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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

awesome update dear really loved it soo much .loved Trisha's drama to make Raghav eat something .loved that scene soo much .raghav telling trisha all his feeling. that was such a awesome scene .Raghav feeling he is responsible for all that happened with the team .love's trisha consoling him .love how Raghav slept over trisha shoulder .thanks a lot for this awesome update.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
awesome update dear really loved it soo much .loved Trisha's drama to make Raghav eat something .loved that scene soo much .raghav telling trisha all his feeling. that was such a awesome scene .Raghav feeling he is responsible for all that happened with the team .love's trisha consoling him .love how Raghav slept over trisha shoulder .thanks a lot for this awesome update.

Thanks a lot dear for the comments. Yes Raghav can express himself like this only in front of her. She knows this very well. That's y she sent Rajbir back home. She wouldn't have been able to do what she did in front of him. Watch out in the next and final part to see the beauty of their relationship further.

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nymphadora12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Great update! I loved the flow of emotions.

The conversation between those two seemed effortless. It was beautiful. You depicted the feelings of both of them very well!

Trisha understanding supporting him when he was depressed was really nice.

Raghav was feeling really miserable after these events and needed that support.

Trisha trying to feed him was cute!

Update soon.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: nymphadora12
Great update! I loved the flow of emotions.
The conversation between those two seemed effortless. It was beautiful. You depicted the feelings of both of them very well!
Trisha understanding supporting him when he was depressed was really nice.
Raghav was feeling really miserable after these events and needed that support.
Trisha trying to feed him was cute!
Update soon.

Thanks for the compliments. Trisha would do anything for him, that's how it happens when you love someone from the depths of your heart. Will update the next part in 1-2 days. A teaser maybe by tonight.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

TEASER FOR LAST PART

How cute she looked while sleeping. She had a sweet relaxed look on her face. He could not avoid constantly looking at her. He came close to her and hesitantly kissed her on her forehead "thank you Trisha" he said and got up.

This is just a teaser for the final part. I'll be posting the last part in next 1-2 days.

Love you all who liked the story.

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Lovely teaser

Raghav lost in his sleeping beauty

kiss was so sweet

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Such a cute and romantic teaser. Raghav kissing on her forehead was nice. Update soon

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Az07
Lovely teaser
Raghav lost in his sleeping beauty
kiss was so sweet

thanks for liking the teaser. the final part is mainly about the unsaid emotions of Raghav for Trisha, how much they both care for each other. i hope i'm able to express appropriately what i've planned to.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: 1973deepak
Such a cute and romantic teaser. Raghav kissing on her forehead was nice. Update soon

thanks dear. please give me some time. i have a presentation tomorrow. just busy preparing for that. i'll try to finish writing it by tmrrw or max by day after tmrrw.