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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sass8

ok, finally caught now, and sorry for delay in giving my feedback , had a busy past few days.
First interesting start with Arpita and Aarti being cousin and getting along. Second sad that Aarpit is dead before we knew her. And now Aarti entering Yash life with spark flying (not necessary the love kind of spark first 😉) . I see she'll drive him crazy with her free , know her mind , independant self, 😆😆 . Yash seems to have actually forgotten how to live and his son his paying the price. Yep spark are going to fly. I wonder where Aarti was the past six years too. That was so unfair of the parent spreading bad rumors when she did nothing wrong. I hope she get her revenge somehow. Great chapter

Thanks dear and no need to apologize for the delay in giving me a feed back no matter what time you do that I will always be here to appreciate them😊
and we all will surely know what happened between arpita and yash
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats tik tok this is the first story you have ever wrote which is longer Yaaay.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting! Independent and sharp witted Aarti coupled with stubborn and stubborn and strong headed is forming a very promising romance. Can't wait for more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved the update this is very interesting Yash he loves Aripta dispite her faults but have no time for his son Ansh now he saw Aarti for the first time and noticed so much about her thatisthe beginning of attraction/love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely concept. Just read it as it was written in rather short paras ! But as the saying goes, ' little drops of water make an ocean ' , similarly your story , though written in rather short updates is a lovely story. Surprising, I did not expect Yash to be 'ignorant' of his son's state ! Aarti's outspoken character is superb ! Thanks

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