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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

4...

zoya is trying to make asad see his mistakes...

but good she get to see change asad..

just in action not words...

good update


I wish Zoya did d same in d show as well instead of always forgiving him so easily. Her easily forgiving nature only increased her pain till d end of d show.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

5..

i did not like what zoya did...

what asad his nature not plan...

what zoya did is plan ... that to much revelations...

in this situation ... nobody will gain any trust honestly

on each other for life...

he did mistakes... but what zoya did plan stabbing


Even I too did not liked wat Zoya did. She wud have simply let him go after d deal he came to New York but she chose to take revenge by giving him d same pain he gave her. But being someone's nature to do sumthn does not excuses of his horrible behaviour. Hope u did not mean dis. Wen a person's nature is to bully weak people its called a bully which can't be excused whether its nature or planned. Zoya did wid plan but still wat all Asad did was wrong. Yaa, Asad may not be able to trust her but it will make him realize how much he hurt Zoya more after his mere sorry every time which made her lose her trust on him. As for back-stabbing, after airport engagement wen they returned home Asad did d biggest backstabbing to Zoya by saying d engagement was fake which he only did to please his mother n sister. Wen Asad traded Zoya, he did d biggest backstabbing by breaking Zoya's trust at d time wen she trusted him d most n made him her 1st priority. So if Zoya is bad Asad is worse.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie


zoya created and an illusion...

in getting even with asad...

that he will not be trusting her .. even

to make him regret...

zoya is hurt because asad... she did give him back all that
asad give in 6 months to full swing in 1 month..



As said in d above comment, even if Asad may have hard time trusting he will realize how his actions r making her to difficult to trust him. As much as I did not liked Zoya playing wid his feelings in dis story I actually wanted Zoya to play wid his feelings in d show wen he brought back her home after trading her to make him realize how he broke her trust.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie


the whole journey only cover the negative part...

where is the postive part...

because what time she spend with asad.. in this 1

month looks fake...

and then crying at the end... hard to accept...

asad looks week no hope..

if you ask me... asad accept all punishment an will walk away..
cause asad keep seeing the changed zoya not
the one he felt for... and getting close to the new zoya..
after all this..

unless the will be separated for life...in your story...

this is all my POV.. only 😉 dont get angry😎


No, I am not angry. I love seeing comments n then replying it😃. As for negative or positive part, d story has not yet over. Still more to come. I think its hard for many to see Zoya as a bitch or grey person but d same people easily forgive Asad in many stories even if he is an abuser, a rapist or even a murderer. In many stories, its Zoya who is insulted for a long time by Asad n she always forgives him easily wid hardly any efforts 4m Asad. In many shows, d so-called heroes plays wid heroines emotions to satisfy their big fat egos or some revenge. D recent one in dis category is ETR2's present track. But wateva Zoya did she did wid a reason. I don't condone wat she did but she wanted to show Asad dat she is not d same old Zoya who he can take for granted n use like a punching bag. In d show, Asad did not told Tanveer to leave d house even after they were engaged n almost married each other. Zoya also cud have made Matt stay in d same house during their live-in relationship but she did not. She did not ignored him n always spend time wid Matt like he ignored her for Tanveer. He always hurt her wid nakli sagaai n if she wud have agreed to marry him he wud kept on hurting her wid using more words like nakli sangeet, nakli mehndi, nakli nikaah. So Zoya brought dis nakli live-in relationship to show him how much hurt dis nakli word can cause anyone. She purposely brought Nikhat's plight to hurt him cuz he is her brother cuz he too hurt someone's daughter n sister. I think u have not paid attention to some of d parts. Please read my reply on sasir n anopama's comments. If Zoya was playing wid his feelings why she confessed her feelings, danced romantically wid him n slept next to him wen he wud not remember anyway d next morning as he was intoxicated while she was not?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Asad is not her puppet. Zoya is not treating him like a servant. Asad sud have realized his mistakes much earlier which wud have not brought him in dis situation.



spelling mistake i mean a puppet...

no body to guide... very late wake up call agree😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


I wish Zoya's insecurity was shown in d show as well instead of always showing her forgiving Asad n always trusting him even after all d wrong he did to her. Asad is used of Zoya's sweetness which made him take her granted again n again so she is taunting him.



the show up... totally can accept... you feel angry 😡 😡
went she have no feelings to show other then crying..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


I don't understand why Zoya can't wear wat she wants n sud stop wearing sumthn to please someone. Zoya did it earlier in dis story by stopping to wear shorts n short dresses but then she realized dat she sud not change her dressing for anyone not even her fiance or husband. Asad started seeing things 4m positive view instead of seeing bikini as shameful things.



Nobody should do that... is how you carry yourself...
example you cant wear shorts to attend a wedding right... but we have our
own knowledge and boundaries... to dress appropriate.. we should trust ourselves
and others trust us to... that's all

Changing for some else is a no..

he is change to think about bikini.. is a good thing...👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Asad told Zoya he loves in d 2nd Shot itself but Zoya is not ready to believe him. For her its his old ways of saying sorry for one mistake n doing more bigger mistake d next time. Zoya will take time to trust him cuz he never showed any big change in those 6 months.



agree... what i mean is .. for him to show now through action genuinely...

which earlier he just did by words..

cause he is not the same person anymore...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


I wish Zoya did d same in d show as well instead of always forgiving him so easily. Her easily forgiving nature only increased her pain till d end of d show.



Agree 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
i a way her mistakes to..
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Posted: 9 years ago

will continue reply soon... dear
take care...😉

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