SwaSan MiniShot - Wedding Vows and Marriage Woes

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

@ Viji & Nynu

I tell you all this jealous track is churned out to make Sanskaar feel sorry ..😡 Only Vk's outstanding portrayal of Jealous Sanskaar is saving this illogical act when it should have been other way around 😡

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@ Viji & Nynu
I tell you all this jealous track is churned out to make Sanskaar feel sorry ..😡 Only Vk's outstanding portrayal of Jealous Sanskaar is saving this illogical act when it should have been other way around 😡

Lucky, koi nahi yaar...we are there to spin alternate realities where Swara gets consumed by the green eyed monster na...😳😈😆 Deepika, Apsaras...etc etc. Ooohh we are such sadists. 🤣

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Lucky, koi nahi yaar...we are there to spin alternate realities where Swara gets consumed by the green eyed monster na...😳😈😆 Deepika, Apsaras...etc etc. Ooohh we are such sadists. 🤣

@Lucky

That is precisely what I feel, they will end up making Sunny boy apologise to Swara.😡😡😡.

@ Viji,

And yes we are true sadists, green - I have finally gotten around to giving a comment on your lovely OS - Green (thank God, it is before Red, I would have simply been🤢🤢🤢 other wise)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

@Lucky

That is precisely what I feel, they will end up making Sunny boy apologise to Swara.😡😡😡.

@ Viji,

And yes we are true sadists, green - I have finally gotten around to giving a comment on your lovely OS - Green (thank God, it is before Red, I would have simply been🤢🤢🤢 other wise)

I will reply on that lovely comment soon, Nynu 😳🤗 Am not going to write 'The Color Red' right away...first I am taking a short hiatus from writing to recharge, need to regroup as I am running close on empty now. Will then start rolling out 'Games People Play'... at least, that's the plan.

If they make Sunny apologize to Swara for being jealous of her friendship with Nikhil...I will literally start frothing at the mouth. 😡🤢

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: WriterAtHeart
Dear Nyna,
Beautiful shot...well conceptualized bringing Marriage and Wedding in, with a lovely touch of your words! I liked the way you made Sanskar speak regarding difference between wedding and marriage. Those lines touched my heart. What I loved the most in this story, is the end where Sanskar says, 'I will wait there, will wait till you come but just do not make me wait forever' ... Beyond amazing. His love which apparently has turned a new name of pain for him, he still wants to hold it, he still doesnt wish to give up, he wants her back. Beautiful!!!

- Ani

Dear Ani,

Glad that you liked it. I am still very upset with Swara's behaviour and am slowly resigning myself to having him apologies to her by the time this track ends😭😭. And further, Swara and Ragini, both who have failed miserably in their own relationship are now set to advice others on how to lead a long and married life (height of hypocrisy😡😡). Sanskaar, is the only one who rarely minces words, so I felt it befitting that he teaches her the meaning, though I doubt how much she will learn.

Sanskaar does love her, as he himself said, 'beintahaan pyar' he has to hold on to the hope that she would come to him, how could he live otherwise?

Best,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Nynu🤗

ahh .. I loved it❤️ Title is just bang on . Wish some one puts some sense into Swara Bose .. I seriously wish..and those starting lines .. by Swara and Ragini ..🤣 I could not help but laugh out like Sanskaar did .. Who knows which moment they might break out dancing Chalka Chalka re😆 .Wedding and Marriage .. I swear I didn' t knew the difference as well .Now I know all thanks to you .

Love
Lucky

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PS ; Swara and Rumi ..😆 She should be grateful you made her fan on rumi ..😆

Dear Lucky,

Title is nice, right (my way of thumbing my nose at the CVs- everyone busy with the wedding and the planners themselves have no clue what they are talking about, considering how their marriages have turned out to be.

Swara and Ragini - kaali pothundi, vaalidarani choosto unte. No wonder Sunny found it funny that they pick such profound lines for Uttara's album. That was my way at getting back at the sisters😉

God, not that song, again, it looked so artificial (that was part of the reason I wrote the OS - The Match Fixers), or maybe I am feeling that because I am so angry seeing them dancing away to glory, while one husband is missing and the other is lost

Swara should be grateful to us for a lot of things, if only she learns.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: preet_907
Hi Nyna,
Your mini-shot is just spectacular. You always have something new to offer with your writing. Was absolutely amazed after reading it. Loved how very cleared you showed the difference between a marriage & a wedding.😊

Dear Harpreet,

Thank you for words, they mean a lot to me, especially as I was not too sure of how it turned out to be.

Best,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: elsanna
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Nyna di... It was so beautiful...there is difference between marriage and wedding😊which you conveyed very nicely through sanskaar in this os😳

Tani

Dear Tani,

Swara so badly needs to understand this, right? And who better than Sanskaar, whom she is convinced is wrong most of the time.

love,

Nyna

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@ Viji & Nynu
I tell you all this jealous track is churned out to make Sanskaar feel sorry ..😡 Only Vk's outstanding portrayal of Jealous Sanskaar is saving this illogical act when it should have been other way around 😡

Sanskar will say sorry and that how it will end and i keep saying it for a long time 😆😆

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

I will reply on that lovely comment soon, Nynu 😳🤗 Am not going to write 'The Color Red' right away...first I am taking a short hiatus from writing to recharge, need to regroup as I am running close on empty now. Will then start rolling out 'Games People Play'... at least, that's the plan.

If they make Sunny apologize to Swara for being jealous of her friendship with Nikhil...I will literally start frothing at the mouth. 😡🤢

@bold - They will Viji dear..They will😡😡

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