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Originally posted by: aditiraher

Read everything again...its one of my favourite... But I don't know why I am not liking this khushi at all..I never felt her stubborn or admant nature ...she is too submissive...I literally felt her hurt , anger , humiliation even love which she undergone in this journey... Its not that I want to blame arnav or khushi either..I don't agree that circumstances cause problems in their marriage. But..I do agree that both are at faults...but still I will put major share of it on ASR...neither I am agree with khushi's professional decision she took just to save her marriage.. I felt while reading this Story thatmaybe khushi loved her husband...to put her self respect aside to save her marriage...but I never felt arnav truly loved her ...his actions, his words didnt show his love either...exceptions only physical intimacy...a woman needs more ...its not always about sex or desire.they are momentary and not a strong base to build a long term relationship...its however hard to feel the desire in reality for the man who hurt u the most..or who couldn't value u...pregnacy harmones cant erase that pain...khushi was the one who suffered the most in their marriage...I mean its very difficult to accept and love , trust a man who is divorcee and has a kid from his ex..it doesn't matter that divorcee is ASR or not...I won't like to see a journey from secretary to asr's wife as only achievement of khushi ...it would have been better to see her on her own ...in the last chapters I am not pleased with ASR at all...his apology is too insufficient for the damage he did to their marriage...in reality its very difficult to find such a calm and understanding woman who will easily forgive and forget...in love marriage...not possible...maybe that's why divorces happen in real world...I wanted to comment this because jagruti all ur stories are very unique and most importantly they are close to reality..a simple language u use to write does magic in the story...as it is ending, I thought of sharing my view...though ASR is trying to change for the better...i would have loved to see his realisation of his mistakes in his way...as khushi's pregnancy and his ex wife's remark are the turning points in their relationship without which other adverse events would have happened causing thecfurther damage ...that's what put arnav at low in my view...maybe that's what necessary to turn the story...I would have loved to see khushi as a strong , firm, independent woman whose love for her loved ones would be her strength and not her weakness which would compel her to compromise with her self worth...I mean ASR couldn't change a single business decision for her but he easily expect her to bend for him leaving her dreams...would arnav do the same for khushi in we reverse the situation?? Would he do the same if khushi was divorcee with a kid fighting for a custody battle..would he leave his everything for her?? Or even in the present situation would he do the same for khushi if it was required?? I guess ..no..

I have no intention to offend u dear writer..maybe its the power and success of your writing that made me speak my hurt...I have read lessons in love , misconstrued, maid mistress and Mrs ..and now this...I wish u write an another story of arshi where khushi would be different from her previous versions

I would be waiting for the last chapter...

Originally posted by: tinken

you are a fantastic writer!

Originally posted by: Savera84

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000">Jagruti,</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000">This is the first time I have come across your stories (I think😊) and guess what, now I can not wait to read the rest of your stories.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000">In Bitter Sweet andacquiredtaste I just read the first 2 chapters during my breaks at work and eagerly waiting to go home and read the rest.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000">Very well written.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000">Thank you forchoosingto write Arhi stories.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000">Cheers...</font>

Originally posted by: Pdrover

Awesome story