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awesome...loved it.
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Really nice update. You're doing so well. Thanks for the pm.
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CHAPTER 6

CHAPTER 7

Next day, everyone gets ready to watch the scenery. They travel by bus towards the hill station. Suddenly, the bus breaks down. Everyone gets down. Kashish sees Juhi Chawla taking pictures from the camera in her shooting. Kashish takes Juhi's pictures & the surrounding jungle.

All the collegians with their male & female friends go to different places to have their breakfast. Sujal & Kashish want to spend time alone. So they go deep. They encounter some goons on the way. Sujal fights them. Aamir Khan & Juhi Chawla sees that & helps him to fight them. The goons run away.


Sujal & Kashish thank them for helping.


AK: What are you guys doing here alone?
SG: We have come here for trekking. We came with the college. Our bus broke down.
AK: Shall we go and see now?
SG: Sure.
Aamir-Juhi, Sujal and SK go to that spot where the bus had stopped. They see all others had left for the hill station.
AK: Where you guys want to go now?
SG: We want to to to the hill station.
AK: Don't worry, I will drop you guys.
All 4 of them get into the jeep. They reach the hill station where they rejoin all other college students.
Rishi-Mouli, Varun and Mehek go to Sujal and Kashish. All of them hug.
Rishi: Where were you guys? We were worried about you.
AK: Nothing to worry. They had gone deep into the jungle. The goons attacked them. We saved them and dropped them here.
Rishi: Thanks a lot.
AK: Well, it is my pleasure. When you need any help, just one call away.
He gives them the visiting card. Aamir and Juhi then leave the place and continue their shooting.


The principal books the hotel room for all. Everyone keep their luggages and go for the sight seeing. They visit many places including the Golden Temple.

By the end of the week, everyone pack up their luggages and go back to their hometown.

R & G Mansion then gets a phone call from the principal complaining about Sujal and Kashish who were missing on the way. Vasundara had picked up the call.

She makes and issue saying, "It is all because of Kashish that Sujal has taken such a risk."

Sujal: That is not the fact. We wanted some privacy so we went deep. What is the point in making an issue so big. I don't care about what people and society says. Even if AK had not dropped us, we could have still reached that place.

Vasaudara: Wah! What a pair! You guys are not even married and yet you people are roaming alone. Bin phere hum tere.

Lalit shouts Vasundara and slaps her.

Vasundara: You can slap me and make me quiet. But what about people?

Rishi: Have you not heard what Big B said? We don't care for the society. If you keep your mouth shut, that is enough for us.


CG: Enough guys, I don't want to discuss about this issue. Sujal & Rishi, you all need to keep some distance from your fiancees till you all get married.

Sujal & Rishi: Dad, you too have started? We are studying in the same college & are childhood friends. That is not possible.

Vasundara: I don't think there is love between you people. Except for Piyush, all others have made a wrong choice.

Ritika: I don't think so. They are matured enough to take decisions.

Vasundara: They have to prove that the love between them is true. I think it is a lust.

Sujal: Wasna my foot! Our love is pure.

Vasundara: You have to prove it by not meeting each other for 6 months. If you guys have the same love like now then I will consider.

Sujal, Rishi & Varun: That is not possible. We also study together. It is impossible.

Kashish: Our love is true. We will take this challenge.

Sujal: No Kashish, I know this lady very well. She wants to separate us by hook or crook.

Kashish: That is true but don't you trust your love?

Sujal: I do trust.

Mehek & Mouli agree with Kashish.

They request them to agree to this condition for their sake. The boys reluctantly agree.

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SK got attacked by goons.but Aamir juhi who were shooting there saved them n dropped them 2 d right place.rly feeling nice 2 c aamir Juhi here.they r one of my fav jodies n i miss them.now they cant act 2gether as middle aged heroines r not considered 4 heroes.so seeing them 2gether in ur ff was a treat.Vasu is making a big issue n asked them 2 not c each other 4 6 months 2 prove their luv.tho suja rishi were not willing,Kashish took it as a challenge n the boys also agreed
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wow great update loved it thank you for pm.
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Nice Part.😊
The Whole Part was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Nice update waiting for next part...
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CHAPTER 7

CHAPTER 8

Rishi & Varun disagree with Vasundhara's condition whereas, Sujal reluctantly agrees. He had agreed only on Kashish's insistence.

He goes to Kashish & said, "We both know that our love is true. Do we really have to prove it? Our parents too don't have any objection in our relationship. Why do you take Vasu Aunty's words so seriously?"

Rishi: Big B is right. Do you think she will be convinced if both of you implement to this condition? She will think of some other plan to separate you guys.

Mouli: I agree with Rishi & Sujal. Please for my sake don't do this.

