AsYa OS: Teaser 4- I missed my periods, Asad- Page 32- 23rd Aug - Page 16

4...

zoya is trying to make asad see his mistakes...

but good she get to see change asad..

just in action not words...

good update

5..

i did not like what zoya did...

what asad his nature not plan...

what zoya did is plan ... that to much revelations...

in this situation ... nobody will gain any trust honestly

on each other for life...

he did mistakes... but what zoya did plan stabbing

zoya created and an illusion...

in getting even with asad...

that he will not be trusting her .. even

to make him regret...

zoya is hurt because asad... she did give him back all that
asad give in 6 months to full swing in 1 month..

the whole journey only cover the negative part...

where is the postive part...

because what time she spend with asad.. in this 1

month looks fake...

and then crying at the end... hard to accept...

asad looks week no hope..

if you ask me... asad accept all punishment an will walk away..
cause asad keep seeing the changed zoya not
the one he felt for... and getting close to the new zoya..
after all this..

unless the will be separated for life...in your story...

this is all my POV.. only 😉 dont get angry😎

Originally posted by: Linsie

3...

Asad journey... in life until zoya leave him...

very different approach and he admit his mistakes..

at least to himself... then be her puppet...

nicely done...

we always need to face the truth at least to ourselves..

asad have come long way...

well written

Originally posted by: Linsie

zoya insecurity... is a natural...

thanks for showing she is vulnerable about her feelings..

she did cry.. thinking about him.. showing up...

insulting part... still the same... he did scene by scene

where else... she did every time...the whole bunch...

i think you need different approach then taunting..

asad only can regret ... he cant undo or cry...

Originally posted by: Linsie

but asad been invited before... for pool party...

and he went 1 step...

compliment zoya ... and join the fun...

good change.. it did surprise zoya...

and girls drooling she blushing is good...

to bring down the heat...

Originally posted by: Linsie

asad already change...

now reminding the past... nothing is like revenge

not recovering ...

he needs to show... how open up he is not by talking

but by action...

i think that is what zoya needs

Originally posted by: Linsie

let the game begin