EK KAHAANI MERI ZUBAANI- intezaar - Pg.14 - Page 11

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh

Wow, Jhanvi di...all of these poems are amazing 👍🏼🤗

Being a LakshMila fan, my spl favs are Aahatein & last few lines of Aitbaar

Compile all these into a book di, i will be one among millions to buy it 😉 😊

Originally posted by: daydreamers

22/02/16- BAAT KAL KI

Kal ki baat kuch aise sochte rahe

Kal ko Kuch aise dekhte rahe

Baar baar mudte rahe

Aage bhi kal hai

Peeche bhi Kal hai

Aage dekhne ki wajah na samjhe

Peeche na mudne se dil darey

Doobey the uss sagar mein

Beech majdhaar me phanse rahe

Koi kashti paar lagaaye

Himmat na thi hamari

Ki yaadon ko bhul jaye

Iss kashmakash mein rahe

Ki dard sirf humein kyun hai

Baat kal ki thi

Baat kal ki hai

Koi aaj ka waqt toh samjhaye humein...

Originally posted by: attubaby

Arey, it's not just khas, but boht khas👍🏼...Sita Remembering her Ram...it's so beautiful.

Originally posted by: daydreamers

I find it lame 😆. I ges there's a traffic jam and choke up of vocabulary in my mind. 😆 struggled too much to write this but am nowhere satisfied. 😆

Originally posted by: attubaby

A poet does not get satisfied by his or her work considering that he or she has done lots of great works till now and wishes on making the work that excels the previous one.

hota h hota h...sometimes u can get jammed😆. Bt dat does nt take away the feel, the intent or the beauty of the poem😳.

It is not lame for sure. Kya DD, matlab seriously tumko koi aur word nai mila kya jo lame hi lik diya😆

The feel of the goes does not fade away at any time and it's beautiful.

Originally posted by: daydreamers

INTEZAAR

Tu hi basa

Nazro mein sanam

Tujhe pau mein saaton janam

Tu hi sama

Tu hi dilon mein

Tu dhadkan

Tu sara jahan

Tu hi raha

Ashkon mein sajan

Teri raah dekhu aathon pahar

Tu hi taranha

Tu hi aazad panchi ki puhaar

Tu baadshah

Aawam ke sapno ka

Tu rakhwala

Sab ki zindagi ka

Teri puja karu aadi anant

Originally posted by: JRia

beautiful.. ms chupi rustam