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Posted: 9 years ago
nice one
rashis plan worked n kashish is back with Sujal
rashi is right vashundra is a old busy body although have to admit I have another stronger name for her 😆
as for kittu n nandini cant wait to see if they succeed
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
The Whole Part was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

nice one
rashis plan worked n kashish is back with Sujal
rashi is right vashundra is a old busy body although have to admit I have another stronger name for her 😆
as for kittu n nandini cant wait to see if they succeed
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin


You are welcome to suggest another name. Please say it.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: katrinasalman



You are welcome to suggest another name. Please say it.😆




😆 conniving witch is a nicer one
or going all out a f***ing conniving selfcentered selfish b**chy c*w
could think some more but think these sum her up
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lalit gave the slap vasundara
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Sorry for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 9

CHAPTER 10

R & G had gone for the business trip but everyone could have quality time. Kittu was watching Mallika's shooting whereas Nandini was watching Edbergs's match. After the shooting, Kittu introduces himself to Mallika as her fan.
Mallika: Nice to see you.
Her uncle interrupts their conversation & takes her away. Kittu had got Mallika's number to contact.


Stefan Edberg was playing against Jim Courier in Wimbledon match in which the former had won in straight sets. Nandini made a point to meet Edberg before Annette. After the match, Nandini took her autograph book to Edberg. He wrote. "My best wishes to you. Love Edberg."


Nandini: My name is Nandini. I'm your fan.
Edberg: Nice to see you. Where are you from?
Nandini: I'm from India.
Edberg: You have a nice name & you don't look like an Indian.
Nandini: Thanks. When are you coming to India?
Edberg: Difficult to say but will try.
When they are about to leave, Nandini trips down but Edberg holds her. Annette sees that & gets irked.
Nandini: I want to learn to play tennis from you.
Edberg: For how many days will you be here?
Nandini: Two months. I came here with my company. We are here for training.
Edberg: Good.
Both hug.
Both of them give their numbers to each other. After they leave, Annette fights with Edberg.
Edberg: There is a limit for doubting.
Annette: If she is you fan, why she should be in your arms.
Edberg: she was about to fall so I held her.
He then asks Annette, "Shall we go for candle light dinner tonight?" Annette said, "I have some other appointment. I won't be able to come."

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At R &G House:

Vasundhara : So what happened to your challenge. You still have 3 months but you met him.
Kashish: I only took care of him which means that I love Sujal with all my heart. I don't have to prove it to anyone.
Rishi, Veena, CG & Lalit support Kashish.

Kashish gets a call from Sujal in which he tells her to come to UK. Kashish comesthere taking the next flight. Sujal receives her at the airport.


Kashish meets the entire staff & is surprised to see Kittu & Nandini. Both go to meet the client & give their presentation. The client gets impressed & sign the deal with them.

Mallika meets Kittu whereas Nandini starts her training session with Edberg. Sujal & Kashish go to many places in UK & spend quality time.


At the end of the day, Kittu asked, "How was your time with Edberg?"
Nandini: It was good. In this 2 months time, he should come close to me. How was your time with Mallika?
Kittu: She likes me but her uncle is a problem.
Edberg & Annette fight about his getting close to Nandini. She began to interrupt him at the most important practice sessions.

Nandini meets Edberg at the end of training session. Nandini asked Edberg, "You look very upset today. Did I do anything wrong?"
Edberg: Not at all. My girl friend Annette keeps doubting me. when I gave her the gift, she threw it away.
Nandini: I'm sorry to know that. But you have to try something very romantic.
Edberg: Can you suggest me something?
Nandini: Since you will be getting married, try to propose her by kneeling down. It will give a different feeling.
Edberg is nervous.
Nandini: Just try it before me thinking Annette is before you.
Edberg does the rehearsal. Annette sees that & her suspicion increases. Few minutes back after Nandini left, Edberg & Annette fight like cats & dogs & they break up. He then develops his feelings for Nandini.

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Mallika is having tough time with her relatives. Kittu sees that & feels sorry for her. Unable to see her pain, he rescues her from her relatives & takes her to his room. Mallika develops her feelings towards Kittu.

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved edberg nandini scenes.he is giving her training too.annette doubts him n breaks up with him, gud to see hom feeling 4 nandini.hope kittu saves mallika from her horrible family. Loved kashish's reply 2 vasundara.finally no distanxe btw suj kash.
Plz update kofi journey, undying, return
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Nandini and Edberg Part was so Interesting.😊
The Whole Conversations were so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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