Author's note- updating this one specially for rayaland aka drishti.as she want its updt very soon.hope u all enjoy it.
LAST SHOT
Ishita look at Raman with confused look and asked- Mann.
Raman nodded and showed her the friendship band she tied on his wrist.she hugged him right without waiting for another second.he too hugged her tight.they remain like this for some more time when she remember something.she broke the hug and said hitting him- how dare u say I love u to iti when I love my Mann.u love me as iti not ish naa.I hate u.she said shrugging his hand off.
Raman- ohho baba I was saying I love u to my ish only.coz when I close my eyes all I can see was my chashmish ish.he said kissing her nose.
Ishita- u r fooling me naa.
Raman- u don't believe me.I came here just to tell u that I only love my ish,but u said before me.see I brought something to propose u also.saying so he showed her a ring.letter I was encrypted on it.
Ishita- u r definitely fooling me.I means iti.u don't love me.
Raman- buddhu ,its a band.see all round.
Ishita look at it thoroughly and saw ISHMANN was written on it.she smiled seeing it while Raman said- ab hua yakin.I love u only.
Ishita smiled and said- haan toh.u should tell me naa.aur phir tune I love u toh bola tha.toh I am not totally wrong and whats this .is this ur style of proposing ,propose me in a royal manner then only I will say yes.
Raman come closer and said- u want confession in royal manner.
Ishita - yes.
Raman smiled and said- noone has ever proposed anyone in this manner.saying so he pulled her closer,grabbed her creamy waist in his hold and captured her lips for a full fledged kiss.at first she was shocked with wide eyes but soon she close her eyes and start enjoying the kiss.it was passionate and raw and moreover their first kiss.both were inexperienced in kissing and trying to pleasure each other in best possible manner.lips on lips sucking and biting each other ,lost in each other.at last they break the kiss the in need of air.ishita put her head on his chest.he wounded his arms around her.
Raman- maza aaya naa.mera pehla tha.
Ishita- mera bhi.she said chuckling.
Raman- tu kitni sundar hai ,ish.
Ishita- aur tu kitna handsome Mann.
Raman- tu aise kyun rehti hai.
Ishita- meri amma ke kaaran.aur tu.
Raman- meri maa.after that they narrated their past story each other.
After listening,
Ishita- our story is almost same.I fear what will happen if our mother will not agree for our marriage.
Raman hugged her and said- don't worry ish.we will make them understand. Saying so he kissed her temple ,she close her eyes feeling his touch.
Flashback end
Ishita- u kept ur promise. After all we r together.and our mom themselves made our jodi.just coz u.I love u Mann.
Raman- I love u too ish.let's sleep ,we have to join our office from tomorrow.but I think before that I should love u some more time.saying so he took her lips in his and soon they were busy in enjoying themselves in each other's arms.they slept exhausted of their love making.
It was a month since they came to Paris.everything got in place.they were happy with each other and their jobs.everyday they talk to their parents.everything was going smooth but ishita was feeling guilty for cheating their mothers like this.Raman use to cheer her up and always try to keep her happy.they were lost in their paradise.
One day, in bhalla house.
Toshiji- oye neelu ,jaldi jaldi haath chala.bahut safai karni hai.aur jaa Raman ke room se uski purani kitabein le aa.raddi mein bechni hai.
Neelu nodded and went to Raman's room and bring his books.she was keeping it aside to sell when a pic fell off a book.toshiji picked it up and was throwing thinking it as waste when she saw it and was shocked.
Toshiji- yeh toh Raman hai par yeh kudi kaun hai.I should inform about this to madhu.thinking so she called madhu and told her to reach her house asap.
Madhu entered the house after an hour and saw Toshiji sitting keeping her hand on her head.
Madhu- what happened santoshi.u r looking disturbed.
Toshiji- I am sorry madhu.I am ashamed of my son's deed.he shouldn't have done this.
Madhu- what r u talking about .I am not getting it.
Toshiji showed her the pic and said sorry again.
Madhu was shocked to see this.
Madhu- why u r sorry .I should be sorry.I could never thought my ishu will do something like this.
Toshiji- ishu.is this ishu.
Madhu- yes but I don't know who is this guy.
Toshiji- he is Raman.that means.
Madhu-that means they know each other since long,may be before their marriage.that means ,
they fooled us ,they said in unison.
In Paris,Ishra came from their office.she changed into a hot pant and short top while Raman was just in his trouser having their dinner .ishita was sitting in his lap and was feeding him while he was playing with her long curls and kissing her in between.
That's when their door bell ringed.
Ishita- mann someone is ringing the bell.let me go and check.
Raman- let it be ish.saying so he pulled her closer was kissing her when she pushed him and ran to open the door saying- pakad ke dikhao ,Mann.
Raman went behind her and said- pakad liya ,he said back hugging her while she was all silent.he was shocked why she suddenly become silent opening the door .he raised his head and saw their mothers standing in front of them.
Their face become pale seeing them together.ishita ran to change when Toshiji said- no need for that.we have seen ur original self.
Their mothers come inside and sat on the couch.ishra were looking each other thinking what to say.before they can say anything, Toshiji said- call ur offices,take leave for a week and come to India with us.then we will decide what to do.
Ishra look at each other in shock .
Ishita- we can explain,mummy ji.
Amma- didn't u listen what she said ishu.go and pack ur stuff.
Ishita nodded and went inside.
Toshiji- Raman,go and arrange for our tickets .
Raman nodded and went to arrange for tixs.after four hours all were going to India.amma was sitting with ishita and toshiji was sitting with Raman.they were just looking at each other but couldn't talk.everyone in the plane was sleeping while ishita was sobbing silently.Raman look at her and questioned ,why she is crying.
