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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4:
After looking all around, Sumo found Shravan on the roof of the hotel.

Sumo teasingly: You better not be smoking.

Shravan looked in pain when he looked around. Then, he ignored her.

Sumo caught up with him: Shravan...I was just being nice to him, that's all.

Shravan: Oh and that's why you contradicted me and put me in my place in front of him right? Shravan is not the only one who calls me Sumo, he's not that special. Everyone does and so can you!

Sumo: I was just caught up in the heat of the argument. It was nothing more, Shravan. I promised you, na? You were the one being mean to him, after all, he's our guest.

Shravan angrily: I don't care if that chep is our guest. He didn't need to get in between us during the gath bandhan. Now, don't let me waste your time! Go have fun with your new friend, why are you wasting your time with me!?

He went and sat by one of the vents with his back to her.

Sumo went up and hugged him from behind: Itna ruthe ruthe nehi rehte, Shravan. It is your brother's wedding.



Shravan shrugged her off: You promised this morning that you won't give him the time of day and all evening you sat by him, chatting!

Sumo: You are such a baccha, Shravan. And he just came by to sit and chat about the wedding, what could I do?

Shravan sarcastically: Haan...how could you keep yourself from enjoying his company?

Sumo hugged him again and nuzzled his neck: Shravan, he's not more important than you.

Shravan did not shrug her off this time, now she could tell he was starting to cool down a bit.

Shravan: That is only when you are not in his company. You forget everything when he comes into the scene.

Sumo snuggled closer: I am here, na? Only with you.



Shravan pulled her closer by the waist and kissed her lightly on the forehead: Don't do that again.

Sumo nodded against his shoulder and hugged him. They sat in silence for a little while.

Sumo: We should probably head back, if no one, Chachi will surely notice that we are missing.

Shravan smiled: Don't worry about her.

They sat under the stars for a little longer.

Shravan: I wanted to say earlier that...I really like your sari.

Sumo confused: Since when do you like saris?

Shravan, exasperated: Why are you so clueless? I am not into saris, I like it when you wear them. It's not your usual.

Sumo smiled: Haan, I find it a little too revealing.

Shravan wrapped his arm around her bare waist, teasing: I know, it is amazing.

Sumo was mortified: Shravan!

Shravan was feeling quite frisky, so he did not stop, brushing the back his hand over her bare midriff: You are beautiful.

Sumo could feel the faint tickle of the hair on his arm and could not stop him all the same. This was perfect, this felt right even when it was so wrong. She belonged to this man, she would never let any other man get this close to her. Her breathing grew shallow.

When she turned to looked at him, he locked his lips with her surprised ones and kissed her deeply.



Sumo was the first to pull away, even though she was clinging to him by his sherwani.

She whispered: Shravan...

Shravan: Don't stop me today, Sumo, please...I have waited so long...

He kissed her again.

Sumo said against his lips: So have I...

He placed small kisses around her lips and neck: I love you, I love you so much...bachpan se karta aaya hoon. I can't...I can't pretend to not care any longer.

Sumo pulled his hair, unable to stop herself from crying: Then don't, Shravan. I...love you too. I do. Always have, always will.

Their breathing was heavy as they kissed again passionately, their tears mingling as they held each other close.

Please leave comments, was this risky enough?

Edited by Marybarton - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Hayye hayyye...marjawa..!!!!!!!😳
So sweeet update tha...!!! Good work...!!!! :)
N plzz do Pm me..for ur nxt update...thank u.. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was bind blowing and boggling update. U just nailed it. Every part leaves me devastated. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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No words only dis ☺️🤗
And dis for u 🤗❤️for u amazing writing skill
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Mary...just caught up with this story...as always phenomenal! Its a refreshing change from th show where he can't seem to get beyond his hurt. I hope the story does turn out like this on the show...however...i am doubtful. Looking forward to the next part!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all the parts in one go
Amazing
I loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mary, this is amazing.. Loving this story so much..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww beautiful I read all parts in one go...loved it!

TFS



Love,
Spandana
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5:
Sumo looked deeply into his eyes: I never realized how beautiful your eyes were, they are like a reddish brown and you have enviable lashes.

