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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesome chapter 👏👏

Awesome twist 😆😉 my guess was wrong 😆
Loved it...
Both idiot love each but not ready to confess 😆 waiting for their confession 😳
Update soon...


Thanks so much Anmol😳
Confession in next update 😃 posting soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Read all the chapters in one go. so so interesting. NIbir childhood friends n that tattoo aww 😳 love their conversation. their meeting..living in kabirs flat..their fun..trip awesomely expressed. Awesome dialogues.👏 You have written everything so beautifully...loved it. I'm totally into the story right now. keep writing..loving it.
update soon😃
Edited by Snow12345654321 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Read all the chapters in one go. so so interesting. NIbir childhood friends n that tattoo aww 😳 love their conversation. their meeting..living in kabirs flat..their fun..trip awesomely expressed. Awesome dialogues.👏 You have written everything so beautifully...loved it. I'm totally into the story right now. keep writing..loving it.

update soon😃

Thankyou so much dear 😳😳
And will keep writing 😊
Will update soon 😃
Thanks again 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

NiBir SS: Destiny ne aise hi nahi milaya

Epilogue


Finally Kabir decides that he'll speak his heart out to Nisha as he doesn't want to regret in future that she was here, he was here, opportunity was there but he missed it.

Kabir(thinking): ab jo bhi hoga dekha jayega! God kindly bless me...

Kabir goes out of his room and finds nisha leaning at rail at the end of corridor of the hotel. There is a beautiful view of twinkling stars in the sky with moon shining bright.
Kabir smiles and starts walking towards her
Nisha: hello mom
Kabir stops midway finding her talking to her mother on phone
Nisha: mom I'm in Jaipur
Kabir sighs and is about to turn but Nisha calls Kabir and he stops. Nisha indicates him to come near and Kabir reaches to her.
Nisha: mom I'm sorry, I should have told you
Nisha entwins her fingers in his looking outside.
Kabir lets her do and looks outside too.
Nisha(with moist eyes ):mom I know about dad now, I'm sorry for my behaviour earlier, I'm sorry
Nisha: hmm
Nisha:yeah
Nisha: I'll be returning tomorrow to London
Nisha:yeah
Nisha: mom I wanna ask something
Nisha( looking at Kabir): do you have any problem if I marry an Indian guy?
Kabir swirls his neck to look at her then swirls away outside
Nisha: thankyou mom
Nisha(groans): mom!
Nisha: how would I marry now? I said I'm coming tomorrow! I was just asking you!
Nisha: yeah ok
Nisha: bye love you
Nisha leaves his hand
Nisha: thankyou kabir
Kabir nods
Kabir: marry an Indian guy?
Nisha: yeah, I'll be in India so...
Kabir: In India? You live in London, you work there?
Nisha: I resigned yesterday
Kabir: what ??
Nisha: yeah! I sent my resignation letter over email
Kabir: but why?It's prestigious school of dances Nisha
Nisha: hmm... I know... I have worked there for 3 years almost but now I want to start my own academy
Kabir: your academy?
Nisha(Smiles): yeah in India... if I can train people like you in 3 hours I can train anyone
Kabir: oh hello! it's like I'm great learner and not you trainer!
Nisha: whatever! I'm going to start my academy in Delhi
Kabir(looking outside): hmm... good
Nisha( thinking ):yaar kab se hint pe hint diye jaa rahi hu par ye gadha kuch samaj hi nahi raha!Kahi aisa to nahi ki ye mujse pyaar hi nahi krta? No! no! plz aisa nahi hona chaiye! kya karu?? ye to silent khada h! pagal!! mai hi puchu kya? vese bhi otherwise less chance with this idiot!
Nisha: Kabir ek baat puchu kya?
Kabir(Sarcastically): nai bolunga to jese nahi puchegi
Nisah: mere dialogue mujh par mat maar...I won't ask if you refuse
K (chuckles): puch
Nisha: Shaadi karega mujse?
Kabir looks at her in her eyes
Kabir( thinking): mai sapna dekh raha hu kya ?
Nisha(thinking): yaar ye to kuch nahi bol raha! Matlab I only misunderstood
Nisha(fakes a laughter):purana joke hai yaar tu bhi na!

Nisha looks away sadly.
Kabir (frowns thinking): meri aisi situation ho rahi hai aur ise joke maarne ki padi hai
Kabir looks at her and finds her sad.
Kabir (smiles thinking ): ek minute...ye propose kar rahi thi kya mujhe

Kabir(mischeivously):aur bata London me kaisi zindagi teri?

Nisha(looking in his eyes): kaisi hogi meri zindagi tere bina?

Nisha(after a pause, grinning): ekdum jhakkaas!

Kabir sulks.

Nisha: aur bata

Kabir: ye hotel ka naam Sunshine isliye pada kyonki iske owner ko ye naam bohot pasand aaya aur sun matlab sooraj aur sooraj uske bete ka naam hai aur

Nisha(confused): Oye kya bol raha hai??

