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This is SO GREAT!
Honestly, this was what I had been expecting after that episode - well, maybe not exactly that, but I'd been hoping for a lot of (for lack of a better phrase) sexually-tense moments between them, where like you mentioned, Shravan uses what she feels against her. Unfortunately, he's remained woefully oblivious...but I really enjoyed this one-shot, from Sumo's thoughts over their dance to that little kitchen scene.
The dance scene in itself was so passionate and beautifully executed, but this little add-on was perfect! How I wish it had actually taken place, but oh well. Anyway, brilliant job! <3 As always, you write their thoughts/dialogue flawlessly and with such meticulously detailed descriptions, the reader feels like they're watching the entire scene play out in their heads.
Kumkum Bhagya
