OS - Sacrifice (A Jaya-Jaidev story) Epilogue updated - Page 2

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Jaidev, please, meri baat toh suniye

He had walked out of their room, yet again. She was surprised that it still hurt her. She should have gotten used to it by now. It had been 4 years since their wedding. "Wedding". The word had developed a new meaning in her life. What dreams she ha sewn for her life. All of it shattered over and over again.

Flashback

Jaya and Jaidev had been in the same graduation school together. Being a shy girl, Jaya was not one to interact with a lot of people, let alone boys. She almost came across as a rude girl owing to her family's wealthy background. Her best friend Isha had been the opposite though. She was the most talkative and friendly person on the campus. People who knew the both of them always teased that Isha spoke for the both of them, Jaya and herself. This was not the only thing different in between them. Jaya always believed in simple dreams, dreams that were within her reach. While Isha dreamt big. She hoped that she could become a bollywood actress one day, and did everything in her power to accomplish this dream, like taking acting classes, make up classes, dancing classes etc.

While in their second year, Isha's play had been selected for a performance at a school in a neighboring town. Isha had insisted that Jaya travel along with her, and knowing their fondness for each other, the college had obliged. It was during this trip that Jaya met Jaidev. She could not believe that he had been in the same college for over an year and had gone unnoticed by her. Apparently, the boys thinking of her as a snob, had challenged Jaidev to make conversation with her for 5 minutes. When he approached her, she was hesitant and shy. But he explained the reason for his action, and she couldn't help but smile. While she continued talking to him to help him win his challenge, Isha had walked up and scared the crap out of Jaidev. She gave him an earful for approaching girls in this manner, and he almost got suspended. She always felt the need to protect Jaya knowing her nature, and assumed the worse when she saw Jaidev with her. When Jaya had later explained the entire scenario to Isha, Isha had quickly apologized to Jaidev and had cleared up his name in the mess. That led to a new bond and a new friendship between the 3 of them.

The 3 of them hung out together with a few other friends as often as they could. With time, Jaya developed a special fondness for Jaidev. She had not realized that it was love until her heart broke into a million pieces when Jaidev confessed to her of his love for Isha. As upset as she was, she was very happy for her 2 friends who seemed to reciprocate each other's feelings.

Jaidev lived here in a hostel and his family was back in Delhi. When they all became friends, Jaidev had introduced both Isha and Jaya to his family over phone. His parents had professions that kept them very busy, and they had not personally visited Jaidev at school. With his mother's 45th birthday fast approaching, and her desire to see him married, Jaidev had decided to surprise them with his wedding at the end of his 3rd year in college. He had of-course told his parents that he intended to get married, and that the girl was one of his classmates, but he intended to surprise them with the fact that it was Isha. At the end of their 3rd year, immediately after their graduation, all preparations had started for a grand wedding. Jaya has been staying at Isha's house to help with the wedding preparations. The night before Jaidev's parents were set to arrive, Isha walked in to Jaya's room in a mode of panic. She had suddenly realized that she did not want this wedding, and that her dreams were to become an actress. She had just enjoyed all the attention that Jaidev was bestowing on her, but could not go ahead with it anymore. Jaya tried to reason with her for a bit, but knew that it was of no use. She had always known of Isha's love for acting and attention, and that it had been unnatural for her to accept Jaidev's proposal. Jaya had believed that Isha was smitten by love, but apparently it was just selfishness. She told her as much, and that she was really ashamed that her best friend could play with someone's life like this. Isha who had known of Jaya's fascination for Jaidev suggested that she marry him instead. Jaya opposed Isha initially, and they continued to argue and discuss about it.

Jaidev was getting restless and wanted to meet Isha. It was his wedding afterall, and all his friends had latched on to him without letting him even breathe for a minute by himself. He sneaked out of the house late at night to just meet her once. As he reached her house and was just about to enter her room through her window he heard something that made him freeze. Jaya was talking to Isha

Tum yaha se chali jaaoo. Mein Jaidev se shaadi kar leti hu. Woh thoda naraaz hoga, aur upset bhi. Lekin mein toh pyaar karthi hu usse. Mein manage kar loongi. Tum jaaoo.

