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astonm

@astonm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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sriarshi

@sriarshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

awesome...so hot OS

i expected these types of scenes in serial..but there r less chances of having these ind of scenes...mehendi S i liked it...hope during mehendi she writes S and shravan teasing her...😆

u writen it so well...hope cv's will take some scenes from ur writing...well done..👏

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Season

@Priyodorshee

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Posted: 7 years ago

Wow!
Loved it!!
Thanks for the PM, Anjali

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Deboleena Chakraborty

@Deb_05

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 7 years ago

Woah! Mind-blowing OS!

I love how this piece is greatly descriptive, it really allows the reader to enter this fictional world and actually witness the happenings in such an incredible manner.

I really wish something like this takes place in reality, but chances are not even there, unfortunately.

I read your piece on Oxford and how Shraman were studying there. Another beautiful, beautiful work! Your writing allows me to actually feel like I'm there, with Shraman. It's incredible!

Please PM me whenever you write something new on EDKV. I would love to read them.

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poppinss

@poppinss

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

Wish you could have let shravan kiss sumo abs let the fire works happen!

Amazing work! :)

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travelholic

@travelholic

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

beautiful, may be you should teach the show cvs how to write too!

you are brilliant

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

I totally love your stories...you write very well and your story lines are amazing!😃

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spshastr

@spshastr

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 7 years ago

WOw Mind blowing.. I wish we could see this determined and naughty Shrav.

I dont want him to cry anymore

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Rekha

@rekharv

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Posted: 7 years ago

wow that was awesome. hope you continue further

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

That was crazy hot, thank you...☺️

All your stories have a great sense of realism, and I can imagine the characters acting just so (albeit in situations we prefer over what we're actually getting).

New to the show and forum but wanted to say thanks for all your great writing.

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