SwaSan MiniShot - Wedding Vows and Marriage Woes

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810
Yay .. new OS ..🤗

Dear Annie,

I could not even post the preface as my net was acting up and you have res'ed. I am overwhelmed, though I hope it lives up to your expectations.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
I am here 😊😉

Updated, do let me know😳😳😳

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WriterAtHeart

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Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

Dear Nyna,
Beautiful shot...well conceptualized bringing Marriage and Wedding in, with a lovely touch of your words! I liked the way you made Sanskar speak regarding difference between wedding and marriage. Those lines touched my heart. What I loved the most in this story, is the end where Sanskar says, 'I will wait there, will wait till you come but just do not make me wait forever' ... Beyond amazing. His love which apparently has turned a new name of pain for him, he still wants to hold it, he still doesnt wish to give up, he wants her back. Beautiful!!!

- Ani

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nynu🤗

ahh .. I loved it❤️ Title is just bang on . Wish some one puts some sense into Swara Bose .. I seriously wish..and those starting lines .. by Swara and Ragini ..🤣 I could not help but laugh out like Sanskaar did .. Who knows which moment they might break out dancing Chalka Chalka re😆 .Wedding and Marriage .. I swear I didn' t knew the difference as well .Now I know all thanks to you .

Love

Lucky

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PS ; Swara and Rumi ..😆 She should be grateful you made her fan on rumi ..😆

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Harpreet

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Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

Hi Nyna,

Your mini-shot is just spectacular. You always have something new to offer with your writing. Was absolutely amazed after reading it. Loved how very cleared you showed the difference between a marriage & a wedding.😊

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elsanna

@elsanna

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

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Nyna di... It was so beautiful...there is difference between marriage and wedding😊which you conveyed very nicely through sanskaar in this os😳

Tani

Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 8 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Updated, do let me know😳😳😳

It was a superbly articulated reality check for Swara...hope she paid it some heed. 😕 Sanskaar's thought process, as always, is so spot on and well reasoned.I loved the wry way he was reflecting on how Swara and Ragini both kept flitting and out of their marriages and their marital homes...and yet seemed to be so comfortable not just in being wedding planners, but in dispensing judgements and opinions on others' marriages as well.

That angst Sanskaar felt was superbly brought out with your customary deft touch in those words of his...about how love was not enough for a good, successful marriage, and apparently, from Swara's display in their own marriage, faith was not needed, either. Despite all the good times they had had, despite all the adoration and trust Sanskaar showered on her, Swara never did really have that unshakable faith in him...😭😕

You know Nynu...those ending lines were so poignant, about how he would keep waiting for her, just wishing she would not make him wait too long. Really wished for an equivalent, if not equal dedication and yearning from Swara's side...who still seems more focused on missions of right versus wrong, rather than setting right whatever went wrong in her own marriage.

That distinction between a wedding and a true marriage was brought out well, too. 👏👏

And I am completely with you on the fact that a jealous Sanskaar is ONLY worthwhile because of the bravura performance we are getting from VK. On every other consideration of logic and 'rightness', it is Swara who ought to be burning in jealousy. 😉

Sigh...Rumi. I love that man, such a genius 😳

Love

Viji

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