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Posted: 9 years ago

6th Shot: "Vo nakli live-in relationship nahi tha, Asad"

Asad was sitting in d backseat of d taxi along wid one of d American officer while another American officer sat on d front seat beside Mr. Kapoor who was driving. Asad thought abt Zoya's words on their live-relationship being nakli live-in relationship like his nakli nikaah. He recalled him saying d word nakli nikaah several times knowing well how it hurt her but he still kept doing it in hope of pushing her away 4m him so dat he does not hurt her like father? In doing all dis, he did not even thought dat he actually hurt her in very horrible ways if not like his father. His bad past or his issues wid his father can't be excused for his orthodox n judgemental behaviour wid her many times n how badly he treated a female guest. He can't blame her for not forgiving him as he really did lots of terrible things to her while presenting himself as a respectable gentleman to d world. Wen she came to India he did not let her feel welcomed in her own country. His behaviour 2wards made her hate him to d extent of playing wid feelings n takn revenge 4m him. He was lost in thoughts wen he realized dat Mr. Kapoor was taking him in d wrong direction.

"You are not taking me in the airport direction, Mr. Kapoor," said Asad.

"Cuz u r not going to d airport but somewhere else," said Mr. Kapoor.

"Wat do u mean?" asked Asad.

"U will know soon," replied Mr. Kapoor.

"Listen, u can't take me anywhere," said Asad.

"I can," said Mr. Kapoor n kept on driving.

Asad was confused n tensed not knowing wat to do. After some time, Mr. Kapoor stopped at Niagara Falls. He got out of d door n opened d door of Asad's side.

"Someone is waiting for u at d bridge," said Mr. Kapoor wid a smile.

Asad came out of d car.

"Who is waiting for me?" asked Asad cluelessly.

"Go n see for urself," said Mr. Kapoor wid a smile n went back in his car before driving away leaving Asad alone. Asad walked to d bridge of Niagara Falls n was shocked to see Zoya standing at d bridge smiling at him. He was confused by her expressions.

"Zoya, why they told me to come here instead of deporting me?" asked Asad.

"Cuz they were not immigration officers but my friends," replied Zoya, "U were not supposed to be deported cuz we have to continue our live-in relationship."

Asad was puzzled at her reply.

"Then why u told me dat they were immigration officers n dat I will be deported?" asked Asad confusingly, "R u still playing wid my emotions, Zoya?"

"No, I am not playing wid ur emotions. I never did. Wat happened between us 4m 1 month was all real. Vo nakli live-in relationship nahi tha, Asad. D way u r doubting me now thinking I am still playing wid ur emotions I felt d same thinking abt our past wen u used to apologize to me sumthn or be nice but soon after dat u wud again do sumthn bad to hurt bad. I felt d same way wen u spent some nice moments on dat bhang night n 4m next day u started ignoring n enjoying hurting n making me jealous using Tanveer. I felt d same wen u engaged me at d airport n then told dat it was fake & u engaged me to please ur mother & sister. I am not a toy whom u can use to please anyone, Asad. I am a human being who has feelings & u hurt d same feelings wen u told dat d engagement was fake. If I agreed to marry u then u wud called d marriage also as fake. I have forgiven u completely a week before n decided to keep on dating u so. Wat I did at home 2day was actually a drama to make u realize how much it hurts n pains wen someone who spends some nice moments wid u n does sumthn nice for u tells u in d next moment dat it was all fake. I wanted u to realize how I felt wen we were in each other's position 2 years ago. So, I told some of my friends to act as immigration officers to take u 4m home n then bring u here. I came here by another way so I reached it here before u. Lets go home now," replied Zoya.

Asad was happy wid her reply.

"I am sorry, Zoya for all d hurt I have caused u. I have realized how much I hurt u. Don't know wat got into my head dat I grew up to be such a jerk," apologized Asad.

"Asad, lets forget abt all dis n start our relationship on a good note," said Zoya.

"Zoya, if u don't mind shall I ask u sumthn?" asked Asad.

"Yes ask," replied Zoya.

"Why u hate Humeira?" asked Asad, "Wats her parents did is not her fault."

"I am not hating her cuz of her parents. I hated her for getn engaged to Ayaan. I did not liked her getn engaged to Ayaan as he was ur brother since I started hating ur entire family cuz of u. I told her dat if she wants me to consider her as my sister she sud not get engaged to Ayaan but she did not listened to me so I broke our relationship even before it started. I did not wanted to come close to Humeira if she wud get engaged to Ayaan which wud make me face u again as u r his brother," replied Zoya.

