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Posted: 9 years ago
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LINK TO CHAPTER 13

CHAPTER 14

Kashish tries to escape from there but the rope is too tight for her. She tries to loosen them so that she can escape & be on time for the wedding.

At the wedding hall, everyone assumes that it is Kashish & shower their blessings to her. Vasundhara smirks.

Sanjana trips to her saree & is about to fall. However, Rashi holds her. While doing that, he sees the shadow & gets the doubt whether the bride is Kashish. Vasundhara takes her to the room to set her saree right. Rishi is suspiscious as to why Vasundhara is dressing up Kashish. He peeps in the room & takes Vasundhara & Sanjana's photo from his mobile. He copies it to his laptop & connects it with the projector to show it to all.

Vasundhara brings Sanjana down to the mandap. As soon as she sits there, lights go off suddenly. Rishi shows the videos & pictures showing that the bride is Sanjana & not Kashish.

Seeing this, Sujal unveils the bride & finds that she is Sanjana.

He shouts, "Why have you come here? Where is Kashish?"
Sanjana: I'm sorry. But I love you & want to marry you. It is late now.
Sujal: I don't care about mahurat & no mahurat can be good without Kashish.
He get up from the mandap & goes in search of Kashish.


Rishi too accompanies Sujal. Both go & lodge a complaint at the police station.

Chetan & Veena are annoyed with Vasundara. CG goes to Lalit & said, "I know that you are a good friend of mine but I'm afraid that we won't be able to stay together anymore as Vasu is creating problems for us.

Lalit: I understand. We will take whatever belongs to us but we will remain good friends. I apologize to you on behalf of Vasu.

Both go to the advocate to do the needful. CG & Lalit hug each other.


Vasundhara calls Swayam & said, "Our plans got foiled. Everyone got to know that Sanjana tried to take the bride's place."

Swayam: How did it happen?
Vasundhara narrated all that had happened.
Swayam: S**t our plans are foiled. We have to plan something else.
Lalit overhears the conversation.
He said, "There is a good & bad news for you."
Vasundhara: What?
Lalit: Good news is that our house & business is divided.
Vasundhara is happy.
Lalit gives her 2 tight slaps & further said: But you won't get a single pie from me. You have to fend for yourself from now on. I've told you not to interfere in Sujal's & Kashish's life but you have not changed.
Vasundhara: I did this for our daughter. Sanjana loves Sujal & I feel she is right for Sujal.
Lalit: Enough, Sujal is capable to decide who is the right partner for him. You've crossed all your limits. From now on there is no relationship between us.

He then call up Sujal & informs him about Kashish's kidnap.

Sujal & Rishi meets Akshat. All 3 of them hatch a plan. Akshat plans to allow Sujal & Rishi to kidnap him.

Both of them tie him up. Sujal calls Swayam & said, "Your brother is kidnapped."
Swayam: I don't believe it.
They give the phone to Akshat who confirms to Swayam that he got kidnapped.
Rishi: And if you complain to the police, Akshat will be no more. If you want Akshat, you have to bring Kashish before Big B.

Swayam agrees.

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
The Whole Conversations were so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! fantastic update dear...loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
hats of 2 rishi 4 exposing vasu n sanjana.lalit broke his ties with vasu.now sujal akshat n rishi r trying 2 trap swayam 2 save kashish.hope they succeed
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow excellent update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one
So glad rishi spotted sanjana n exposed her n vas
Now they've got the ultimate punishment with lilta disown in them
Also glad to see akshat helping sujal to get kashish back by offering trade
Just hope nothing backfires n he gets her back safely n in time for their wedding
Thanks for pm N plz keep em comin

Edited by Heatsha8176 - 9 years ago
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Amazing dear
Thanks for the pm dear
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Fantastic update, loved it.
Thanks for the PM dear.

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