maanengi
thumhari biwi ka godhbari hi yaar thum ithna late aayengi tho vusko kaisa lagega
'ha mujje patha hi bala lekin mi kya karu meri gharwala bhi naa kithna shouk hi unn sabko ready ho ney mey koyi meri baath suna nahi' said raman glaring at his family members while all giggled silently seeing raman's restlessness
while the other side bala and the rest of the family members laughed at his plight because of their teasing plan
raghu:what vishwa you too joined in the bacha party to tease raman and our ishitha she is sitting in her room sadly because of you and bhalla's plan
mr.iyer:chelo raghu dhoor rahne sey pyaar badjayengi,aaj sey ishitha raman ke saath hi rahengi naa,and i know even after ishitha's delivery he won't allow her to visit our house,this is the last chance for us to tease raman for a little time,
meri damand bahuth acche thi
raghu:mere bhi damand
shanthi and mrs.iyer both together speaks "aab aap bandh kijiye aapka damand aayengi uskeliye saare arrangements acche tharah sey hona hi naa
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karthik in ishitha's room:'akka aap please breakfast karo naa,aap iss time mey aisa bhooki nahi rah sakthi
ishitha:karthik you stay out of this,i know what is good for me
karthik:yeah i know how good you are at taking care of yourself,no breakfast you are keeping your baby hungry as you are angry on the baby's father
ishitha glances at her bump listening to karthik's words
seeing ishitha getting influenced by his words he continues 'see akka now the time is 10:00am till now you didn't had anything,baby ko bhook lag rahi hona,voh bhi uski mumma mey bahuth gussa hojayengi aur jab voh bahar aajayengi naa thab voh uska papa ka side le liya tho,aapko koun support karengi jab aap aur jiju jagada karengi
ishu:ayyo amma yeh tho sahi baath hi,meri baby meri side lena hoga aur uss raavan kumar ko samajna hoga mamma aur baby kya kar sakthi hu jab papa promise nahi nibayengi tho
karthik:tho mi breakfast lekar aavu,
ishu:ha lekar aavo aur mujje aloo paratha chahiye,amma banaya kya?
karthik:periamma ko patha chalgayi na thumhara moodswings kaise hosakthi isiliye banaya thumhara aloo ka paratha,mi lekar aavungi
ishitha nods her head happily
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ishitha looks with tearful eyes when her brother is feeding her
karthik looking at her sister in tears he gets concerned 'akka jyada mirchi hi kyaa,aapka ankoon me aasu arahi hu'
'yeh aasu isiliye kyounki meri bhai mujse bahuth pyar karthi hu' she said wiping her tears
karthik:smiles at her akka who didn't changed for him a bit,'you are the same ishu akka whom i started loving when she was 9years old and i was 5years old
when i used to do any mistake you used to take it on your head and saved me from appa's scoldings later you used to scold me for doing stupid things
both laughs sharing their childhood memories
after she finished her breakfast she enquired about raman's and bhalla's arrival for which karthik nodded in negative making her lips curl down
karthik:akka woh aajayengi bala jiju ney raman jiju sey baath kiya voh raasthe mey hi
ishitha nods her head sadly while karthik leaves the room
ishu(st):raman ko mi chodungi nahi voh tho humara baby shower mey ithna late kar rahi hu
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bhalla's enters the iyers mansion everyone greets each while raman rushes into ishitha's room not caring about anyone seeing raman everyone laughs at their drama
not to extend draman more they follow raman to convince ishitha
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listening to the foot steps ishitha turns towards the door to see raman walking inside,seeing him she angrily turns away with an angry pout
smiling at her anger he walks towards her,getting no response from her he wraps his hands around her bump resting his chin on her shoulder 'i am sorry madrasan'
getting out of his grip she angrily turns towards him placing her hands on her hips 'aap sorry bol rahi hu,aapko patha hi yeh meri pehli baby shower lekin aapko kuch parva nahi hi meri'
raman:aisa math bolo madrasan,mamma aur ghar mey saara log jaan bhooch kar late kiya,meri koyi galthi nahi hi
