OS - Sacrifice (A Jaya-Jaidev story) Epilogue updated - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sana_J.
👏 continue writing

Thank you.

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Originally posted by: sushfiza
Cont plz
Lovd it

Thanks. It was meant to be just an OS. But I have posted the Epilogue. I hope you like it

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Originally posted by: ammu3
Plz pls write a sequell to this !!!!
Such a heartwearmibg os ; the best one so far 👏 ⭐️

Thanks a bunch. I hope you enjoy the Epilogue just as much. I didn't have much more content to prolong the story because I had only intended it to be an OS. But these 2 really make me happy. I think they are adorable.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Nmyra
I'd love to see a more in depth take on this or similar stories - Jaya and Jaydev really are the stars of this show for me and this is wonderfully scripted. I love the added context!

Have you tried reading Sarcy's Chasing Love? It is about Jaya-Jaidev. It is truly amazing. Try it if you haven't already.

Thanks for leaving your comment.

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Originally posted by: 16zara
hi new to the forum
plz continue this
just loved this couple want to read more about them...

Thanks. I am writing another FF but that is about Adarsh and Swadheenta. I will try to think of more topics to write regarding these 2. 😳

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Originally posted by: arviabhigya
Beautiful story 👏
Loved it 😊
Somehow Jaya- Jaidev's story attracts me more to the show than Adarsh- Swadheenta's story.
Pls keep writing more stories like this on Jaya- Jaidev 😉

😃 Same pinch. I like Jaya-Jaidev too. Posted the epilogue to this story. Do let me know what you think of it. Will try and think of other things to write about these 2

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#17

Originally posted by: Paridhi7250
Nice work!
You covered a lot of ground in the story in very little words but without making it rushed...
Kudos!

Thanks Paridhi. I am reading your story too, and love it. Your comment therefore feels more special.

I had intended it to be just an OS and hence had to complete the entire thing in one go. I didn't think I had content to make it an SS or anything. I am glad it didn't seem rushed.

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Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Ah, lovely! So you too wrote on Jaya and Jaidev. I have come to love these two just as I'd love the protagonists of a show. I thoroughly enjoy reading writing and reading about these two - but things have been ridiculously busy on the personal and professional front these days leaving me with hardly any time to write.

It is so unusual to imagine Jaya and Jaidev in a romantic setting or even one where they care for each other that it is a novelty. You've very beautifully captured their dynamic relationship and their beauty that it has developed after them reaching the level of togetherness. Enjoyed reading it. :)