**NiBir os- pains of love**

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Shats

@Shats

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Beautifully wtitten vaishu. 🥺
Nibir 🥺 🥺
Luved each one's POV 🥺
But thankfully dis time viraj will bring dm together 😳

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Nice os 👏
Please if you can write second part so please do write

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ashveena

@Ashveena.

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Awesome vaishu 👏
Loved it itna Sara ❤️ 😳

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Anmol

@Anmol333

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

It was amazing..

But please make it ts please at least I want a proper end of this.. Please make this ts

Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago

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poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

All the pov's were so good ... please write next part also ... waiting to read it ... 😊

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awsome os
beautifully written trio emotions
hope so this end with happy ending
loved it

thnks for pm

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Nice OS ...!!!
Loved It ...!!!

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vaishnavi

@crazyvaishu

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..
res
unres!😳

jiju...😳🤗🤗

kabir, nisha and viraj ke POVs were amazingly written!😳👏

how much kabir loves nisha😳but thinks that nisha loves viraj😭
how much nisha loves kabir😳but doesn't want to intrude between him and his dreams!😭
and viraj knows nisha doesn't love him but is marrying him just for forgetting kabir😭😭
now, viraj will play the role of cupid!😳😃😃
but ye OS kaise hua?
i want another part!😳
do update soon!😃

baba pehli baar aapne meri kisi story pe comment kiya h let me dance first
yeh os kaise h mujhe bhi nhi pata 😆 I vl try to write another part as well
thank you sooo much 😳

Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago