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Posted: 8 years ago
Hola, peeps! Sorry for disappearing on ya'll but I have guests at home so couldn't come online earlier. Ya'll still want me to update? ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Hola, peeps! Sorry for disappearing on ya'll but I have guests at home so couldn't come online earlier. Ya'll still want me to update? ๐Ÿ˜†


Hey Sarcy! Yes please ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Sarcy's back!!
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Priyanka placed her hand in his and together they walked to the prayer hall in silence. He sat her on a chair in the latter aisles and then excused himself as he went to speak to another monk who had greeted him as they passed. She observed him from where she sat, his expressions between genuine cordiality and warmth as he spoke to the men. As guruji convened the session, the group dispersed and he came and sat beside her. Through the session, as guruji spoke about accepting the decisions of life with a positive outlook, he listened intently, not even batting an eyelash while Priyanka constantly kept stealing glances to see if his face would reveal an emotion, but there was nothing. At the end of the talk, guruji instructed the audience to close their eyes and perform a few exercises that would help them channel their thoughts and focus on eliminating the negative energies within the self. Priyanka did as instructed, however, at the end of the session when she opened her eyes, Ranveer had already left.
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As guruji instructed them to close their eyes and think of their happy memories, like each time, Ipshita's smiling face danced before his eyes and her chirpy voice teased him mercilessly. But today, just as he began to relax and let himself feel the happiness of her fleeting presence, the colours started to dissolve and the image began to fade, leaving in it's place an image that tore his heart to shreads. His little Ippy lying lifeless in a pool of her blood, her impish smile wiped off forever. Ranveer felt his chest constrict and a sob caught in his throat. His eyes snapped open, as a searing pain crossed his chest. His hands fisted as he willed the image away, in vain. Jerking up from his seat, he stalked out of the prayer hall.

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She found him in the garden, leaning with his hands on the parapet. She hesitated, and found herself contemplating to run away but before her actions could betray her, she spoke.

"W-why did you l-leave the p-prayer s-service suddenly?"

He didn't turn but she noticed his grip tighten on the wall as he spoke, "I can ask you the same, Miss Oberoi."

"A-are you okay?"

"Asking questions is easier than giving answers, isn't it, Miss Oberoi?"

"I- I - "

"You shouldn't be here, Miss Oberoi," his voice was controlled, reigning in a thousand emotions.

"I w-was just tr-trying to help," she whispered.

At that, he spun around, the anguish raw in his voice, his eyes brimming with unshed tears as he uttered one word that clearly said he was referring to more than this conversation.

"Why?"

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(Typed away as I was cooking in the kitchen ๐Ÿ˜†, so not sure about the word count. Excuse me if it went over 300.) ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by -Sarcy- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic update Sarcy! WOW! This is some proper angsty stuff! You're awesome! And a superwoman judging from the note. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping

Fantastic update Sarcy! WOW! This is some proper angsty stuff! You're awesome! And a superwoman judging from the note.๐Ÿ˜‰



Haha! Till this evening, I had no idea how to take this ahead. Then suddenly, this idea struck and it started forming in my head and I wanted to type it out before I lost it. ๐Ÿ˜†

Who goes next?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-



Haha! Till this evening, I had no idea how to take this ahead. Then suddenly, this idea struck and it started forming in my head and I wanted to type it out before I lost it. ๐Ÿ˜†

Who goes next?


Deepu's turn. Lemme pm her! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
It;s a great turn of things.. and thanks to Annie's post, we have a goal to work towards. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Prinku's realisation of her love for the ACP... btw admire you for cooking and typing out this story! I tried checking my mail while cooking and have a burn to show for my efforts! ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Deepu's turn. Lemme pm her!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
It;s a great turn of things.. and thanks to Annie's post, we have a goal to work towards.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Prinku's realisation of her love for the ACP... btw admire you for cooking and typing out this story! I tried checking my mail while cooking and have a burn to show for my efforts!๐Ÿ˜†



I messaged Deepu too. Looks like she has retired for the night.

I'm loving this too much! Can't wait to see how Deepu or the next writer takes the story ahead.

Oh, ouch! Hope that wasn't a serious burn. I always type on my phone so it's with me all the time. The good side to it is that I can jot ideas as and when they strike. And I'm too used to juggling things now so it works easily for me. ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Good Mrng and sorry for being a lazy goof... Here it does.. Sarcy, I live you for that update..
"Why" The word echoed in the silence that prevailed. Priyanka looked at with those nervous eyes unable to find an answer. She thought to herself "Why" She thought "Why had she come around and spoken to him ? She definitely shouldn't be there. The guy in her presence was the person that had been causing problems for her. Yet why" She looked at him to find him staring back at her. But this time, there was a different tone to it. Gone were those prying, cunning and interrogating eyes and were replaced by pure, understanding and pleading ones. Priyanka knew that if she stayed there one second more, she would break down into hysterics. Turning around, she walked away leaving Ranveer alone in the garden..

Word Count - Ehhh.. I don't know ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Good morning guys! And Deepika, that was awesome!

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