CID Written update - 18 June 2016 : Killer Bus

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Posted: 9 years ago
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In a house:

A man (Shan) is seen playing with a remote controlled bus toy and the owner of house (Malati) barges in. She accuses Shan for some illegal activities in her house, and proceeds to check rooms. She finds something fishy and Shan attacks her and kills her.

In front of an office:

A group of employees wait for the bus to reach the conference. A lady named Charu is upset over Rushali who is leading team. It's shown that Rushali was responsible for Charu's demotion and also Rushali cheated on Charu and got Charu's house. Charu pledges to avenge.

Bus arrives but Rushali notes it's different one than promised. Shan is shown getting down the bus. Rushali warns Shan that she is watching him. It is shown that Rushali and Shan have a fight over Rushali blaming Shan on some conspiracy he was planning but has not got any proofs yet. Shan wants to avenge as well.

Everyone get into bus but Rushali waits for her boyfriend Jatin. They have niceties and Rushali leaves. It is shown that Rushali lodged a false domestic (?😕) violence complaint on Jatin when he refused to marry her. Jatin assures that Rushali would never come alive and follows bus in his car.

At dhaba:

Everyone is eating food. Jatin tries to shoot Rushali but misses target. Both Shan and Charu keep eye on Rushali. When Rushali goes to wash room, Charu follows her and worker (Vindya) observes this.

CID arrives and it is reported that a dead body was found in store room by a worker (Madan). Upon removing obstacles, CID team finds dead body of Rushali stabbed to death. Purvi checks the dead body and finds a button that doesn't belong to Rushali near the body. ACP sir and Daya question the Dhaba workers. They identify body to be madam who came to have food a while ago. They inform that this madam went missing and team looked for her for a while and moved as they had some other commitment. Upon further questioning Vindya reveals that she has seen a lady following Rushali to wash room, a man with beard escaping in car. Shreya checks wash room and finds a tissue with lipstick mars that don't match Rushali's lipstick. Daya obtains bus number and description from Dhaba workers and alerts all police ahead of the bus route.

On road:

Driver asks for route and Shan stops bus to have call with someone to find route as only Rushali knew route. Team discusses on strange disappearance of Rushali. Bus stops and Shan tells someone that he cannot delay more than 20 minutes to someone. Meanwhile a traffic police spots bus and gives a call to Daya and obtains instructions to stop bus for a while. Traffic police comes and stops bus for a while until he gets call to let bus go. Once bus starts Purvi in disguise pretends as she was hit by bus. Other CID team ( Daya, Pankaj, Shreya) join her in disguise and make a scene. (A totally non sense disguise scene cooked up, there is no need for disguise as such. Cops could come over and take situation to control). They demand that team should allow them to travel in bus. Team agrees so time is not wasted. In bus, they learn that the team is going for world peace conference ( lo koi bomb blast hoga, terrorist attack jaisa 😛). Shreya starts distributing some visiting cards for the dance group they are disguised as and notices that the button found next to Rushali's dead body belongs to Charu. She even notices that lipstic is matching with mark obtained from wash room. Purvi who was tracking bus through GPS on tablet, notifies Daya that bus is taking wrong route. Daya makes noise and starts shouting that bus is on wrong route. Driver doesn't pay attention and before CID could do something Shan barges with gun and threatens everyone. He releases a smoke bomb making all unconscious.

At a deserted place:

All bus passengers along with CID team is seen lying on the floor unconscious ( That's why they should be carrying a smoke protector with them rather than disguise clothes. For heaven's sake they are cops not drama company 😛). Shan's men enter the bus acting like employees and bus takes off. Daya gets conscious and notices that bus has left.

At conference:

Shan and his men break fire in conference against security and guests. CID team come there (running 😲🤣 lo aaj kal yahi exercise hi )and takes situation under control and arrest Shan.

In CID bureau:

CID team questions Shan, Charu, Jatin, Vindya and Madan about Rushali's murder. It is shown that Madan stole watch from Rushali's dead body that Daya recovered. There is a set of finger prints obtained from watch and back of bus that belong to killer and killer is announced to be Jatin. (well Jatin is her boyfriend and came to meet her at office with bus, so he can have his finger print on bus and watch, I have no clue how ACP Pradyuman and team will prove anything against Jatin 😕). Jatin confesses his crime.

The come back was not worth the wait we had.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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episode was sans interest😕
quite confusing and umm... not liked the story🥱🥱

tfs MAO😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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edited WU to highlight comments , this formatting was not happening from my laptop for some reason.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Kousar, Bakwas epi tha seriously 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mistic_Morning

episode was sans interest😕
quite confusing and umm... not liked the story🥱🥱

tfs MAO😃


The only good part was I watched once and wrote entire WU in one go and filled in few names after re-watching a scene or so. There was nothing worth watching carefully and going back to scene to give perfect WU 😛😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for reading Haffoo 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the WU.😃
I felt sleepy at the bakwaas case what i got and still couldn't complete my WU yet🥱
Hats off to u😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AS-Rifi

Thanks for the WU.😃

I felt sleepy at the bakwaas case what i got and still couldn't complete my WU yet🥱
Hats off to u😆


one more bakwas WU cooking up now... Thanks for reading WU. It was pretty boring episode not worth the wait. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluetides


one more bakwas WU cooking up now... Thanks for reading WU. It was pretty boring episode not worth the wait. 😛

yeah😆
btw..just think how i bear this epi when there was no sign of Abhijeet also😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluetides


The only good part was I watched once and wrote entire WU in one go and filled in few names after re-watching a scene or so. There was nothing worth watching carefully and going back to scene to give perfect WU 😛😆



seriously🤢
writers of FW should go for a vacation to freshen up their minds😆😆

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