Raghav's love for Trisha ! Poem on RaTri !!!

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Hello RaTri fans ❤️

I have written my first ever poem and posting it as Raghav's views for Trisha !

He is recalling his life that is complete with Trisha with him in his lonely life !

Here it is :

It's your smile that gets to me every time

It speaks to me telling that U are mine.

Your smile warms my heart and brightens my day

I shall cherish it always as a glowing sun ray.

Now there is peace in my soul for a long awaited time

There is your love in my life that's so pure and serene.

I knew for the first time i saw U, that you are my token of love

I'm so lucky to have you in my life and will live eternally as a dove !

RaTri rocks and shall always be !

Hope U all will like it ! Written it for the first time and have used RaTri pics. Pls do LIKE and comment so that i comes to know weather i am able to write more or not.

Love U all 🤗

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sweetie thanks review in a short while...

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

Such a awesome poem babita. Really loved it soo much you have shown Raghav's feeling for trisha soo beautifully. Your are awesome writer dear .really loved it so much

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

Firstly I would say that you have stolen my sleep away...I was having my lunch and planning to take a nap after that as my family is after me for rest...just then I got the email notification of your message and I was surprised to see that so soon you have written a poem. I had to read it immediately and ...OMG you just skipped my beat for once... ab to meri neend ud hi gayi hai...ab main kya karu? to ab dekho mera review in my style...

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

Image result for you were awesome images

Edited by braveheartdoc - 9 years ago

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

U don't know Manisha, how i'm feeling right now 😃

Reading all your comments one by one again and again and for many times 🤗

Overwhelmed and feeling too happy that getting emotional like U 🤗

I will reply U more once i get more comments.

Love and much regards,

yours babita

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

I don't know whether I have the right to say this or not...but still I can't help myself without saying that How dare you say that you are not a writer?

You are just awesome my dear...my sweetheart how well you have described Raghav's feelings in such beautiful words...I have no words to express myself...

Everything about the poem is out of this world and please don't you ever say that you can't write...I want more from you...

I have written few lines just abhi abhi to describe your beauty of writing...hope you like them

Aapke lafzon ne chura liya mera dil...

Dil kahe ki jisne bhi likhe hain ye alfaaz...jake foran usse mil...

Dekho ab tumne mujhe shayar bhi bana diya...

although I know its very bad...but its ok...my heart said this so I wrote it for you...

LOVE YOU MY DEAR...👏⭐️