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Posted: 9 years ago
nice one
kittu got to meet Mallika n got her no.
n even Nandini managed to cause edburgs GF to doubt him n break up
cant believe Vasundhara is still trying to split kashish from sujal when will she keep her snobby opinionated bi*chy nose out of others business
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! beautiful updates dear...loved them
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update loved it thank you for pm sorry for late reply was busy with cousin wedding.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update




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Posted: 9 years ago
LINK TO CHAPTER 10

CHAPTER 11

Annette Olsen sees Nandini-Edberg bonding and realizes that she made a mistake doubting Edberg. Her best friend Jenifer advised her to speak to Edberg before taking the decision to break up with him.

Nandini on the other hand thinks, "I need to get rid of Annette but how? I don't want her to come anywhere near Edberg."

Edberg is in a dilemma whether to accept Nandini or not but he is not happy with Annette Olsen.

After the practice session, Edberg is silent. Nandini asks him, "Sir, why are you dull today?"
Edberg: Don't call me Sir. We are friends. You can call me by name.
Nandini: Sure. You seem to be very much upset. I think your fiancee does not like us being together. So I am leaving.
Edberg: No, it is not because of you. I've coached many girls and you are one of them but she is behaving like this.
Nandini: She is possessive about you because she loves you.
Edberg: Love also means to trust one another. I have accepted her despite her breakup with Mats Wilander. He is my best friend. I don't know what I saw in her that I fell for her.
Nandini: But she took care of you when you got injured.
Edberg: Yes, I cannot forget that but she is taking advantage of that.
Nandini: If I'm here, she will doubt you more and to be honest, I love you a lot.
Edberg: There is nothing wrong in that. I have also began to love you. I wish you came to me earlier.
Nandini: But I'm not lucky to get you. You can get married at any point of time. Annette is very lucky that you love her. I wish that I had got you earlier. I'm a college student but I'm working to support myself in sports.
Edberg: Don't ever say that you are unlucky. I see that you work hard day & night. I loved Annette but she does not behave well with me.
Nandini: I cannot think is the rarest of my dreams that you will fall for me. Since that has happened, will you stand for me at all times?
Edberg smiles & said: Of course! By all means. It is upto me to decide. You don't have to be insecure.
Edberg & Nandini hug each other. Annette sees that & said, "Very good Edberg. You are in love with a blue eyed Indian. Bloody Indians."
Edberg: Mind your language. Yes, for your information, I love her now. It was your stupidity that you broke up with me. I'm not interested in reconciling with you. Get lost!
Annette: Fine, even I too don't want to spend my life with you.
She throws the engagement ring & Edberg returns his engagement ring to her.
Annette leaves.
Edberg: I will definitely come to India now.

On the other hand, everyone sees Kittu with Mallika. Mallika goes into the washroom. All his colleagues said, "Wow, mind blowing but how can she come with us?"
Kittu: Her shoot is over here. So she is coming with us to India to shoot there. The background song is

Pucho Na Yaar Kya Hua
Unka Deedar Kya Hua
Sapney Mere Rang Laye Haan Laye
Usne Kaha Main Teri Hoon Jaana
Pucho Na Yaar Kya Hua

Ye Sabh Hua Kaise
Pizza Ka Le Ke Order
Main Gaya Bangley Ke Andar
Maine Ding Ding Bell Bajayee
Phir Kya Hona Tha Aye Bhai
Mere Pyaar Ki Khushboo Se
Woh Kholney Darwaaza Aayee
Lad Gayee Ye Dono Aankhein
Thodi Sharmayee Muskayee
Uske Seene Mein Bhi Dhak Dhak
Mere Seene Mein Bhi Dhak Dhak
Uske Seene Mein Bhi Dhak Dhak
Mere Seene Mein Bhi Dhak Dhak



Phir Kya Hua, Phir Kya Hua
Phir Kya Hua, Phir Kya Hua
Bol Na Yaar
Pucho Na Yaar Kya Hua
Unka Deedar Kya Hua
Sapney Mere Rang Laye Haan Laye
Usne Kaha Main Teri Hoon Jaana
Pucho Na Yaar Kya Hua

Kya Purane Record Ki Tarhan Atak Raha Hai
Yaar Tera Hamesha Ka Yehi Locha Hai
Interest Mein Laata Hai Aur Atka Deta Hai
Oye Saala Tere Ko Moloomn
Apne Ko Kitna Khushi Hota Hai Aagey Ga

Cellular Pe Call Aaya
Usne "No Ka Button Dubaya
Telephone Ka Woh Receiver
Rakh Diya Jhat Se Ulat Kar
Hosh Tha Behosh Bhi Tha
Mere Dil Mein Josh Bhi Tha
Maine Bola Main Hoon Aashiq
Tumko Chahoon Betaahasha
Maine Uska Haat Pakad Kar
Keh Diya Jo Bhi Kehna Tha
Maine Uska Haat Pakad Kar
Keh Diya Jo Bhi Kehna Tha



Phir Kya Hua, Phir Kya Hua
Phir Kya Hua, Phir Kya Hua
Bataa Na Yaar
Pucho Na Yaar Kya Hua
Unka Deedar Kya Hua
Sapney Mere Rang Laye Haan Laye
Usne Kaha Main Teri Hoon Jaana
Pucho Na Yaar Kya Hua


Yeh To Kamaal Ho Gaya
Tu To Maala Maal Ho Gaya
Mohabbat Ke Khazane Mein
Ek Minute, Ek Minute
Usne Kuch Kaha Ke Nahi Haan

Usne Meri Aakhon Mein
Aankhein Dal Kar Kaha
Ho Gayee Hoon Main Tumhari
Dil Tumhe Maine De Daala
Mujhko Duniya Ki Nahi Parvaa
Tum Ho Majnoo Main Hoon Laila
Kaun Ho Tum Kahan Se Aaye
Tumse Main Ye Naa Puchoongi
Tum Miley Sabh Kuch Mila Hai
Tumko Jeevan Bhar Chaahongi
Phir Kaha Baaton Baaton Mein
Le Lo Mujhko Tum Baahon Mein
Phir Kaha Baaton Baaton Mein
Le Lo Mujhko Tum Baahon Mein



Abh Bas Hua, Abh Bas Hua
Abh Bas Hua, Abh Bas Hua
Tu Band Kar Phaiknaa
Pakda Gaya Dekh Naa
Karte Hain Hum Ye Dua
Us Khuda Se
Ho Jaaye Sach Tera Sapna Yaara
La La La La La La La.

Everyone praises Kittu & Nandini for making impossible things possible. Sujal & Kashish come to that place. They meet Mallika who said she has got shooting in India.

Meanwhile, her uncle comes to that place & manhandle Mallika but Sujal & other colleagues stop him & hand him to the cops.

Kittu revealed, "I have saved her from this man."
Sujal: Not a problem.
Everyone goes back to India after the client meeting. Edberg takes the next flight & comes to India

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
All the Couples Part was so Nice.😊
The Whole Part was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice one
so nandini managed to win Edberg from Annette
wonder how he will react if he finds out she planned this
as for kittu his girl again had to be saved from her uncle
now hes been handed over to the police I hope he aint any more trouble
looking forward to seeing whats gonna happen next
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
wowwie dear 👏👏
this is nice

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