Jaidev was too shocked with what he heard to react to it. As he tried to move, he tripped over a pot and the noise awoke people in the house. Out of sheer shock and a need to get a grip on things, he ran away before anyone could spot him.

The entire set of events there on seemed like a nightmare to him, one that he could not wake up from. Having run away from there, Jaidev had spend the rest of the night in an open field, just sitting in sheer shock. Jaya, his friend Jaya loved him? And for the sake of her love, she had convinced Isha to run away? He had to stop them. He could not let this happen. He ran to Isha's house to stop her from doing anything stupid. When he reached there, he was shocked to see his parents. His parents intended to return the surprise he sprung on them by showing up a few hours earlier than anticipated. Isha's parents having realized that she had run away from home had introduced Jaya as the intended bride to his parents. His parents loved Jaya, and he couldnt do anything to stop it. He had tried to tell them through many ways that he loved Isha, but Jaya's proclamation of her love for him in front of their families had been the final blow. They had gotten married the following day, at the same mantap and muhurat where he had intended to marry Isha.

End of Flashback

Jaya had tried her best to make her marriage work. To the world, they were lovers who had married each other out of love. But she knew the nightmare that her life had become.

Jaidev had traveled to Mumbai the following day to meet a client for his father. He was a middle aged man and looked to be around 40 years of age. It came as a rude shock to him to see Isha as that man's wife. Jaidev was infuriated by Jaya's actions more than ever. In his mind, he continued to blame her for the havoc she created in their lives. When he got a few minutes alone with Isha when her husband was on a call, he apologize to her for everything that had gone wrong. Isha who was surprised with his apology realized that there was some misunderstanding in all of this. When she heard jaidev's version of the story, she could not help by cry at her friend's stupidity and sacrifice. Having no strength to bare it anymore, she told Jaidev the true version of the entire story.

The flight from Mumbai to Delhi has been the longest flight of his life. He kept remembering his conversation with Isha and couldn't believe it. Because of his own assumptions and interpretations of events, he had lost 4 beautiful years of his life. 4 years that he could have enjoyed with the girl who sacrificed everything for the 2 people that she cared the most. He hadn't even thought it important to ask her for clarifications, and had punished her for no fault of hers. Not anymore. He would make sure that every single day hereafter would be the best in her life.

As soon as the flight landed, he got into a taxi to reach home. As expected, everyone else had gone to bed. Only Jaya was waiting for him, his wife Jaya. Today, the word wife had a different ring to it. He liked it.

The minute she noticed him, she quickly reached the door to pick his bag. Aap aa gaye? Flight mein khana kha liya, ya mein laga du? Thake hue lag rahe hai, mein kahna hi laga deti hu.

When she turned to move, she felt a hold on her wrist. Confused, she turned to look back and was shocked to see Jaidev holding her hand. She looked up into his eyes with a questioning gaze

He answered her unasked question with one simple action. He pulled her into a bone crushing hug, a hug to never let go.

His mother who had just come down to get herself some water noticed this and teased ek din subha se bahar kya gaye the, itna miss kiya apni wife ko? before walking away. Seldom did she know that the wait had not been for a day, but 4 long years.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os
Plz do write a sequel for this
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Plz pls write a sequell to this !!!!
Such a heartwearmibg os ; the best one so far 👏 ⭐️
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I'd love to see a more in depth take on this or similar stories - Jaya and Jaydev really are the stars of this show for me and this is wonderfully scripted. I love the added context!
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hi new to the forum
plz continue this
just loved this couple want to read more about them...
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Beautiful story 👏
Loved it 😊
Somehow Jaya- Jaidev's story attracts me more to the show than Adarsh- Swadheenta's story.
Pls keep writing more stories like this on Jaya- Jaidev 😉
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Nice work!
You covered a lot of ground in the story in very little words but without making it rushed...
Kudos!
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Very well written! Please write a sequel for this.
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I had truly intended for this to be a OS and had not planned any sequel. But I am overwhelmed by the number of you who asked for a follow-through on this story. I don't have much content, but it is not often that I get asked to write more 😆. I cannot lose this opportunity now, can I?
This is an Epilogue, an end to this story if you will. I don't know how to prolong this any more, so hope you guys like the end. Here goes

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Jaya, Jaya, where are you?

