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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

This is SO GREAT!

Honestly, this was what I had been expecting after that episode - well, maybe not exactly that, but I'd been hoping for a lot of (for lack of a better phrase) sexually-tense moments between them, where like you mentioned, Shravan uses what she feels against her. Unfortunately, he's remained woefully oblivious...but I really enjoyed this one-shot, from Sumo's thoughts over their dance to that little kitchen scene.

The dance scene in itself was so passionate and beautifully executed, but this little add-on was perfect! How I wish it had actually taken place, but oh well. Anyway, brilliant job! <3 As always, you write their thoughts/dialogue flawlessly and with such meticulously detailed descriptions, the reader feels like they're watching the entire scene play out in their heads.

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

First of all, I am really sorry for commenting so late. Secondly, congratulations on over 100 likes😉

Coming to the OS, Anjali that was so so well written.

I liked Vandy, Preeti and Sumo's bonding. Realy really cute. Esp the way Vandy tells her "Even Mummyji knows" and that their dance was a major giveaway.

The rest of the OS is ☺️

The attraction is quite natural. I had thought we might get such scenes...

CVs had better give us some romance before the show ends😳.

And can I just say it again, Namik and Nikita have such beautiful chemistry that translates so well onscreen and that you captured really nicely!!!

And you Anjali are a Brilliant writer esp cos of the way you capture the emotions of the characters.!!!

Thanks for the PM!!!

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

These are the kind of scenes we expect in the serial..

But what to do, we content reading them from talented writers

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eleutheromania

@eleutheromania

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

This. This is what one would expect when the PreeKar wedding track started. This was so sensual and with the way you wrote this I could see it playing out in front of my eyes.

I love that the "Shravan" got written on her hand and that he saw it. The kitchen scene was so hot and the ending was just perfect. I wish this had happened, but it was a pleasure to read!

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

The gereua days!

The sangeet performance

Lovely shot!😳😳

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