ishitha:aapka mistake kisi aur par math lagao
just then bhallas and iyers enters into the room to stop their fight getting more
daadi:ishitha raman sach bolrahi hu beta,hum saab milkar use chadrahi thi,humko tho raman bhalla ko thang karne keliye baar baar mouka nahi milengi naa
appa:ha kanna hum tho baas aap dhono ko tease kar rahi thi,humari vajah sey raman late aayaa,aur function aab nahi shaam mey
listening to their talk ishitha looked at raman shockingly while he kept a puppy face so that he can get out of his moodswing wife's anger
ishitha keeping her hands on her hips she walked towards her family while raman followed her showing tongue at his family
'appa amma aur daadi aap sab milkar meri pathi ko thang kar rahi tho,seeing him alone you targeted my husband,aap sab kitna bura hu,aapse mujje baath hi nahi karna,wife and husband ko thang kar rahi thi aap saab,aab javo aap sab yaha sey mujje meri patha sey akela time spend karna hi
romi:akela mathlab kya karna chahiye bhabi aap bhai ke saath
raman:mera paas aajavo beta mi bathaungi hum kya karne waali thi
placing his both hands on his cheeks romi nods his head in negative and rushes out of their room followed by everyone
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bolting the door ishitha looks at raman with a pout on her lips,'sorry raman aapko sab bahuth thang kiya aur miney bahuth kuch sunaya bina sochkar''
'issbar aisa sorry nahi chelengi ishitha' said raman with a serious face
tho aap hi bathavo mi kya karne sey aap meri sorry accept karengi asked ishitha sadly thinking her husband is angry at her in real
raman:tum karungi jo mi bolungi?
ishu:haa karungi bolona aap mi kya karu
raman:tho mujje perfect french vali kiss dedho,ithne hot lag rahi hu meri biwi aajkal but mujje luck tho nahi hi aab mi kuch nahi karsakthi hu so atleast kiss tho milna hi naa
her cheeks adorned with a pink shade listening to her husbands words mouthing her favourite word 'kuch bhi' she walked towards dressing table
raman:tho thumhe maafi nahi chahiye mujse
ishu:ha chahiye
raman:tho karo mi jo kaha
'ramannn' she shyly uttered his name making him to grinn at her shyness
raman:kya maafi chahiye ya nahi
ishitha pouts listening to raman's question
raman:jaldhi bolo madrasan mujje baahar jaakar arrangements dekhna hi
ishitha:she silently walks towards him knowing very well what he wants from her she tries to move closer to him wrapping her hands around his neck but when her bump touched him she looks pouting at him
raman:koyi baath nahi hi madrasan aab sirf 2months hi aur uske baadh thum chodungi nahi lekin aab mujje thumko punishment dena hi
running his hands along her loose hair he looks at her hinting her about his wish
smiling at him she gives a wet kiss on his chin making raman's lips to curve up into a beautiful smile,to tease him she bites his lower lip making him to look at her angrily for playing with him
raman:madrasan aab thumne raam ko dekha aab ravan kumar ko dekhna padega
before she could analyse his words her lips met with his for a passionate kiss
when he felt her getting restless because of lack of air he left her lips making her to take deep breath
raman:patha chala ravan kumar ka style
ishu:aap tho sachi mey raavan kumar hi,she said hitting him playfully
he held her hands which are busy in hitting him,she looked at him seeing her hands arrested in his
bahuth miss kar rahi hu madrasan thumhe,ithna bada saza diya thumne mujje
ishu:aisa math bolo raman,mi aapse bahuth pyar karthi hu,mi kabhi aapko thagleef nahi dey sakthi hu
raman:kissing her palms he side hugs her whispering his love to her 'i love you madrasan'
ishu:i love you too and baby loves you
he smiles looking at her bump listening ishitha's words
kneeling down infront of her he kisses the bump making ishitha to giggle
raman:why you are laughing madrasan he asked making a face
'baby is laughing raman' she said walking towards the bed as she was unable to stand for a long time
seeing her discomfort he placed the pillow at her back making her to sit in comfort
ishu:aajkal tho baby bahuth thang kar rahi hu mujje,she said stretching her legs,raman shifted his gaze towards her feet which are swelled
