OS - Sacrifice (A Jaya-Jaidev story) Epilogue updated - Page 2 - Page 4

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

🤣 the last line was epic!!

I so want this to happen in the serial.. 🤣

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RD

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very well written! Totally in sync with the characters of JJ ! Write another one soonish please 😳

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

'soon..very soon'...that would be a balm for Jaya... beautiful

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: JRia
🤣 the last line was epic!!
I so want this to happen in the serial.. 🤣

The way they are behaving now, it will happen very soon Ria.. 😆

Thank you for reading..

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -RD-
Very well written! Totally in sync with the characters of JJ ! Write another one soonish please 😳

Thanks for reading. I will try to write another one reading them soon. Maybe their growing closeness for each other on the show will be an inspiration...😉.

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: JazzyM
'soon..very soon'...that would be a balm for Jaya... beautiful

I know, right.. for someone who has been rejected by not just her husband, but her "friend" too... for they were friends before being married.

I am glad they made up.

Thank you for reading...

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Sharmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aww such a lovely OS of JJ. This story melted my heart for both them. Beautiful writing. Loved both the updates..hope there will be a sequel too.😊😊

Keep on writing👍🏼

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Priti,😊
Such a beautiful story.😳 Loved this Jaya-Jaidev OS so much!!!😃😃
With love,
Aheli.

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