OS - Sacrifice (A Jaya-Jaidev story) Epilogue updated - Page 2

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ---awe10some---
Lovely
Fanks for writing the epilogue
Do write mre, on the other couples too

I am writing a story on Adarsh and Swadheenta called Building Life, One memory at a time. Do read it if you like - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4614060

Glad you liked the epilogue

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
Ah, lovely! So you too wrote on Jaya and Jaidev. I have come to love these two just as I'd love the protagonists of a show. I thoroughly enjoy reading writing and reading about these two - but things have been ridiculously busy on the personal and professional front these days leaving me with hardly any time to write.

It is so unusual to imagine Jaya and Jaidev in a romantic setting or even one where they care for each other that it is a novelty. You've very beautifully captured their dynamic relationship and their beauty that it has developed after them reaching the level of togetherness. Enjoyed reading it. :)

I am surprised that I am finding time to write at all. But I have been managing so far. I find these creative things to be huge stress busters for me, and take the opportunity whenever I can.

In this story, since Jaya and Jaidev were friends before all the fiasco, them getting cozy and cordial after the misunderstanding got cleared was easy... (and it had to do since it was an OS 😆). Will wait to see what happens next in your story about them.

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Sidhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

I am writing a story on Adarsh and Swadheenta called Building Life, One memory at a time. Do read it if you like -http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4614060

Glad you liked the epilogue

Just read the latest update over there. N must say it was fab

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sushfiza

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Finally all mu faded away from their life ..

It was fab !!!

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Paridhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Thanks Paridhi. I am reading your story too, and love it. Your comment therefore feels more special.

I had intended it to be just an OS and hence had to complete the entire thing in one go. I didn't think I had content to make it an SS or anything. I am glad it didn't seem rushed.

Aww... Thank you...

This was a short and sweet end to their tale...

Hope Jai-Jaya have a happy ending in the serial too...

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Jannat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Thank you.

😊

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Paridhi7250

Aww... Thank you...

This was a short and sweet end to their tale...

Hope Jai-Jaya have a happy ending in the serial too...

I believe it will be. I think all of them will end up with happy life's

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Nameera

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Have you tried reading Sarcy's Chasing Love? It is about Jaya-Jaidev. It is truly amazing. Try it if you haven't already.

Thanks for leaving your comment.

Really! Thank you so much for the suggestion I will definitely be looking it up! I'm actually new to this particular forum, I'm usually a IPKKND person, so any other suggestions in the Jaya-Jaidev category would be great!

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