Ratri fs: Ek duje ke liye; part 3 page 4, last part updated page 7

Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Such a lovely update

Glad that Bikram is saved

Just loved the bonding between the team

Trisha taking care of Raghav like a mother. How cute😳

Loved when she moved away and cried due to the happiness to see back Raghav and Bikram the strong woman she is never wanted the guys to be worried for her. So matured Trisha is

Just loved the car scene. The way Raghav realised he is incomplete without her was awesome the way he realised Trisha's qualities I don't have words to explain so well mentioned

I liked him teasing her. How can someone grow over a night? Only Raghav can come up like that😛

The way Raghav was lost in his sleeping beauty the way he took her to her room was just so romantic 😳

I wonder Trisha's mom didn't suspect these two😛

Loved his letter to Trisha so emotional

Wonderful story please update Talaash too

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nymphadora12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

This. Is. Wonderful.

Usually I'm not the kind of person who feels emotional and attached to a story, but this part was beautiful. I liked the way you builded this story till the end and conveyed it amazingly.

The fact that even though their relationship is simple it is yet complicated with both of them not able to convey love through conversations but they do by actions where neither one of them need to speak of it to be known.

And you've displayed it really great!

The letter was beautiful.

Do keep writing!

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Nice and emotional update. Indirectly romantic. How beautifully written each emotions were described well.Happy to see that Bikram is saved and The two conditions he asked was nice He desperately want Raghav to stay in CBI. Raghav lifting Trisha in her arms and the note he left was very nice addition. He said all his fellings for her but she still have to wait for direct proposal of the three magical words till Raghav put vidushak behind the bars. Please update your other stories and thanks a lot for this update

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
lovely update dear truly RaTrilious .so finally Bikram is fine .loved the scene between raghav and bikram soo much .Trisha crying in the washroom not to show everyone but Raghav noticed that ..loved the RaTri car scene a lot .Trisha sleeping peacefully in his car and Raghav covering her with his jacket .soo romantic really loved this scene a lot .Raghav lifting up Trisha in his arms and making her sleep on her bed was soo cute .Raghav writing a letter to trisha and she hugging it was soo awesome. thanks a lot for this wonderful story loved it soo much

Thanks a lot for liking the story. The scene between Bikram and Raghav just shows the bonding between the team members. They all have been working together for such a long time, their care, love and dependence for each other is bound to be there.

Trisha on the other hand knew the circumstances her entire team was in till previous night. Somehow due to her efforts and with Rajbir's support, everything could come back to normal, specially Raghav could come out of his niche. Bikram was saved, so obviously the guilt in his mind could go off.

Raghav realising her importance in his life had to come up at some time, so this was the time for that. He could realise when she slept about she being very exhausted. After all she was the one who was instrumental in handling everything including him. He writing a letter just shows that he feels the same for her but could not express himself due to his memories.

Thanks a lot for the lovely review once again.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Az07
Such a lovely update
Glad that Bikram is saved
Just loved the bonding between the team
Trisha taking care of Raghav like a mother. How cute😳
Loved when she moved away and cried due to the happiness to see back Raghav and Bikram the strong woman she is never wanted the guys to be worried for her. So matured Trisha is
Just loved the car scene. The way Raghav realised he is incomplete without her was awesome the way he realised Trisha's qualities I don't have words to explain so well mentioned
I liked him teasing her. How can someone grow over a night? Only Raghav can come up like that😛
The way Raghav was lost in his sleeping beauty the way he took her to her room was just so romantic 😳
I wonder Trisha's mom didn't suspect these two😛
Loved his letter to Trisha so emotional
Wonderful story please update Talaash too

Thanks for liking the update. The team bonding is very important if they have to work in such dangerous circumstances. Trisha took care of him just like his mother, she knew that he missed his mother a lot.

She is a strong lady for sure and she does not want Raghav or anyone else to see her cry, but she could not escape from Raghav's eyes.

Raghav could not overlook what she did for him at night, noone else could have done this, he knew this.

Thanks for liking the romantic scene when he took her inside her house, that's my favourite too.

According to me any mother would suspect in such situation, but as I said, we are talking about Trisha. She is a girl who would never do anything wrong. Her parents have full trust on her. They would like to wait for her to come up to them and tell them her feelings.

Thanks once again. I'll post Talaash after this new story. Please bear with me dear.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: nymphadora12
This. Is. Wonderful.
Usually I'm not the kind of person who feels emotional and attached to a story, but this part was beautiful. I liked the way you builded this story till the end and conveyed it amazingly.
The fact that even though their relationship is simple it is yet complicated with both of them not able to convey love through conversations but they do by actions where neither one of them need to speak of it to be known.
And you've displayed it really great!
The letter was beautiful.
Do keep writing!

Thanks a lot dear. If you say that you got emotionally attached to the story, its a huge compliment for me, means a lot. I didn't know myself that I would be able to take across the emotions like this. But if you have liked this, then definitely I succeeded.

Their relation is beautiful in true sense. Niether of the two express their feelings, but both of them are mad for each other and they know also about this. But still they manage to maintain a professional relation amongst them, that shows the maturity of the two.

I hope I can do so in future also.

Lots of love.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: 1973deepak
Nice and emotional update. Indirectly romantic. How beautifully written each emotions were described well.Happy to see that Bikram is saved and The two conditions he asked was nice He desperately want Raghav to stay in CBI. Raghav lifting Trisha in her arms and the note he left was very nice addition. He said all his fellings for her but she still have to wait for direct proposal of the three magical words till Raghav put vidushak behind the bars. Please update your other stories and thanks a lot for this update

Thanks for feeling the emotions I tried to portray. The last part in the car and her home was added later while I was writing it. It wasn't a part of my original thought. I just added those to depict the understanding, the bond between the two and how much they care for each other.

I'll update my other stories soon.

Thanks once again

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thanks everyone for liking the story. I'm highly obliged with your comments.

Lots of love.