Kabir(smirks): Tu hi boli aur bata' to bata raha tha

Nisha glares at him.

Nisha(the next moment shouts): Kabir there's lizard!

Kabir( jumps back): Aaa! kaha hai?? kaha hai???

Nisha (breaks into laughter): you still fear lizard?

Kabir(sneers finding out that it was a joke): yeah except you!

Nisha(shows her tongue): Vampire fears lizard

Kabir(glaring): don't mess with me alright!

Nisha: Messing with a mess still remains a mess!

Kabir: O madam don't act oversmart!

Nisha:O mr. I don't act like you, I'm smart!

Kabir: itni smart hai to directly bol na

Nisha: kya?

Kabir(smirks): ki pyaar me pad gayi mere

Nisha's heart beat rise and a little smile appears over her lips.

Kabir(takes a deep breath): Mere hriday ke spandan ki vaani keval aapke naam ka uccharan karti hai

Nisha displays an utmost bewildered face to which Kabir laughs out loud.

Kabir(after composing himself and says softly holding her hand smiling): My heartbeats only sing your beloved name...

Nisha smiles back at first then stomps his foot out of blue.

Nisha: idiot!

Kabir: Ouch yaar! Fracture karegi kya??
Nisha(pouts): propose nahi kiya tune mujhe dhang se
Kabir(casually): vo kisliye karna hai?
Nisha: Kabiiir!
Kabir chuckles
Nisha: chal propose kar varna
Kabir: nahi kar raha, kya karegi ?
Nisha: Shaadi nahi karungi
Kabir: mat kar
Nisha( fumes): thik hai jaa

Nisha shoves him

Kabir: arey ,arey! dhakka kyu maar rahi hai?
Nisha: jaa yaha se! London se nai aaungi vapas mai!
Kabir( pulls her): mai aa jaunga phir London
Nisha(smirks): passport banaya bhi hai
Kabir sulks while Nisha chuckles
Kabir: fine! jaane hi nahi dunga tujhe London
Nisha: kitna k hai tu!

Kabir: aur tu mere k se kitna j hai
Nisah: chal ja ab ! neend aa rahi mujhe
Kabir: meri neend uda k khud sone ja rahi?
Nisha( smiles): chal phir ek kiss de
Kabir: kya??
Nisha(pouts): sirf ek
Kabir(smirks): pagal hai kya ye public place hai
Nisha(smirks): to konsa suhagraat manane ko kehri hu sirf ek kiss
Kabir: kitni k hai tu yaar!
Nisha: tujse jyada !
Kabir: alright!
Nisha smiles
Kabir kisses her forehead
Kabir:fine now?
Nisha makes an irritated face
Kabir ( chuckles ):what ?
Nisha( smiles):fine! Shaadi k baad to sai se dega na kiss?
Kabir: badi wali k hai tu
Nisha(chuckles): aur mere k se kitna j hai tu
Kabir(smirks):Vese shaadi ke baad sirf kiss hi chahiye kya?

Nisha(encircling her arms around his neck): Beta shaadi ke baad mai permission thodi mangungi tujse

Kabir furrows his brows.

Nisha(winks): Shaadi ke baad permission gayi bhaad me

Kabir(winks back pulling her by waist): Rules equally apply on both

Both grin and share a hug...


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Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Awesome update and end 👏😭
Itni jaldi end 😭
But loved it 😃
Hidden desires 😳😆
Want more stories and update your other stories too
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
yeh kya proposal tha😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
End???😲😲 Nooo pls😭
Awesome update. Too good nok jhok yaar. I really love the convo👏. Proposal😆. Beautifully written 😃😳

Edited by Snow12345654321 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Firstly this was a shock to see the last update as an epilogue for this story so soon 😕 I thought abhi to kafi updates milenge😲
Secondly this was the super cutest confession... 😃 loved it completely 🤗 the way he supports her Everytime😳... and then the bestest part was role reversal 🤣 nisha inspired by Josy 🤣🤣 loved it😛
Posted: 8 years ago
#59
meine I guess pehle b ek bar ye story deki thi bas bahar I mean title.. but kholke read nai kari tabi
mujhe title bada ajeeb aa lagta tha Dnhm something ?? kya alphabets h name 🤣
abi pata chala full form 😆
DESTINY NE AISE HI NAI MILWAYA 😃
nice name ..
I like it
Posted: 8 years ago
#60
OK coming back to story...
I have read the prologue and part 1 now!!
and believe me I m totally in love with it!!
as I told u nokjhok r my fav thing abt nibir 😳
and this one was just awsm
train n all se jab we met wali feeling ayi meko 😃
dialogue k liye dher saare claps!! mindblowing
but tattoo wala part samaj me nai ata mere 🤔
going to read further.. will comment on them asap ❤️
OK bye

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