Oh aap aa gaye? Mein Shraddha ke Sangeet party ke liye taiyaar ho rahi thi.

Tum taiyaar ho gayi? Teek hai... she could see that he had suddenly become sad.

Kya hua Jaidev?

Woh, mein tumhare liye yeh saree laya tha. I think this beige will look very good on you. Koi baat nahi, phir kabhi pehan lena. He smiled at her and turned to put the packet that he held in his hands on the bed.

She stopped him. Aap mere liye itni pyaar se laaye hai, mein abhi pehan na chahti hu. Mein abhi change karke aayi

She could see the million dollar smile on his face and vowed to herself to do everything she could to keep it that way.

It had been 6 months from that day. And true to his word, Jaidev went out of his way to make up for all the lost time. Jaya's world had been turned upside down. She was just beginning to get used to the nightmare that her life had become when like a wave of his magic wand, Jaidev had made it a fantasy that no girl could imagine. She had become his queen. She still found it difficult to believe that this was all true. That she was living a life beyond her imagination. When they were in the confines of their room that night, he had apologized to her and had narrated how he had learnt the truth from Isha. He had questioned her about why she hadn't told him any of it. To her meek Mujhe pata tha ki aap meri baat ka vishwaas nahi karange, he had pulled her into another hug again and promised to never let her go.

The first few days since then, he had continued to feel guilty for his actions and had constantly been on his guard, going out of the way to make sure she was comfortable. She had let him deal with these new learnings in his own way for a while, but it then reached a point where his guilt had started making her feel chocked and overwhelmed. It all became too much for her to bare when one night she had hugged him to let him know that she wanted them to move on from this phase, but he had distanced himself and asked her to rest. She had broken down completely at that and told him that even after all their misunderstanding were cleared she was still so unworthy and unwanted to him, and that she would leave and go away. He then realized his mistake and how she perceived his guilt as another rejection. He let go of his inhibitions and made love to her. And that had been the beginning of a new journey for them.

Now, as Jaidev waited for Jaya to come out, he wondered how he would bring up the next thing he had on his mind. Even though they had moved forward, he was still guilty of his actions, and weary of her reactions. He wanted to take things easy and not hurt her in any way possible. But he did have to mention this to her. He looked up when he heard the dressing room door, what he saw made his breathe hitch. There she stood, in a simple beige colour saree, looking every bit like the angel that she was. He walked up to her and placed a kiss on her forehead.

Jaya, mein tumse kuch poocha cha raha tha

Poochiye na

Woh, tumhara birthday aa raha hai. Toh, mein soch raha tha, ki kya hum bahaar jaa sakte hai?

Smiling, Thank you so much Jaidev. Of-course jaa sakte hai. Mein restaurant book kar deti hu. Aap batayi kaha leke jaa rahe hai mujhe?

Restaurant nahi. Mein 1 week ke liye tumhe ek holiday pe leke jaana chah ta hu

To say that Jaya was surprised was an understatement. She stood rooted in her spot, not knowing how to react. This had to be a dream.

Taking her silence as her uncertainly, Jaidev quickly suggested Agar tumhe nahi jaan toh teek hai. Mein plans cancel kar deta hu. Hum yahi pe kahi dinner kar lenge. No problem.

As he was walking away, Jaya ran to him and hugged him from behind. Aapke yeh bolne se hi mera yeh wala birthday meri zindaki ka sabse acha wala birthday ban gaya. Aap jaha chahange mein waha aapke saath chale ke liye taiyaar hu.

Both of them had tears of joy and contentment in their eyes.

That evening, at the sangeet ceremony of the daughter of one of their family friends, when everyone teased them about when they would become parents, Jaidev had no qualms in telling everyone - "Soon, very soon"
Edited by Soapoperasrfun - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---awe10some---

Lovely os
Plz do write a sequel for this


Your wish is my command 😆. Just posted the Epilogue. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for leaving your comment

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