"But dis is not right, Zoya. I know u hated me n even my mother for letn me hurt u again n again n also wanting u to marry me not caring abt ur career plans n also whether u will be happy wid a man who always hurt u but Ayaan never did anything to u. He actually trusted n supported u wen u were accused of poisoning Humeira even though it was only few days of u both bcumn friends unlike me who even living wid u for nearly 6 months did not trusted u & accused u to d point of calling d immigration officers to deport u. Humeira also has not done anything to u. She misses u even 2day hoping u wud accept her one day," said Asad.

"I was angry dat she choose Ayaan over me not caring how much I was hurt by his brother. I thought she only cared abt my happiness not my emotions," said Zoya.

"She cares for u, Zoya. She did not choose anyone. She loves both u & Ayaan. She was actually angry for me for 1 year after cumn to know dat u r her sister as she blamed me for being d reason of her sister hating her. She wud warn Ayaan to break off d engagement if he ever hurt her like his brother hurt her sister. It tuk her 1 year to realize dat I have changed n regretting all my mistakes," said Asad.

"I think I was wrong wid Humeira. I sud unite wid her," said Zoya.

"Yes, u sud," said Asad.

"Wat does Humeira do now?" asked Zoya.

"Wen everyone got to know dat ur step-father cheated ur mother n tuk over her business which he later merged wid my father's business n how my father burned d doll factory of ur mother in Bhopal to ruin her new business, we called ur aapi-jeeju in Bhopal after sending our fathers, Razia n Tanveer in jail. After talking wid lawyers, it was decided dat u will be d owner of d entire property being d company originally of ur mother. Ur aapi-jeeju talked wid u abt it but u told them dat d property sud be divided between u both sisters. So, Humeira is lukn after dat company. She hopes u to someday join her," said Asad.

"I have my own business now but I will always be there for d company," said Zoya.

They lukd at d beautiful Niagara Falls holding each other's hands.

"I confess my love to u in front of world's largest waterfall. I love u, Zoya," said Asad.

"I love u too, Asad," said Zoya.

Mitwa music played in d bg as they smiled n hugged each other.

"Zoya, I need to talk to ur aapi-jeeju abt us," said Asad.

"I talked to them yesterday n they also forgave u," said Zoya.

"Really?" asked Asad.

"Yes," replied Zoya, "They even want us to continue our live-in relationship if we want."

"They seem so open," said Asad.

"Nowadays, even in India few families r open abt live-in relationships," said Zoya.

"But I want to meet ur aapi-jeeju," said Asad.

"Okay, lets go there then," said Zoya.

They tuk a taxi n went to AnZee's house. AnZee smiled at Asad n Zoya.

"Assalam alaikam," said Anwar.

"Walaikum assalam," said Zoya.

"Its so nice to see both of u 2gthr," said Zeenat.

Asad n Zoya went inside. Zeenat told a maid to bring sumthn for them.

"Plz, be seated," said Anwar.

Asad n Zoya sat next to each other.

"I am really very sorry for hurting Zoya. I will never do it again," apologized Asad.

"We know u won't. U have already paid for ur mistakes," said Anwar.

"I want to spend some more time wid Zoya here," said Asad.

"Dats nice but after dat we will talk abt ur marriage," said Anwar, "Now dat Zoya I settled in her career n she has found a nice man so u both sud get married."

"But we will get u both married only wen u want," said Zeenat.

"I will relocate my head office in India then," said Zoya, "I am ready to return to India to get married wen Asad wants as I am ready to marry anytime now."

"We sud wait for some more time. We will arrange for a nice place for ur head office in Bhopal n after dat we will return to India," said Asad.

"Dats nice, Asad," said Zoya.

"Shirin aunty too lives wid all of u. Does she hates u & Najma?" asked Zeenat.

"No, in fact she was also a victim of betrayal by my father. She is a very nice woman who has started loving me n Najma like her own children. We call her Chhoti Ammi. She n Ammi have bcum friends. I never thought I will love her someday. She wishes to meet Zoya one day to apologize for d mistakes done by her brother. Zoya used to call my Ammi as Phuphi but its Chhoti Ammi who turned out to be Zoya's actual Phuphi," replied Asad.

"She don't need to apologize to me wen she was not at fault," said Zoya.

Asad n Zoya left for their home in d afternoon after having lunch.

Wen Asad was abt to come to their room, Zoya stopped him.

"4m 2day, we will live in our room I mean my original room which has one bed cuz we can now sleep 2gthr on d same bed. So, u keep ur things there only," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Okay," said Asad wid a smile.