he caresses them making her to close her eyes in relief
raman:you are showing so much patience bearing all this pain
ishu:laughing at his statement,she gestures him to sit behind her with her hands while raman obliges her
pecking his cheek she rests her head on his shoulder answering his question 'every woman before becoming mother happily takes each pain into her embrace,we will forget every pain when we will see our symbol of love in our hands'
raman looks at her surprisingly to see whether she is same ishitha who was very childish and stubborn
ishu:these changes will come automatically in a woman life raman,aap ithna surprise math hojavo
raman smiles looking at her,you became intelligent also,ithna bhuddhu thi thum pehle
listening his taunts she pouts looking at raman making him to pull her into a hug
before they could spend some more lone time mihika knocked the door making raman to open it cursing them
mihika:sorry jiju but it is mehendi time,we should take akka
having no other choice he walks out along with ishitha
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soon the hall filled with ladies applying mehendi while the men enjoying their privacy with snacks at other side
but raman's eyes never left ishitha,her smiles when her hands getting filled with mehendi,her backpain not being able to lean,her swollen feet struggling to touch the floor
what made him to smile is his wife smiling bearing all the pain and discomfort so easily
his daadi's hand on his shoulder made him to come out of his thoughts
daadi:a woman can bear all the world's pain for her child raman,and a father can do anything for his child that you will come to know when for the first time you will held your baby in your arms
raman smiles through his tears listening to his daadi's words
rest of the day went in busy with arrangements by all the family members while raman always kept an eye at ishitha taking care of her every need
soon the guests started arriving for the function while iyers and bhalla's were busy in receiving the guests
daadi:mihika bring ishitha we have to start the function
nodding her head mihika and sarika left to ishitha's room
raman started staring at the closed door to see his lady love
his eyes glistened seeing ishitha decked in blue and pink color kanchivaram saree her hair tied up into a bun which was adorned with jasmine flowers
giving a complete south indian look
seeing her both hands with only one bangle each he looked confusingly for making his wife half ready
raman(st):yeh pagal bhi naa chudiya pehenna bhoolgayi,aur voh dhono sirf uske paas kadi rahne keliye hi,uska akka ko help karna atha hi nahi
making ishitha to sit on the decorated chair,soon the ritual started
amma put the tilak on ishitha's forehead and made her to wear green colored bangles,later she filled ishitha's lap with fruits,sweets and gold,
next every woman continued the same all along the ritual ishitha's face filled with smiles
unable to keep his excitment raman questions amma about his doubt 'amma mi bi ishitha ko godh bar sakthi kya aap jaise?'
all woman looked at raman surprisingly while ishitha smiled at him
ishu:amma raman ka blessings bhi chahiye naa mujje aur baby ko,she asked her mother with a puppy face
daadi:ha madhavi karne dho raman ko
finally amma nods her head for her children happiness
raman walks towards ishitha and applies tilak on her forehead applies sandalwood to her cheeks,finally makes her wear red colored bangles and fills her lap with sweets and gold
while ishitha has eyes only for her husband his smile his enjoyment for doing the ritual to her
he steps aside after doing the ritual while ishitha gestures mihika to take all the things from her lap
she walks towards raman and tries to bend to take his blessings while raman stops her from bending and speaks 'ishitha thum yeh kya kar rahi hu,thumhe thagleef hojayengi,my love will be always with you,cupping her face he pecks her forehead making the entire room to fill with the family smiles seeing the loving couple
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