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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: jarir2010
Nice start.
Continue soon.
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Thank you! Wasn't sure if anyone would be interested in reading a fic on this couple! 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Interesting start

Thank you! This is very encouraging 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Allyson
I was WAITING for someone to write on them. I am so glad you have.
This is a very imteresting start and i am waiting to read further

Going to be a very short piece.. of 4 parts! 😳

And seriously, I'm so excited about this pairing!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Arshi67
A very fortuitous encounter for ACP Randhawa! Looking forward to reading more :)

Thank you! I am super excited about this character.. just hope he doesn't turn into a total creep in the show.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
Aha! Here is Prinku ki takkar ki kahaani! Before Randhawa was introduced and when SVR was around, I wanted SVR to stay and be paired with Prinku - Mallika to be murdered, Shivaay yo be accused of it and SVR, a ruthless, brooding guy who'd eventually fall for Prinku - would've been quite a takkar between the two.

But we got a modified version of it with the ACP and Gayatri's murder, so I'm still happy. 😆

You have a very interesting start here. Can't wait to read ahead - how many parts have you planned?

This is a short OS. I would have made it 2 parts but with the response, I've added some more details and am making it a 4 part story. Just a short fic, nothing too cumbersome. 😉

But seriously, I don't know what to say about the way your mind works when it comes to thinking about plotlines for daily soaps. 😆 Will Shivaay going to jail change his ideas about khoon, khandaan and what not? now there's a thought... 😲

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: attubaby
okay..twer..i came across this OS while roaming in the forum.
great start. ACP-Shinde tiff..
d frst meeting dat too wid ACP seein d very trait of d girl that defines her- hmm..interesting.
i liked d name Arun Pawar😛

great setting u hv framed. d maafia, d encounter, Jimmy's ..

how many more parts???
wid d start it has, seems itz gonna b a gud long fic. is it?

This won't be too long, I promise! 😆

Thanks Ati!! ❤️ Just three more parts to go!

But Prinku will be wild here! Not the girl we see generally... i have made sure of that! 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: AnShi_LoVe
Amazing start...Continue Soon :)

Thanks girl! Will try to finish the story quickly.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting start..

Thank you! 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Priya.

Oh a FF on the ACP 😳 ...wow I love this .😆

Looking forward to the next part .

Btw did I read that right ..an ACP AT?😆❤️

This is going to be a super short piece.. Glad to see such an enthusiastic response!

And seriously, some of us have been clamouring for an AT on that tadibaaz police officer since the first day he walked into the Oberoi mansion to learn all the details of the ShivIka 'moment'! 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: attubaby

haha..Anika z supposed to be in Shivaay's place..but unlike show's one, this Anika z quite colorful😆. No struggle or tiff. jz goes wid d flow getting affected by not just one, but many as they come by.

We r glad that she did not demand Khanna AT😆

Lord yes! Amen to that! Because of her I find myself squealing every time Khanna comes on screen and jumping around if he gets a close up shot! If there's ever a scene where Tia speaks to him, I'm seriously going to spontaneously combust then and there out of excitement!

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