Shravan rolled his eyes: Beautiful, koi aur word nehi use kar sakti thi?

Sumo: Beautiful hai toh beautiful hi kahungi na? Take a compliment when I give you one, Shravan. Ab don't fight with me.

Shravan: Yes, ma'am (he kissed the palm of her hand).

Sumo: I have to go back.

Shravan pouted: Not yet, I want to live this a little longer. I just had my dream come true (he kissed the vein on her wrist, making her pulse jump).

It took every ounce of her will power to resist him. She knew his father would notice them missing soon. She had thrown caution to the wind and admitted her feelings to Shravan despite his dad's warning, she did not want Ramnath Uncle to find out right away. She had to take her time to find a solution.

Sumo: Shravan please, I am going to get in big trouble.



Shravan pulled her by the back of her neck to him and kissed her again: I had to check that this is real.

Sumo caressed his lapel: Very real. Ab chalo.




Shravan and Sumo walked in separately, but both Pushkar and Aditya could both tell that they were walking on air. Sumo blushed at everything since her return and Shravan even smiled at Aditya as he passed by the guy.

Aditya: Looks like that was a success.

Pushkar and he high-fived.

Preeti: What happened?

Pushkar smirked: What was long overdue, Botiji. Long overdue.

Preeti clasped her hand together: Really? You think they really talked?

Pushkar: Apni behen ko dehkho, everything will make sense.

Preeti looked back and saw Sumo nearly collide into Shravan. They both went bright red, made eyes at each other as they communicated some secret message and went their separate ways.

Preeti: This is the best wedding gift you guys could have given me. Thank you, Pushkar, thank you Aditya!

The boys bowed.




The tearful bidaii happened eventually as Shravan and Sumo played their roles with aplomb. They were sure no one had noticed. Not even Chachi or Mami.

Before they left, Shravan caught her secretly and placed a small gift in her hand: I have been saving this for you throughout these wedding celebrations.

He slipped away before she could say anything.

Sumo later opened the small heart-shaped box to find the most beautiful fabric earrings she had ever seen. There was a also a message attached to it:

"For my free-spirited Sumo."



Sumo sighed. He even noticed that she liked fabric earrings.




Mamaji wiped his tears: This was a great success, beta. Thank you for taking care of everything.

Sumo stopped smiling quickly and shut the box: Of course, Mamaji. Anything for you. And...(Shravan came straight back toward them).

Hiding a naughty glint in his eyes, he said seriously to Mamaji: Uncle, Papa was saying someone from Preeti's family should come with us tonight for her welcome to our home. She will feel better supported this way.

Mamaji: That is such a great idea, Shravan. I will come with you. Just give me a minute.

Shravan's horror made Sumo want to laugh out loud. Mausiji intervened.

Mausi: Nehi Bhaisaab, a woman usually goes, like a sister.

They both looked expectantly at Sumo.

Sumo bid her time: But I have to look after all these wrap up for the wedding, Mausi, why don't you go?

Shravan looked at her in warning.

Mausi: I would, but you know your Mausaji. He is not used to staying alone.

Sumo smirked: Itne saare intezam dekhne hai.

Preeta came in: We will take care of it, Sumo, you don't worry.

Mama: I am sorry, this is a lot of pressure on you Suman bete, you don't have to go if you are tired. Preeti is a big girl, she will be fine.

Sumo: Nehi nehi, I am going. (She looked at Shravan) Chalo Shravan.



Shravan nodded in a mock-grim agreement and led her along.

As soon as they got in the car...



As soon as they were in his car: Kya kar rahi thi waha? Playing with me again? I know very well that you were dying to come along.

Sumo blushed: No, I was not. And don't get any ideas in your head. I am only going for Preeti.

Shravan: Haha, you think I brought you along for Preeti? You are coming for me, Sumanji.

Sumo nervously: You said your Papa asked! He didn't? I don't want to come then...

Shravan: Stop being so literal, of course he asked. I am bringing you along for the fun and games of Preeti's welcome. Now, stop fussing.

Please leave comments and thank you all for the encouragements.

Part 6: http://Part 6: www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4683164&TPN=9
Edited by Marybarton - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
read all in a go. Superb. keep them coming 😊

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