**NiBir os- pains of love**

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vaishnavi

@crazyvaishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
it was superb
plz update soon..
it shud b a happy end..

thank you shruti
I will try to update soon

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vaishnavi

@crazyvaishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani
Ye os ni hosakta...I want next part too 😳
Bravo Vaishu all the 3POvS r superbly written.
Lovely one

thank you needa

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vaishnavi

@crazyvaishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani
Sach me dard Tha...
Pyaar Ka dard
😔

😳

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vaishnavi

@crazyvaishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: itznimi003
Vaissy it is superb mindblowing 👏 👏
the way u presented the POV of trio was fabulous... 👏 👏 loved d use of words...and u always describe the bg amazingly yr... 😊
The pain kabir was feeling on seeing the other side of bed was written beautifully 👏 👏
And the pain...he felt wen he saw dat news of getting married of niraj was mind blowing...
Mai azaad panchi hu 3 mahine baad udd jaungi

@blue pata nhi is line me kya extra effect h hmesha aansu le aati h aankho me... 😭
Loved d way u describe the feelings emptiness n helplessness of nisha... 👏
Really touching and viraj's POV was written awesomly... 👏

Plz vaissy isko TS bna de yr...

Loved it ❤️ rula dia tune 😭

awww thank you so much niju 🤗
I vl try

Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago