Raghav's love for Trisha ! Poem on RaTri !!! - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: babita..



Yayyy Aazu ji🤗
Thank you, thank you !
Even i never knew this dear😳😉But it came out from me😉
Thanks for liking it so much, when you are saying this, it means everything Aazu🤗
Glad you liked it this much, loves❤️

It happens you know... You all of a sudden come to realize, "Hola! I can rhyme too... Woohoo..." [:D/] And it takes to yet another level of creative writing... [:D/]

I will tell you my story of this discovery,
I was in class VII... year 2004. And I had a paragraph writing in my Writing Skills section of my mid term English exam...
I still remember the topic was "If I would have been a bird"
The word limit was strictly no less than 100 words, and I am sorry to tell, I got stuck at 80 words... I knew, I am surely going to lose marks if I don't stick up to somewhere near 100...
And then suddenly words began striking in my mind...
"Bird... Heard... eh? can I rhyme? Oh come on, if it rhymes for more than two sentences, I would go on, or I would strike it off..."
You see I never had that thing to score the max marks... As far as I am able to pass the exams, every other thing can go to hell if it pleases... 😆
And I began writing... I remember the first few juvenile lines by me...
If I would have been a bird,
My voice could be heard.
I would in the morning play,
And would be happy all day..


Something something of that sort... I had written a good 8 lines poem, which fetched me full marks in that section... And there probably began my inclination towards language subjects rather than the other subjects ...

PS: Oh by the way, when after exam I had told my family that I wrote a poem myself, nobody believed me... All were but having fun on my costs... Believing that I must have read somewhere, and copied in my exam...
It was until I had written half a dozen more poems, that one day my mom decided to test me, asking to write a poem about her...
It took me another ten minutes to jot down an another 8 lines peom on mummy...
It was then she really believed me of the new found skill that I had inherited handsdown from my maternal grandfather, when none of his kids and none of his grandkids did other than me...
And from there on its a new day every other day... You keep on learning... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love the poem a lot dear... Raghav is expressing his love for Trisha...you r really a awsm writer ...love your poem a lot... Pls pls pls keep on writing.. I want more creations from you... 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

It happens you know... You all of a sudden come to realize, "Hola! I can rhyme too... Woohoo..." [:D/] And it takes to yet another level of creative writing... [:D/]

I will tell you my story of this discovery,
I was in class VII... year 2004. And I had a paragraph writing in my Writing Skills section of my mid term English exam...
I still remember the topic was "If I would have been a bird"
The word limit was strictly no less than 100 words, and I am sorry to tell, I got stuck at 80 words... I knew, I am surely going to lose marks if I don't stick up to somewhere near 100...
And then suddenly words began striking in my mind...
"Bird... Heard... eh? can I rhyme? Oh come on, if it rhymes for more than two sentences, I would go on, or I would strike it off..."
You see I never had that thing to score the max marks... As far as I am able to pass the exams, every other thing can go to hell if it pleases... 😆
And I began writing... I remember the first few juvenile lines by me...
If I would have been a bird,
My voice could be heard.
I would in the morning play,
And would be happy all day..


Something something of that sort... I had written a good 8 lines poem, which fetched me full marks in that section... And there probably began my inclination towards language subjects rather than the other subjects ...

PS: Oh by the way, when after exam I had told my family that I wrote a poem myself, nobody believed me... All were but having fun on my costs... Believing that I must have read somewhere, and copied in my exam...
It was until I had written half a dozen more poems, that one day my mom decided to test me, asking to write a poem about her...
It took me another ten minutes to jot down an another 8 lines peom on mummy...
It was then she really believed me of the new found skill that I had inherited handsdown from my maternal grandfather, when none of his kids and none of his grandkids did other than me...
And from there on its a new day every other day... You keep on learning... 😃


Thank U so much Aazu for sharing your experience of how you started writing 🤗
I was never a creative person at that age 😳 But your caliber is superb and unbelievable 👏👏
Thanks dear for the motivation instigated, this is a learning lesson for me too 😃 I admire your reach and giving the test to your Mom. U have impressed me ⭐️ and i have started thinking that Yes it happens 😆
Thanks and loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina744

Love the poem a lot dear... Raghav is expressing his love for Trisha...you r really a awsm writer ...love your poem a lot... Pls pls pls keep on writing.. I want more creations from you... 👏

Thank you so much Shaina, for the appreciation and liking the poem 🤗
You loved it i'm so glad 😃
I will try keep on writing dear, Loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply I had exams and could not come to forum. For past few days
It was a wonderful piece of work Babita.
Do come up with more in future
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Posted: 9 years ago
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No problem Uma !
Thanks for liking and i will surely be here with more after Monday.
Taking leave for few days now. Tutorials are on and they are to be dome on time with good marks. This is my last year and i have to be prepared from the very start of it.

Loves 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tisa1

Awesome poem babita,

Thank U dear for liking it so much 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanu452

Lovely poem babita ...😊

Thanks dear for liking it so much 🤗

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