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Desaitara1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Such a beautiful story dear really loved ir. Thanks a lot for writing such a wonderful story loved your writing soo much

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Desaitara1234
Such a beautiful story dear really loved ir. Thanks a lot for writing such a wonderful story loved your writing soo much

Thanks a lot for liking the story. Glad you liked it.
I was quite nervous while writing this as this was planned as a continuation from the last episode, it should be such which goes in the flow of the episode. I hope I could do justice with this.

Thanks once again for liking my writing.
May I know what can I call you dear?

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Awesomely overwhelmed after reading this part. Thanks Manisha 👏👏

Bikram is saved and so is Raghav. I loved how Trisha looked after him that Raghav knows very well. His initiative is much much liked later in the car as well.

I loved how the team asked Raghav never to leave and he felt guilty over saddening his team. Lovely banters and cute bond. ⭐️

Liked the journey towards home in the car of RaTri. Loved how Raghav finally said what he wanted to and held her hand too. 😉 Beautiful is Trisha inside out, and he well mentioned this. Awesomely penned down the expressions of both. 👏

When Raghav did the needfuls for Trisha in the car i thought, awww this is beauty. And when he took her to her home and bedroom and then wrote what his heart thought to, i felt so goody goody 😳

Lovely to see that Trisha is ready to wait for him and Raghav wants her to be with him always.

This realization is the love that they both were not able to express while knowing each other's heart very well. Loved that he still wants to know why she cried in the washroom when he himself knows it why.

Very beautiful story Manisha and i loved to be a part of it. Thanks, thanks a tonne. Loves. ❤️

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Thanks everyone for liking the story. I'm highly obliged with your comments.

Lots of love.

Loves to U too ❤️

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: babita..
Awesomely overwhelmed after reading this part. Thanks Manisha 👏👏
Bikram is saved and so is Raghav. I loved how Trisha looked after him that Raghav knows very well. His initiative is much much liked later in the car as well.
I loved how the team asked Raghav never to leave and he felt guilty over saddening his team. Lovely banters and cute bond. ⭐️
Liked the journey towards home in the car of RaTri. Loved how Raghav finally said what he wanted to and held her hand too. 😉 Beautiful is Trisha inside out, and he well mentioned this. Awesomely penned down the expressions of both. 👏
When Raghav did the needfuls for Trisha in the car i thought, awww this is beauty. And when he took her to her home and bedroom and then wrote what his heart thought to, i felt so goody goody 😳
Lovely to see that Trisha is ready to wait for him and Raghav wants her to be with him always.
This realization is the love that they both were not able to express while knowing each other's heart very well. Loved that he still wants to know why she cried in the washroom when he himself knows it why.
Very beautiful story Manisha and i loved to be a part of it. Thanks, thanks a tonne. Loves. ❤️

Awesomely overwhelmed after reading this part. Thanks Manisha 👏👏

Thank you so much for liking it. You are most welcome

Bikram is saved and so is Raghav. I loved how Trisha looked after him that Raghav knows very well. His initiative is much much liked later in the car as well.

This entire part shows how well these two know each other, how important they are for each other's life. After coming back to his niche, Raghav had to do what he enjoys the most, to tease her and flirt with her.

I loved how the team asked Raghav never to leave and he felt guilty over saddening his team. Lovely banters and cute bond. ⭐️

This just goes to show how well this team is bonded to each other where Bikram risks his own life for Raghav, Raghav feels himself responsible for all this and how Trisha handles everything singlehandedly. Rajbir is shown to nicely support Trisha in everything.

Raghav always feels something more than friendship for her, he after seeing what she did for him had to confess in his heart what she means to him, although he knows he can't express his love at present because of his past.

When Raghav did the needfuls for Trisha in the car i thought, awww this is beauty. And when he took her to her home and bedroom and then wrote what his heart thought to, i felt so goody goody 😳

He knew how exhausted she would have been after that tiring day. he saw her sleeping, he just wanted her to be comfortable, he really cares for her and loves her madly. He thought of expressing his feelings in writing, he could not prevent himself from doing this what if he can't openly express himself.

Lovely to see that Trisha is ready to wait for him and Raghav wants her to be with him always.

Trisha can wait for him for as much time, she very well knows that he is absolutely shaken up due to his past, he has to come out of it so that he can move ahead in his life. The understanding of each other's limitations and restrictions is the basic prerequisite for love to prevail between any two people.

Very beautiful story Manisha and i loved to be a part of it. Thanks, thanks a tonne. Loves. ❤️

You are most welcome Babita. Thanks for liking it.