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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr

excited to red d nxt parts...


I must say, I'm super surprised at the response this fic has got! More people should start writing on this exciting couple! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: BookWormV

I love the ACP character! And it is so exciting to read an ACP-Priyanka story.

I liked this whole setting... The whole description was pretty impressive. I am really looking forward how you are going to take this story ahead!

-V 😊


Thank you! The ACP is such an intriguing and exciting character in the show.. i mean, currently he is obsessing over karwachaut and diwali at the Oberoi house, but I love the whole detective on a case scenario and want him to be a total badass who isn't afraid of digging into dirt to uncover the truth.. I hope more stories are written on him before the CVs get going on him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: skm27395

Great Start I m hoping to read more from u as I m looking forward to their story😃👏


Thank you! ACP has made an entry into our hearts with his tashan baazi...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: swaram

This is really interesting. Can't wait to see this unfold.


Thank you! I guess we are all hoping for some dhamakedar ishqbaazi in Prinku's life as well..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

i m loving this story. awesome start..
continue sooonish.


Thanks for this encouraging comment!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: shinesss

Another one from you!!!! 😊

I was not planning to read the story untill I saw the writer's name!!!
And here I am...Interesting start... Though I am not that crazy about either ACP or Priyanka in the show... but I feel for the ACP and priyanka of your story...Will love to read further...
Update soon... But please update "The Masquerade" also... Thats close to my heart. 😛


The next update of Masquerade is going to be some time in coming. Am really caught up with some other stuff now and don't know if I can go into that intense place where the story is right now and do justice to it. So decided to give vent to another of my obsessions in the meantime! Prinku and ACP! ❤️
Thanks for reading! Am really touched! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Rozy77

interesting start👍🏼
i think it would be wonderful to read the progression of ACP-Prinku story through you⭐️
looking forward to it😃


Thank you!! This is going to be a short piece, I promise! I should have posted it in one single take but am writing in short installments currently and so am posting it in parts. But the story will not be longer than 4 parts, I think.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Dear i was wandering through IF to check whether you have updated Masqueradet but I found it Honestly I ignored it first Cause I was not interested in Acp Prinku story but later I found out its your work i decided to give it a try, and I'm glad I did I liked it it's really interesting,though I never I liked that acp but Prinku she has something new Show us and I'm so eager to see her through u r eyes. Hope Gul Also try something with her character in show

Looking forward to it

Love Jami ❤️


Oh my goodness!! Sorry for leaving you guys hanging with the FF! I will go back as soon as I can. Actually, the next update will be kind of intense and because of work pressure, I don't want to go there right now. So, meantime, here is another of my obsessions: Priyanka's shot at ishqbaazi.
She will be a bit different here but because of a very legitimate reason. Hope you like it.
Thank you so much for reading!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: reeeh

Would love to read the full story... I rarely read FFs and OSs.. if you don't mind please PM me when you post the next update...


Hi reeeh! So, love for the ACP brought you here, eh? That's awesome! So if there is an AT on the guy ever, we know we'll have a friend in you! 😉
I'll see what I can do about the pm. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NOTE: Ani, thanks for the tip on the name. I have changed it and now am pleased to write about ACP Ranveer Singh Randhawa! 😆
And woah! Am super surprised at the response to this story and so am now fully convinced that we can and must get an AT on this character! Let's ask the mods! We need an ACP AT. This guy is here to stay!

Part 2


Priyanka Oberoi did not know what was happening to her. She was choking. Her breathing seemed to be out of sync with her heart beat and try as she might to bring the two together, either her heart seemed to race ahead or her breath seemed to come too soon. Focusing on it only made it worse until it felt as if she would never take a breath again. Walking out of the place seemed just as difficult. The room seemed to close in on her one second and the very next it seemed to be more spacious than a golf course. Each step she took seemed like crossing a mountain and she feared that a wrongly placed foot would have her tumbling into those black checked squares that awaited her on the vast floor that could shrink like elastic, imprisoning her forever inside a chequered tile. Priyanka Oberoi was tripping on acid and she didn't know it.

Today on reaching college, she and her friends had found out that due to the death of a faculty member, the college was closed for the day. The news of the death did not make much of a difference to them since they had no idea who this particular professor was. So after a few customary remarks on the 'unfortunate nature' of the incident, some of the students announced that they should go out together instead of heading home. Priyanka was excited at the prospect. Coming from a family that was a bit too protective when it came to her, she didn't get much chance to go out on her own.

Anamika, a friend of hers suggested Jimmy's. It was one of those cool touristy places and soon almost half the class wanted in on the plan. It was only a few blocks away and they decided to leave their cars near the college itself. Everyone knew what a nightmare it could be to find a parking spot anywhere near the Colaba stretch. Fifteen students descended upon the restaurant around 11 in the morning. The place was almost empty. A few tables were occupied by tourists or those unfortunate souls who were trying to recover from last night's hangover by plying themselves with some of Jimmy's beer. Priyanka was loving this expedition. However after sitting around and chatting over pakoras and cold coffee for an hour or so, some of the students decided it was time to leave.

The place was getting more crowded. The air was slowly filling with cigarette smoke and the smell of beer was strong. Priyanka was ready to call it a day and return to the college, find her car and get back home. However, Anamika stopped her. Ever since the start of second year, Anamika had been enamored by Ajay, one of their classmates. However, she never found the courage to actually go up and talk to him. This was a rare opportunity for her to spend some time with him, without it being awkward or embarrassing. So she lingered. And she made Priyanka remain behind for 'moral support'.

Soon there were only nine of them left. As they were chatting, two friends of Sharad, one of their classmate, joined them. These guys were older and those who were in on the secret, welcomed their arrival since they were also known to have 'sources' who could get them good dope. By then Anamika and Ajay had struck up a conversation and seemed to be so engrossed in each other that the world could cease to exist and they wouldn't notice. Priyanka was getting bored. She wanted to leave but agreed to have another drink before leaving. She went to the washroom while the drinks were arriving.

When she returned she found the pineapple juice that she had ordered waiting for her. Ajay and Anamika were still talking to each other in low whispers. So she picked up her drink not noticing the smirks some of the girls and guys at the table passed at each other. She drank her fruit juice not knowing that her drink had been spiked by nothing other than a standard dose of LSD or 'acid' as it was known more commonly.

Quite a few of the others at the table had taken it as well but Priyanka had no clue about this. Ignorant of all this, in their private joy of having discovered a friend in each other, Anamika and Ajay got up and decided to leave together. Looking at Priyanka with pleading eyes, her friend whispered that they were going for a short walk together. Priyanka laughed and said that she'd leave too in a short while.

Pineapple juice being her favourite, it didn't take her long to finish her glass. As she waited to settle her bill before leaving, she felt the world sway. The faces around her seemed to twist out of focus with a sudden lurch and she stifled the feeling down. Thinking it must be some kind of bad reaction to the food, she decided to visit the rest room once more just to wash her face. Some of the other girls also decided to accompany her this time. Like her they too were feeling the effects of the drug. But unlike her, they were prepared for it and so it ended up that she alone ended up having a severe anxiety attack caused by an acid trip as her classmates left the restaurant without her.

At that point, even though it was in broad daylight in one of the busiest parts of the city, Priyanka Oberoi needed a guardian angel more than ever. Unfortunately, as she clutched at the walls for balance and looked up into the face of the police man who only a few days ago had threatened to arrest her brother on a murder charge, she saw the very devil in him.

NEXT

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