Mehek: Di, I know that you & Sujal bro are clean. You had told us not to get afraid of anyone & anything. Don't do this to yourself.

Varun: Chill guys. I know what to do.

Rishi too gets an idea. He calls Varun & Aman to his room.

Rishi: Kashish won't agree like that. We have to do something to bring Big B & Kashish together.

Aman: But how will you do that?

Rishi: Nothing is impossible for Rishi Garewal.

Varun: But what are you going to do?

Rishi: Just wait n see. But will you support me in this plan?

Aman: Yeh bhi kya kehne ki baat hain?

Varun: By all means.

Sujal & Kashish miss each other a lot. Though they are in the same college & same class, they do not talk to each other. But are very sad. It is Sujal's lecture. All are eager to hear his lecture.

One of the students name is Nandini who is a sports fan. She is a fitness freak. She is attractive, beautiful, smart & intelligent but is madly in love with a tennis player named Stefan Edberg knowing that chances are very much remote & almost impossible to get him as he has a girl friend named Annette Olsen. She does not have any means to reach him as she does not have a passport nor does she have money to pay for the flight tickets. She does not even know his address but dreams about him when she is free as she is confident that even if he meets her even once, he will forget his girlfriend marry her irrespective of her colour & nationality.

Most of the students have boyfriends & girlfriends who are very much depressed. Sujal too is lost in Kashish's thoughts. He then gives a break to the class to make it interactive.

Sujal: Guys, we will play a small game.

All are excited & said, "Yaay."

Sujal: Pull your chairs & make a circle.

Everyone does that. He then says, now you guys have to pass on the ball to each other. Whoever does not pass on the ball before time, they have to tell about their feelings. Everyone agrees. He then calls the refree to conduct the game. The game starts. Everyone passes the ball to each other. Whoever is not able to pass the ball before the bell tells about their feelings about their love. It is Nandini's turn & is tensed about winning so that she can get away but then realizes that she does not have a boyfriend & whoever she has in her mind is imaginary.

The ball comes to one of the students name Kittu. He openly said,"I LOVE MALLIKA. She is killing me."

Everyone laughs.

Sujal: How do you say she is killing you.

Kittu: Her dimple is mesmerising. Her smiles are too sweet. She is very sexy & beautiful. I can't live without her but I don't know whether I will get her or not.

Sujal: You should not lose hope. You need to try till the end. If your love is true everything is possible.

Kittu: I love her. I want to go to her house & woo her somehow.

Sujal: That's the spirit.

Nandini is back to her Edberg mode. She then thinks, "The best way to catch him will be at the tennis stadium. But how will I go? No I cannot let it go. I need to do something to arrange for everything. I need to take up such a job wherein I can balance my studies & sports & at the same time earn enough to meet my destination fast. But whatever has to be done, it has to be done very quickly. I cannot waste time."

They resume with the game. It is Sujal's turn. He reveals about Kashish being his long time girl friend. Nandini wins the game. She reveals that it is imaginery. I don't have a boyfriend.

Kittu then thinks, "Yes, I have got a friend with whom I can share my feelings."

Sujal: Fine, now we have one more period.

At the break time

He goes to Nandini with yellow rose & said, "Why don't we become friends?"

Nandini: Yes, why not but don't give me the rose as it will fade in a day or two.

Kittu thinks & says, "Yes, you are right."

Kittu: I have openly declared about Mallika. You should have revealed about your feelings.

Nandini: If I tell, everyone will make fun of me.

Kittu: No one will make fun of you. You can confide in me.

Nandini: It is Stefan Edberg but I doubt know whether I will get him. He is hot & handsome. He is also a perfect gentleman but he has a girl friend. I want to reach to him before it gets late but don't know how.

Kittu: Yes, even I have the same problem but we need to find the remedy for these. But yours is complicated as you have to travel abroad. Your first hurdle will be your family. They should allow you. But don't worry, I'm there for you.

Nandini: In what way you can help & why will you help?

Kittu: We are friends. If friends don't help, who will? I have an idea. We can take up a job which will help us to balance everything & we can serve our purpose. Why don't we talk to Sujal Sir, he will definitely help us. He can get us a job.

Both go to Sujal saying, "I need a job."

Sujal is taken aback but asks, "What kind of job are you looking for?"

Kittu & Nandini: Any job which pays us well & does not affect our routine.

Sujal: Fine, I can help you. Your studies & extra activities are my responsibility from now on.

He then gives them his visiting card & tells them to meet him at his office.

After the college hours, Sujal & Kashish look at each other but are hesitant.

Rishi & Aman hatch a plan to fake an accident which will make Kashish to come.

CHAPTER 9

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago

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