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vaishnavi

@crazyvaishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: anu012
Awsome os
beautifully written trio emotions
hope so this end with happy ending
loved it

thnks for pm

thank you anu 😊

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Very nice😊
But ek aur part dedo😉

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vaishnavi

@crazyvaishu

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98
Very nice😊
But ek aur part dedo😉

thanks roo I vl try

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

ahhh i am confused

yhi end tha

second part do plz

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shrutigaur37

@shrutigaur37

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

it was superb
plz update soon..
it shud b a happy end..

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Ye os ni hosakta...I want next part too 😳

Bravo Vaishu all the 3POvS r superbly written.

Lovely one

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Sach me dard Tha...

Pyaar Ka dard

😔

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Vaissy it is superb mindblowing 👏 👏
the way u presented the POV of trio was fabulous... 👏 👏 loved d use of words...and u always describe the bg amazingly yr... 😊
The pain kabir was feeling on seeing the other side of bed was written beautifully 👏 👏
And the pain...he felt wen he saw dat news of getting married of niraj was mind blowing...
Mai azaad panchi hu 3 mahine baad udd jaungi

@blue pata nhi is line me kya extra effect h hmesha aansu le aati h aankho me... 😭
Loved d way u describe the feelings emptiness n helplessness of nisha... 👏
Really touching and viraj's POV was written awesomly... 👏

Plz vaissy isko TS bna de yr...

Loved it ❤️ rula dia tune 😭