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.IPKKND.

@.IPKKND.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

This is sooo beautifully written!

My fav ff so far

Pls pm me updates...i have sent u a buddy request

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Amazing yaar ! So beautifully written. Anika-Sahil indeed make the best family together! ❤️ Shivay's condition was heart wrenching. Eager to know what is Om upto !

Thank u so much for the pm. Sorry for late comment. Episodes are too sad so it's not going away from my mind to let it catch something else.

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

M loving Om here well i love him in the show too😆but loving him more in this story😛

but u have portrayed him damn well in this😳

So v had Rumya spying on Om which was a total failure😆

Sahil-Anika cutesy bond😳

And d final Shivaay-Om part

Wonder wat is Om upto😊

Loving this story a lottt😳

continue soonish😊

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

this just keeps getting better and i can't get enough!!! i just need more of your story!!!

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Very very interesting story,read all 3 in a go.
Its curious and grip the readr attention effortlessly.
Plz update soon.
Want to know what is om planning and shivaay's pov in his drunken state.
👏

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annniiii

@annniiii

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

wooowww. ..it was brilliant
gosh...the way that you were describing the story was amazing
seriously, I was speechless
CONTINUE ASAP. ..plizzz

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Your writing is gripping!!The 2nd part of the story left me with goosebumps.Amazing story really.Om is a character with so much potential and also the most unpredictable.The moment the guy said that I can leaving anything and anyone for the truth in the show made me aware of that.He can be good and he can be terrible.The calm and the storm all rolled into one.Is he finally doing what he said he'd never do?? Embracing the grey? The suspense is killing me!!

Anika and Sahil brought tears to my eyes. Sahil is the sweetest brother ever!! And Shivaay!! What is the huge misunderstanding that he has that he is ruining his life??Why does he think that Anika cheated him!! Cant wait!! Its like sometimes when you know a part of a story, you just want it to end to know what happens.Sigh!!

Keep up the brilliant writing!! You are really gifted!!

Edited by chottekikhushi - 9 years ago