She answered back,I am scared.
He signalled,don't be.I am with u.smile.and give her a flying kiss.she smiled and kissed him back.
After a long journey ,they reached bhalla house.they entered the house and all settled on the couch.
Raman- maa I can explain.please listen to us once amma.
Amma- u guys loved each other but u fooled us.ab punishment toh milegi hi.
Ishita- amma please.
Toshiji took out an envelope out of her bag and said- this is ur punishment. It was a big envelope.divorce papers was written on it.
Ishra start crying and said- no maa u can't do this to us.
Amma- kyu tum kar sakte hum nahi.
Ishra- hum pyaar karte hai .
Toshiji- woh tum logon ka problem hai.
Raman- I will not leave ishita maa.she is my wife.I can't live my life as per u.aap galat ho maa.
Ishita- Raman mere pati hai.I can't live without him.I love him amma.
Toshiji- u r opening the envelope and signing it or not.
Ishra - no we will not.saying so they were about to torn it when Toshiji said- at least see it once.
Ishra look at each other and opened the big envelope and was surprised.it was a beautiful invitation for their reception.
Ishra were hell confused while their mothers start laughing loud.
Toshiji- only u can chest us.not us.
Amma- iss baar dagabaazi humne ki.
Ishra look at each other and smiled a little.
Raman- iska Matlab aap log gussa nahi.
Toshiji- puttar,we understood that what u did was just because what we did was wrong.
Amma- yes we forced u to do all this.we r sorry kanna.
Ishra smiled and hugged their mothers tight.
Ishra- thanks maa,amma.
Toshiji- agar pehle itne adhikaar se keh diya hota ki hum galat hai toh shayad yeh sab hota hi nahi.but it better to be late then never.maaf kar de puttar.
Raman- aap log bilkul bhi gussa nahi ho.
Toshiji- the but someone make us understand.
Who,ishra askec together.
We,they heard a voice and turn to see their fathers standing there.ishra went and hugged them.after that all settle down.
Toshiji- yes we were so angry.but then ur papa ji and appa made us understand.
Flashback
They fooled us,they said in unison and immediately called their husbands.they reached bhalla house and both the mothers narrated everything. After listening to everything they said.
We know about this.
Toshiji- kya bhalla ji aap jaante the.
Madhu- vishwa tum bhi.
Mr bhalla- yes we know about them loving each other.in fact we r the one who told them to keep it as secret.
Toshiji- par kyun.
Appa- because u people could not see anything in front of ur own insecurity. Ran aur ishita came to us and told us everything. Even they want to tell u people but we stopped them and told them to act as stramgers.
Mr bhalla- and we made circumstances so that both of u can meet and fix marriage of them urself.coz I knew u want a DIL whom Raman can never love ,whom will always listen to u without arguing.trust me ishita waisi hi ladki hai.bas fark itna hai ki Raman usse pyaar karta hai.ishita bahut achchi hai,usse apna lo.kab tak apne bachchon ko dusron ki galti ki saza dogi.
Appa- we have done everything, arranged everything. Ishita and Raman did only as per our instruction.unka ek dusre se nafrat karna,all that was our plan .
Amma- par aisa kyu kiya vishwa.
Appa- kyunki main apni bachchi ko dukhi nahi dekh sakta.apni ek beti kho di hai Maine,dusri nahi kho sakta.
Mr bhalla- we have lost romi in our stubbornness we can't loose Raman.accept them.woh dono ek dusre ke saath bahut khush hai.don't separate them.we can't afford to loose them.
Appa- please madhu.khatam karo yeh sab.ab apne bachchon ko khush rehne do.
Flashback end
Toshiji- ur papa made me understand that how wrong I was .I shouldn't have done this to u puttar.
Raman hugged her and said- its OK maa,I love u.
Amma too hugged ishita and ask for forgiveness. She too hugged her.
Finally all hugged ishra and said- we love u both.
Ishra hugged each other and said looking in each other eyes- we also love u.
EPILOGUE
Toshiji on mic- sorry for throwing this reception party after so long.but its good to be late then never.so here I present my handsome son Raman Kumar bhalla with his beautiful wife,ishita Raman Kumar bhalla.
Everyone clapped and said- bol toh aise rahi hai jaise bahut khoobsurat hai.shakal toh wahi hai.
All were mocking when ishra entered hand in hand and all were shocked to see them ishita was wearing a pink and blue lehenga with beautiful accessories, looking stunning while Raman was wearing a blue sherwani looking equally handsome. All those who r mocking them in marriage where now start complementing them while toshi ji and amma were busy in flaunting their kids and admiring their smiles.all were happy seeing Ishra so happy and contented.
At last ,Mr bhalla invited ishra to shake a leg on stage.they came and start singing and dancing together with a contented smile on their face.
Dagabaaz re haaye,dagabaaz re
Ho tere naina haye
Naina naina naina haye
Dagabaaz re haye, dagabaaz re
Tohre naina bade dagabaaz re
Kal mile, haan kal mile haye
Kal mile phir hamka bhool gaye aaj re
Haye dagabaaz re, haye dagabaaz re
Tohre naina bade dagabaaz re
Dagabaaz, dagabaaz, dagabaaz re
Tohre naina bade dagabaaz re
Kahe khafaa aise Chulbul se bulbul
Kahe na tu maane batiyaan haye
Kahe khafaa aise Chulbul se bulbul
Kahe na tu maane batiyaan haye
Kahe pada peechhe, jaane de bairi
Main jaanoon kya tohri ghatiyaan haye
That's all.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for ur responses.
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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