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ekta15

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Posted: 9 years ago

It was mind blowing in real mean. You do have fabulous writing skills. I mean How you give the minute reaction of characters ,minute movements in such a way that any reader can easily get in it forgetting the real world.

I just loved shravan suman pose in the kitchen and the moment spent was just so cute and adorable.

Now i am looking forward to mehendi celebration in the show and I do hope that they do show a scene like this - shravan helping her drink water at least.

thanks for OS

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome, superb,cute,lovely. Beautiful, fabulous..sara kuch... 🤗

Love it ❤️

Thanks for pm dear...

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Ishq-high

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Posted: 9 years ago

oh wow...how i wish this happens in the show too

as always your writing is mesmerising n so good that i can imagine it all happening infront of my eyes

so freaking amazing

thx for pm

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thefangirllife

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Posted: 9 years ago

HOLY SHIT THAT WAS SO AROUSING YET SO INNOCENT LIKE THEY DIDN'T EVEN KISS AND I NEED A COLD SHOWER.

Damn Anjali, can you write a spin-off for the PreeKar wedding filled with sexual tension, PLEASE?

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Fero

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Posted: 9 years ago

Anjali you are amazing
Superb OS

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Susmita M

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello!!
Superb 👏 fantastic!! Dreamy!!!
but want to read more of this story. If you can please do part two. Thank you heaps

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aishwarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

This was mindblowing

loved itt very much😳

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Omg!

Anjali!

You have out done yourself!

This is amazing👏

So haute!

I love this Shravan, why can't the show have exactly this Shravan!

Amazing piece!

Thanks for the PM 🤗

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Sonali

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Posted: 9 years ago

felt like I was watching it all transpire before me great job

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hiral_2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is fab 👏too amazing ❤️ the last part was bliss and the way u described everything..it was perfect ❤️

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