They went to d room Zoya told abt.

"I got d room cleaned before I left for Niagara Falls," said Zoya.

"Why u slept next to me if u were in ur senses?" asked Asad.

"Lets get changed. I will tell u after dat," replied Zoya.

They changed into another clothes n sat on d bed.

"U were asking me a question for which I will answer now," said Zoya wid a smile, "I slept next to u cuz as I said earlier dat at d Niagara Falls dat I have forgiven u completely a week before. If I was really playing wid ur emotions I had not confessed dat I loved u too wen u confessed ur love yesterday, I wud not have sang a romantic song wid u n touched u romantically & I wud not have slept next to u on d same bed. I put bhang in ur pakoda cuz I wanted to know wat u really feel for me cuz last time even though u admitted u liked me but in d next moment, u spoke sumthn which hurt me very much."

"I am sorry for dat, Zoya," apologized Asad.

"Let it be. U r not d same now," said Zoya.

She went on to tell him wat all they talked yesterday n wat all happened between them.

"I can't believe we spent romantic moments yesterday," said Asad wid a smile.

"May be u will remember them someday," said Zoya wid a smile.

"I hope so," said Asad wid a smile.

"Sud we tell ur family abt us?" asked Zoya.

"No, we will tell them after some time," replied Asad.

"Why not now?" asked Zoya.

"Cuz I want to surprise them," replied Asad.

"Okay," said Zoya.

Asad is so happy 2day. He got his Zoya back. In d morning, he was very hurt due to Zoya's betrayal but he cud not blame her as he behaved wid her d same way even worse than dat. Wen he met Zoya at Niagara Falls n she told him dat she was acting to get him deported he became very happy. He felt so nice talking to her aapi-jeeju.

"Asad, lets have some rest. I am so tired. U may also be tired," said Zoya.

"Yaa," said Asad n lied on d bed.

Zoya lied next to him.

"U did not told abt Nikhat n Nuzhat," said Zoya.

"They r doing post-graduation," said Asad, "Nikhat wants to be in dance profession."

"Wat abt Nuzhat?" asked Zoya.

"She has not yet decided," replied Asad.

"Oh," said Zoya.

They slept after some time after talking wid each other.

Next Shot: Look, the news of bhaijaan and Zoya kissing.


A/N: How was the surprise? Nice na?😊 Sasir guessed right that there is something more to it. After reading 5th Shot, I thought Zoya did wrong in playing with someone's feelings when she would have just let him go after their 1st deal. But after writing 6th Shot, I think whatever Zoya did was right because Asad needs to understand the extent of hurt he caused Zoya and how she always felt the same hurt he felt after being betrayed. But in the show, I actually wanted Zoya to play with Asad's feelings after he brought her home from Ayaan's home and then dump him because what Asad did could never be forgiven.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting part Juhi...
Though yes I feel...in the show Asad should have known were was he wrong in playing with Zoya's emotions...but meko iss tarah tit for tat wala tareeka zyada pasand nahin...but I do appreciate what you wrote here...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow awesome part
twist is really amazing
finally asya are together
excited for next
thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it..
Glad to know zoya did it to test asad...
But I really liked this asad...
This what u should show in hero...
If he done wrong he should repent to a great extent n change themselves...
But sad now a days they aren't showing it...
Even after so much happening they aren't changing...again showing them as jerks...
Thank u ...for this story...
I really loved this asad n zoya a lot...
Glad that u didn't show zoya's as alcoholic...
Now a days they are writing stories where in the process of modernization they are showing heroine's as alcoholics...
Its wrong...
Modernization doesn't means drinking n wearing short clothes...
Its about their thinking n independence... N the way of dealing things...
we won't approve of drinking usually then y they are showing it like that...its wrong...
Here u didn't make zoya's drink or didn't let asad drink...
Thank u sooo much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
its really nice yaar
after reading 5 th shot i felt bad fr asad
but now i was really happy tat they both met again
i wish it would have happen in serial also like this
neverthless u written very well yaar
eagerly waiting fr their return to india & their marriage
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome chapter.
glad that they are happy together now.

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Posted: 9 years ago
finally asya are together
excited for next

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
With the amazing twist
Asad got a good lesson
Finally both are together
Loved it
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very much love the update and the surprise
But thought shw would have done something dramatic after her break down
So she forgives him
And apolgies and love at Niagara Falls
Do they will spend a little more time and then return to India
And get married
Surprise in store foe his family
Cont soon

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