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Edberg nandini confession was nice.he go rid of his gf too.nice.mallika is saved by kittu n others from her cruel uncle.nice.now waiting 4 kittu mallika luv story
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LINK TO CHAPTER 11

CHAPTER 12

Back in India, Mallika spends quality time with Kittu and his sister.

Kittu's parents ask him: Who is this girl?

Kittu: She is Mallika who is the film actress. I brought her here as her uncle tortures her daily. She needs my help.

Both of them request their parents. They agree.

Nandini's friend Ekta is not happy with the way she got Edberg.

Ekta: What a way to snatch a guy from a girl!

Nandini: What did I do? I'm only his student but a favourite one. He gave me more attention as I picked up the game very quickly. He promised me that he will make me an expert and teach me 100% of his tactics which nobody does these days.

Ekta: If you are so good then why didn't you stop him from confiding in you?

Nandini: How can I? If you love him, you tell me. I will introduce you to him.

Ekta: I like Boris Becker better than him.

Nandini: If I got him that is my luck. He was going out of romantic ideas and I told him a unique way of proposing. I only told him to give the demo before me. When he did that, she misunderstood and doubted. How am I responsible for it? You are jealous.

Ekta: Then why were you insecure when you saw her again?

Nandini: I was not insecure because of that. On the contrary, I told him to talk to her at least once but when she bad-mouthed me, he had changed his mind. I was also ready to walk out of his life but he told me not to do that.

Nandini leaves the place. She gets the message from Edberg in her phone that he has arrived. Nandini receives him at the airport.

Both go to the restaurant and have Chinese food.

All the other business interns' exams are nearing now. Sujal & others are now preparing for their exams. Sujal, Rishi, Piyush & Varun wish best of luck to Kashish, Mouli, Archie & Mehek respectively. They all sit together & exchange the notes which they have gathered.

Kittu's college friend Nisha is madly in love with him but Kittu considers her as a close friend.

Next day is the Valentine's Day. Everyone gets a gift for their sweethearts. Nisha gives rose to Kittu. Mallika sees this & walks out. Kittu sees that & tries to stop her.

Mallika: I didn't expect this from you. I wanted to confess my love to you but I never knew that you love Nisha. I thought you love me as much as I do but I was wrong.

She goes to the set. Kittu is upset. He confronts Nisha saying, "You know very well that I hate roses as they fade quickly. You know very well that I love Mallika. How can you even think of proposing to me?"

Nisha: I thought you were joking that you love her.

Kittu: I am dead serious about Mallika. She herself told me that she wanted to confess her love today & she misunderstood.

Nisha & Kittu go to the set.

Nisha meets Mallika & said: Kittu loves you a lot. Before meeting you, he was dreaming about you day & night & was watching your movies the entire day.

Mallika goes to Kittu & said, "I'm sorry. I've made a mistake in understanding you."

Kittu & Mallika hug. Both get married before Kittu's exams.

CHAPTER 13

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago
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Nandini Edberg r going well.then why is this ekta taunting nandini?gud that nandini justified herself n went on a date with Edberg.Mallika mu kittu nisha seeing nisha's luv 4 kittu.but glad that nisha herself cleared d mu n kittu mallika gt married.

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