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nice few chapters
that vasu is a complete nightmlare to our lovebirds
shes determined to split them
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow ash and aftab.nandini n kttu r mad about edberg n mallika.i lved aftab urmila in mast.loved kittu nandini bond.will job help them to reach their luv
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CHAPTER 8

CHAPTER 9

Next day, Kittu & Nandini go to Sujal's office. He appoints them as Customer Support Executives. They are appointed for the night shift & are provided pick up & drop facility. They are offered Rs.20,000/- a month.

Kittu: This is a good opportunity for us to save money so we can travel.
Nandini: That is true but my condition is critical. Whatever has to be done, it has to be done immediately.
Kittu: I don't know when is Edberg's marriage date but if it happens, it will come in newspaper. Check for the flight ticket rates.

Both of them check the flight ticket rate which is 60,000/-

Kittu: Apart from the flight ticket, you have to carry extra cash with you as you have to book for the hotel room.

Nandini: I think, the best way is to catch him at the stadium where there is a tournament.

Kittu: Yes, you are right. The amount which we are getting is not enough for us but I will help you.

Nandini: But even you have to reach your love. What will you do?

Kittu: If you fall short, I will help you. For me it is a short distance. Once I reach that place, anybody will tell me where her place is.

Nandini: Do you think she will always be at home? She has to go for outdoor shooting at different places.

Kittu: Oh! I haven't thought about it. Which means that if she goes for shooting abroad, I have to go there. We will work here for at least 6 to 8 months & make the saving. We will get the increment once our performance is good. For now, just relax. Let things go on like how it is.

Both work hard day & night to earn & save the money.

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Sujal is thinking about Kashish & is depressed. Rishi & Varun approach Mehek & Mouli & said, "We need your help."

Mehek & Mouli: What?
Rashi: I have a plan to make Kashish come & meet Sujal.
Mehek: This idea is very much weird.
Mouli: No, it is a good idea.
Varun agrees with Rishi.

When they are returning from college, Mehek & Mouli bump to the car. Rishi & Varun take them home as they are unconscious. Kashish gets a phone call from Rishi saying, "Mehek & Mouli met with an accident. They are in my house."
Kashish is shocked.
Vasundara: It is useless to call Kashish as she will see Sujal when she comes. He has become a Devdas thinking about Kashish & drinking.
Rishi: It is all because of you. Naa hi aap yeh shart rakhthi aur naa hi yeh sab hota. If you had not put this condition, this wouldn't have happened.
Sanjana: Don't bring mom in between.
Rishi: I don't intend to do that either but she comes in between. She is no one to decide about Big B & Kashish's life. Your mom is an old busy body.
Varun: Rishi, be within your limits. Stop talking ill about my mom.
Mouli: What wrong did Rishi say? She has been interfering in our lives. She is not Sujal & Rishi's mom. When CG & Veena don't have objection in their relationships why should she interfere?

Door bell rings. Mehek & Mouli quickly put the cloth on their heads with red kumkum & lie down. Rishi opens the door. Kashish comes in & goes to her sisters.

Rishi: Nothing serious. They are perfectly alright.
However, Sujal had met with an accident & is brought home by the traffic police. The Garewals admit him to the hospital. Kashish too comes there on Rishi's request.
Vasundara: Kashish was away all these days & now she is showing concern towards Sujal.
Lalit: You are really a jerk. Very difficult to live with you. What do you want? Whether or not Kashish comes it is a problem for you. Stay away from the Garewals before I take a strict action against you. I heard what Rishi told you. He is not wrong in saying that you are a busybody.
Vasundara: I want us to to stay separately. I want you to take whatever is ours & move out. If you do this, I won't care the "F" of them.
Lalit: That will never happen. If you want to leave, you are welcome but if you want to stay, you have to behave accordingly.
Sujal gains his consciousness & asks for Kashish who meets him & takes care of him. Sujal gets discharged. Ritika fixes up Piyush's engagement with Archie. A lot of guests come. Piyush & Archie are engaged.

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Kittu & Nandini gives the best performance & are promoted as team leaders within 3 months. They get the hike of Rs. 30,000/- with incentives. They also kept the track of their dream persons. One day, the entire team go to watch the Wimbledon to watch live tennis. Even Mallika is shooting there.


Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago
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Kittu nandini r so innocent. They won n will they reach their destination. Their trick to bring kashish home was nice.sujals accident was shocking. Kashish coming n taking care of hm was nice.piyush archie r engaged.its true that vasu shudnt interfere when sujal rishis paremts have no prob
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