The Blossoming Story of Devi and Ashok [OS] [UPDT:CHAPTER 3 on PAGE 5]

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guenhwyvar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Author's Note:

Hey everyone,

Glad you're enjoying the story, I'm very happy to read all your comments.

I do extend my apologies for the delay in writing Chapter 3. The only time I get to write this is at work and usually depends on how busy I am. These are one of the writing projects I'm enjoying, so I'll definitely try to keep this one up.

So I hope you all continue to enjoy it.

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Michelle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Reserved!

~Unres~

Thoroughly enjoyed it!

I love the future maharani in this avatar! 😎

Kay bye I'm going to AshVi land now 😆

Edited by crazyforsarun - 9 years ago

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swathi90

@swathi90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hey shyam it's nice update⭐️,ashvi conversion s amazing,ashok taking devi to his mission that's really surprising😳,devi s scared little but still want to accompany him,you portrayed her innne feelings very nicely,he still didn't tell her her father s alive😳,update soon😊

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

fantastic chapter shyam

loved the conversation between ashok and devi❤️

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Niki.

@Niki.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Love Devi's attitude in the end!!
Ashok seemed surprised by Devi's attitude. haha
Seems upcoming chapters will be more interesting!😳

Edited by nikii11 - 9 years ago

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Chit15

@Chit15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Loved the conversation of Devi & Ashoka

Fabulous update

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ProudRSfan

@ProudRSfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Read all the 3 parts together. Such a good story was there and I didn't even know about it.
It's very good, dear I wished if makers had adapted it in their story.

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MuguetDScorpion

@MuguetDScorpion

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Finally read chapter 3. Wooow love this Devi, totally different from the show. Bold, fighter... And Ashok who is surprised by her. 😆 Your writing is really good. Waiting for the next chapter.

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babur1527

@babur1527

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Okay, so I read through chapter 1.

Ashok's portrayal is consistent with the one that was itching for revenge at the beginning post leap. He isn't as ruthless as I'd like imagined him to be in the last Sid-Ashok promo. But this will do.

Devi is as she was initially in the show. Demure with Ashok but vivacious with the rest. I always found the contrast charming. And she is not a hare brained cheerleader. That's always a bonus. 😆

Vittashok is cute as always. Ah the good old days when he wasn't a KVK cheerleader. Screw you CVs.

Don't get the premise of Ashok wanting to keep Devi at the palace though. Will be looking for answers in the next chapter.

Edited by babur1527 - 8 years ago